for Rabbits and Hatters12/6/2010 c4 RaegyStorm
I love this story! You need to update soon! XD I think Alice should hide Break's sweets! :3
I love this story! You need to update soon! XD I think Alice should hide Break's sweets! :3
10/17/2010 c4 iXheartXrecX75
Hello again! So I think for Alice's prank on Break maybe first send Break off on a mission for a while. Then while he's gone, ALice could get rid of all the candies in the house and the neighboring villages (somehow) and when Break gets back, they're all gone. But Alice will have 1 lollipop and while Break is frantically searching for candy and she'll slowly unwrap it and start to lick it. Then...BreakXAlice moment! He could wrestle her for it and then you, the all powerful author, could make something *wink* happen between them. Or you could ignore this fangirl and just write your awesome story! Can't wait for your next chapter!
~ Iris
Hello again! So I think for Alice's prank on Break maybe first send Break off on a mission for a while. Then while he's gone, ALice could get rid of all the candies in the house and the neighboring villages (somehow) and when Break gets back, they're all gone. But Alice will have 1 lollipop and while Break is frantically searching for candy and she'll slowly unwrap it and start to lick it. Then...BreakXAlice moment! He could wrestle her for it and then you, the all powerful author, could make something *wink* happen between them. Or you could ignore this fangirl and just write your awesome story! Can't wait for your next chapter!
~ Iris
9/3/2010 c4 
19Ozuchi-Kozuchi
Hehe, you gotta love Break. Great story, hope you post more chapters. ^^
19Ozuchi-KozuchiHehe, you gotta love Break. Great story, hope you post more chapters. ^^
6/7/2010 c4 5PlatinaBirds
A win for Break :DDD Poor ALice, she had a bad breath, XD Break is so bad x3 Keep it up! Hope you update soon! :DD
5PlatinaBirdsA win for Break :DDD Poor ALice, she had a bad breath, XD Break is so bad x3 Keep it up! Hope you update soon! :DD
5/6/2010 c2 3GreenEyedNeko
poor Emily...no! actually I always kind of hated Emily so GO GO ALICE! XDD poor Oz though XD how about Gil being the new helper of Break? I mean Gil always fights with Alice anyway XD but even so, Alice can have Gil as long as she has Oz..so yeah...XD
3GreenEyedNekopoor Emily...no! actually I always kind of hated Emily so GO GO ALICE! XDD poor Oz though XD how about Gil being the new helper of Break? I mean Gil always fights with Alice anyway XD but even so, Alice can have Gil as long as she has Oz..so yeah...XD
5/5/2010 c1 GreenEyedNeko
XD I laughed my head off XDD *still laughing* poor Alice, she got tricked. well the one that she could use as her helper next maybe can be Oz...after threatening him that is *_* XD
XD I laughed my head off XDD *still laughing* poor Alice, she got tricked. well the one that she could use as her helper next maybe can be Oz...after threatening him that is *_* XD
5/5/2010 c1 22Tomoshibi-Chan
Sequel! *tackles* Woo~
More awesome writing, Lady. Just as brilliant as the original. Well, I cant wait for more so please update soon.
22Tomoshibi-ChanSequel! *tackles* Woo~
More awesome writing, Lady. Just as brilliant as the original. Well, I cant wait for more so please update soon.