for The Dark Days To Come5/25/2010 c3
8Slayer Anderson
Okay, first off I can't believe no one's reviewed this story. The plot is completely insane...Li a force for...well 'good,' Daria a force for 'evil.'
Your storytelling is a little simplistic, but overall I really like it. Try to add a little more characterization and description and this fic would be awesome. Otherwise, I'd like to just say how much I appreciate a little originality now and then. And you, my friend, have it in spades.
8Slayer AndersonOkay, first off I can't believe no one's reviewed this story. The plot is completely insane...Li a force for...well 'good,' Daria a force for 'evil.'
Your storytelling is a little simplistic, but overall I really like it. Try to add a little more characterization and description and this fic would be awesome. Otherwise, I'd like to just say how much I appreciate a little originality now and then. And you, my friend, have it in spades.
