for Daybreak10/4/2011 c1 e
I remember reading this last year before work. It is a great beginning and I am somewhat disappointed that it has not been updated. Hopefully, you guys will get back to this and finish it.
P.S. I am fine with Yaio, though I prefer that it is not love at first sight and it is a friendship that develops into more eventually.
I remember reading this last year before work. It is a great beginning and I am somewhat disappointed that it has not been updated. Hopefully, you guys will get back to this and finish it.
P.S. I am fine with Yaio, though I prefer that it is not love at first sight and it is a friendship that develops into more eventually.
12/12/2010 c1 Commentor
Good start.
Plz update
Good start.
Plz update
10/5/2010 c1 Ragnarok
Sorry but yaoi is not my thing
@someone below me
Too late,if you read it carefully its already a yaoi
Sorry but yaoi is not my thing
@someone below me
Too late,if you read it carefully its already a yaoi
9/25/2010 c1 
5Double-DecaKiva-DenBlades
interesting story,i'll wait till next update
BUT
no yaoi please...
5Double-DecaKiva-DenBladesinteresting story,i'll wait till next update
BUT
no yaoi please...
6/14/2010 c1 25Yuhi Sakura
Interesting! I didn't expect to like this story when I first clicked on it, but I'm really happy I did! You had an engaging prologue, and I love your characterization; they were kept very recognizable despite the slightly AU timeline you-brilliantly, I might say-crafted for them to fit in. And your story had a definite flow in the organization. I can't wait for you to bring out some more! And, about the time issue, well, you know, good work takes time! Don't rush it and I'll be waiting!
25Yuhi SakuraInteresting! I didn't expect to like this story when I first clicked on it, but I'm really happy I did! You had an engaging prologue, and I love your characterization; they were kept very recognizable despite the slightly AU timeline you-brilliantly, I might say-crafted for them to fit in. And your story had a definite flow in the organization. I can't wait for you to bring out some more! And, about the time issue, well, you know, good work takes time! Don't rush it and I'll be waiting!