for High School Confidential5/7 c36 dreamzuvedward
I wondered about that, if your mother reads the lemons! And I need to rectify a lamentable deficiency in my review of the previous chapter, so here goes: Take THAT-Mike Douchebag Newton! I really hope you take a hell of a beating and more while you languish in prison!
Phew, so glad I got that off my chest.
I wondered about that, if your mother reads the lemons! And I need to rectify a lamentable deficiency in my review of the previous chapter, so here goes: Take THAT-Mike Douchebag Newton! I really hope you take a hell of a beating and more while you languish in prison!
Phew, so glad I got that off my chest.
5/7 c34 dreamzuvedward
Haha, your A/N says no mothers were made mad with this chapter but what the heck? I totally blubbered through the entire thing until the horrifying end, are the police really looking for her?!
Haha, your A/N says no mothers were made mad with this chapter but what the heck? I totally blubbered through the entire thing until the horrifying end, are the police really looking for her?!
5/7 c33 dreamzuvedward
Please pardon the cussing but Holy Sh*t! HOLY. SH_T. You write the most amazing angst EVER! I like to think of myself as an intelligent woman with a large enough vocabulary to not have to rely on crass curse words to get my point across but HOLY F_CKING SH*T these last few chapters BLEW me away! I'm with Edward where my chest was split open and my heart fell out on the ground. I must admit that I didn't particularly like the beginning premise of this story, some of the events rubbed me the wrong way and Edward ticked me off a few times but I am so happy I stuck with this. This story, your writing, and especially your characterization is d mn beautiful. In looking back on Edward's actions he was so right, I just didn't see it before. I didn't understand why Bella so easily acquiesced to him (when he replaced her as J's counselor), I thought she was letting his pretty face and caveman actions sway her but I no longer feel that way. And how I so deeply love Jake, Seth, and Leah! Edward's POV of the meeting had my heart clenched in a vice! He loves Bella so, so much. And Bella, with her incomparable selflessness, how I felt it reach out to me from your words, how much she loves those kids.
Your writing is fiercely and utterly beautiful, NEVER stop!
Now on to the end...
Please pardon the cussing but Holy Sh*t! HOLY. SH_T. You write the most amazing angst EVER! I like to think of myself as an intelligent woman with a large enough vocabulary to not have to rely on crass curse words to get my point across but HOLY F_CKING SH*T these last few chapters BLEW me away! I'm with Edward where my chest was split open and my heart fell out on the ground. I must admit that I didn't particularly like the beginning premise of this story, some of the events rubbed me the wrong way and Edward ticked me off a few times but I am so happy I stuck with this. This story, your writing, and especially your characterization is d mn beautiful. In looking back on Edward's actions he was so right, I just didn't see it before. I didn't understand why Bella so easily acquiesced to him (when he replaced her as J's counselor), I thought she was letting his pretty face and caveman actions sway her but I no longer feel that way. And how I so deeply love Jake, Seth, and Leah! Edward's POV of the meeting had my heart clenched in a vice! He loves Bella so, so much. And Bella, with her incomparable selflessness, how I felt it reach out to me from your words, how much she loves those kids.
Your writing is fiercely and utterly beautiful, NEVER stop!
Now on to the end...
5/3 c38 Chicsarah
I loved this story. It was so well written. I loved the epilogue. Thanks for sharing!
I loved this story. It was so well written. I loved the epilogue. Thanks for sharing!
4/30 c21 Chicsarah
Perfect resolution. Can't wait to find out how things play out about Bella and Jacob
Perfect resolution. Can't wait to find out how things play out about Bella and Jacob
4/29 c14 Chicsarah
I seriously can't tell you how much I love this story. I can't wait to see what Edward says about his little revelation!
I seriously can't tell you how much I love this story. I can't wait to see what Edward says about his little revelation!