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11/9/2010 c1 JJ
Really cute! Creddie rules!
10/31/2010 c1 misskress
Awwww! This was so cute! And I'm a seddie shipper! Keep writing!
8/29/2010 c1 4SorrisoD'amore
Awww! That was adorable please continue to write in the future:)
6/4/2010 c1 24Owl Emporium
This was os sweet! Ahh! It was great. (: I loved it, loved it, loved it. :D Great job. (:
6/3/2010 c1 1TooGingerForAName
Great story!
5/19/2010 c1 bLoo21
Nice! and the song is perfect for the story!

moo0o0o0o0o0o0orRrRee!
5/19/2010 c1 13iCarlyFanFreek825
Your writing just gets better and better with everything new you post. It's writers like you that inspire and set goals for others :) You are an amazing writer and this beautiful story represented your skills so well :D You rock!
5/13/2010 c1 26Snapplelinz
Oh wow, I'm officially in love with this story, purpleheart10. It broke my heart reading the part at the talent show when Carly's crying on stage while declaring her love for Freddie through her song, so frickin' sweet. Rascal Flatts for the win, I love their music. I'm so glad that Freddie waited for Carly to come home so that he could tell her that he broke up with his girlfriend.

My favourite quote was: "She's special and you're right. She doesn't deserve it. But you're the one I love. Call me a jerk but I'd rather have anyone hurt but you. You're the last person I want to see suffering."

Gah, I was actually pumping my fist silently throughout this story, just a testiment of how awesome your story is. Major props, you beauty : )
5/13/2010 c1 9anquhluh
I thought the fluffy ending balanced perfectly with the angsty beginning. Great job and good luck!
5/12/2010 c1 wannabe1980
Well, I think this should definitely be eligible for the challenge. I really love this story. It's sad, and sweet, and satisfying! Great job!
5/12/2010 c1 sam
can plz update the pact plz
5/12/2010 c1 3exceptiontotherules
*sniffles* *holds breath* *smiles*

Awesome =D
5/12/2010 c1 2Creddieforever
AWESOME STORY! I like this a lot, incase you couldn't tell. A few grammatical errors is all I could find wrong, but thats just my nitpicking.

p.s. Do you know when your next chapter for the pact will be online?

-creddieforever-
5/12/2010 c1 46sockstar
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that was so cute :D
5/12/2010 c1 5Carl Rahl
That was awesome this contest is is bring great stuff out of everyone.
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