for Resonance3/4 c27 Guest
I loved the whole story!
I never saw the Godzilla series, but I'm glad I took the time to read all of the story!
It was lovely!
Thanks for the awesome writing!
I loved the whole story!
I never saw the Godzilla series, but I'm glad I took the time to read all of the story!
It was lovely!
Thanks for the awesome writing!
11/17/2012 c27 Mandy
WOW! That's so brilliant!
I was yelling "Oh **" in many chapters, in others I'm in anxiety.
Your fic is GREAT, really amazing.
You write very well, and make a perfect storyline. So much thing happen in a instant and the reader is floating on drama, action and kind of pure empath metaphysic.
Yeah, I'm reading this for tow days and I'm glad for the perfect end.
Well, I see a promising author and a beautiful fic.
Congratulations!
keep writing. Do not stop writing. Never!
Mandy
PS- Yeah, you finish this long time ago, but i really, really wanna say everything I write here.
PS2- Sorry grammatical mistakes, I'm just a Brazillian fan of well-written story.
WOW! That's so brilliant!
I was yelling "Oh **" in many chapters, in others I'm in anxiety.
Your fic is GREAT, really amazing.
You write very well, and make a perfect storyline. So much thing happen in a instant and the reader is floating on drama, action and kind of pure empath metaphysic.
Yeah, I'm reading this for tow days and I'm glad for the perfect end.
Well, I see a promising author and a beautiful fic.
Congratulations!
keep writing. Do not stop writing. Never!
Mandy
PS- Yeah, you finish this long time ago, but i really, really wanna say everything I write here.
PS2- Sorry grammatical mistakes, I'm just a Brazillian fan of well-written story.
10/26/2012 c27
7NixKat
Nice! Loved it. I was a little confused by the flashback but other than that it was perfect.
7NixKatNice! Loved it. I was a little confused by the flashback but other than that it was perfect.
7/11/2012 c13
3ssj2luke
i have read the whole thing, and i have to say, great job. Extremely well written and the characters' personalities are well portrayed. Not to mention, this is one of the few crossovers I've read so far that makes perfect sense, as both the turtles and godzilla came to be through mutation, so in a sense they're all linked.
3ssj2lukei have read the whole thing, and i have to say, great job. Extremely well written and the characters' personalities are well portrayed. Not to mention, this is one of the few crossovers I've read so far that makes perfect sense, as both the turtles and godzilla came to be through mutation, so in a sense they're all linked.
4/2/2012 c27
1moaboa
*glares at you*
You tricked me… Seriously, I fell for it! God you actually got me! Never felt like such a fool before xD
That was a great twist! Awesome work at this! I’m so impressed! Feeling a little dumb for falling for that but that is just a sign of good writing. Because, even if the fight came really quickly at you it seemed naturally for them to reach the way they did. Specially Leo. I was a little suspicious though when Don didn’t try to save the friendship but I was fooled anyway.
What a great and emotional ending for a stunning story. This now belongs to the best fanfics I ever read! I’m looking forward to your upcoming one shorts.
Keep writing and keep rocking! Bye!
Moaboa
1moaboa*glares at you*
You tricked me… Seriously, I fell for it! God you actually got me! Never felt like such a fool before xD
That was a great twist! Awesome work at this! I’m so impressed! Feeling a little dumb for falling for that but that is just a sign of good writing. Because, even if the fight came really quickly at you it seemed naturally for them to reach the way they did. Specially Leo. I was a little suspicious though when Don didn’t try to save the friendship but I was fooled anyway.
What a great and emotional ending for a stunning story. This now belongs to the best fanfics I ever read! I’m looking forward to your upcoming one shorts.
Keep writing and keep rocking! Bye!
Moaboa
4/2/2012 c26 moaboa
Hi again! ^-^
Wha, woh, woh! Geez what a turn here! O_O
This all seems so… I don’t know! I never thought they would end up fighting! I mean, now?
Sorry but that caught me off guard. Didn’t see that coming at all, because they seemed to get along great.
Well, only one chapter left… I wonder how this will end…
Moaboa
Hi again! ^-^
Wha, woh, woh! Geez what a turn here! O_O
This all seems so… I don’t know! I never thought they would end up fighting! I mean, now?
Sorry but that caught me off guard. Didn’t see that coming at all, because they seemed to get along great.
Well, only one chapter left… I wonder how this will end…
Moaboa
4/2/2012 c25 moaboa
So the story is close to its ending. A bit sad, but that’s how it is :)
I’ve decided to leave a comment for each remaining chapter now, sense like I said before this needs more reviews. Where the heck did all people go?
Well anyway, let’s get started! Yep! You sure know how to make something suspenseful! A moment it seems everything is on the turtles side, then in the next Bishop has the overhand. The suspense nearly kills me xD
The moment with Don, Nick and Godzilla in the “mind world” is my favorite part of this chapter. It’s a really touching scene. The family and brotherhood in ninja turtles is one of the main reasons I fell in love with the comics and cartoons.
Moaboa
So the story is close to its ending. A bit sad, but that’s how it is :)
I’ve decided to leave a comment for each remaining chapter now, sense like I said before this needs more reviews. Where the heck did all people go?
Well anyway, let’s get started! Yep! You sure know how to make something suspenseful! A moment it seems everything is on the turtles side, then in the next Bishop has the overhand. The suspense nearly kills me xD
The moment with Don, Nick and Godzilla in the “mind world” is my favorite part of this chapter. It’s a really touching scene. The family and brotherhood in ninja turtles is one of the main reasons I fell in love with the comics and cartoons.
Moaboa
3/25/2012 c24
89Marcus S. Lazarus
The start was a bit abrupt, but it certainly caught my attention from the beginning, and the subsequent plot was definitely interesting reading.
The concept of the turtles meeting Godzilla is so brilliant that I couldn’t believe there weren’t more stories about that concept when I found this section, particularly after I read Donatello’s speculation about Godzilla being the closest thing any of the Turtles have to an ‘ancestor’, and the subsequent misunderstanding surrounding Donatello’s temporary capture was a nice way to combine the cliché ‘heroic misunderstanding’ with the idea of the two sides making relatively peaceful contact with each other, thanks to Donatello managing to leave an e-mail contact address behind even amid the chaos.
Subsequent developments as Bishop attacked Godzilla added an excellent edge to the story, giving the two teams a chance to really pool their resources for the first time against a threat where each side has credible resources that they can bring to the table for the other’s benefit (I’m a bit so-so about Donatello going on a spiritual walk, but that’s nothing personal; that aspect of their ninja training is something I’ve ALWAYS been ambiguous about).
Bishop’s twisted desire to ‘protect’ the world without recognising that the Turtles are on his side was very well-explored, particularly when the scale of his current plan was taken into account, and the group’s efforts to cope with the horrifying discovery of what he’d done to Donatello and Godzilla were explored in a highly engaging manner, particularly when Bishop’s lack of knowledge or concern about the link between Godzilla and the clones was taken into account.
To say that the situation here is dangerous is a serious understatement; I am DEFINITELY looking forward to seeing how the Turtles and HEAT eliminate Bishop’s remaining clones before he realises the full potential of what they could provide (Although I also have to hope that maybe Bishop will end up getting more experience of Godzilla than he really wants to after this is all over)...
89Marcus S. LazarusThe start was a bit abrupt, but it certainly caught my attention from the beginning, and the subsequent plot was definitely interesting reading.
The concept of the turtles meeting Godzilla is so brilliant that I couldn’t believe there weren’t more stories about that concept when I found this section, particularly after I read Donatello’s speculation about Godzilla being the closest thing any of the Turtles have to an ‘ancestor’, and the subsequent misunderstanding surrounding Donatello’s temporary capture was a nice way to combine the cliché ‘heroic misunderstanding’ with the idea of the two sides making relatively peaceful contact with each other, thanks to Donatello managing to leave an e-mail contact address behind even amid the chaos.
Subsequent developments as Bishop attacked Godzilla added an excellent edge to the story, giving the two teams a chance to really pool their resources for the first time against a threat where each side has credible resources that they can bring to the table for the other’s benefit (I’m a bit so-so about Donatello going on a spiritual walk, but that’s nothing personal; that aspect of their ninja training is something I’ve ALWAYS been ambiguous about).
Bishop’s twisted desire to ‘protect’ the world without recognising that the Turtles are on his side was very well-explored, particularly when the scale of his current plan was taken into account, and the group’s efforts to cope with the horrifying discovery of what he’d done to Donatello and Godzilla were explored in a highly engaging manner, particularly when Bishop’s lack of knowledge or concern about the link between Godzilla and the clones was taken into account.
To say that the situation here is dangerous is a serious understatement; I am DEFINITELY looking forward to seeing how the Turtles and HEAT eliminate Bishop’s remaining clones before he realises the full potential of what they could provide (Although I also have to hope that maybe Bishop will end up getting more experience of Godzilla than he really wants to after this is all over)...
2/29/2012 c24
1moaboa
*reads your text in the beginning*
Oh, yes! It sure get's exciting! :D
Seriously, I don't know what to say except from the usual I say.
Best crossover story ever!
Moaboa
1moaboa*reads your text in the beginning*
Oh, yes! It sure get's exciting! :D
Seriously, I don't know what to say except from the usual I say.
Best crossover story ever!
Moaboa
2/6/2012 c22 moaboa
Oh, Im so sorry! i thought I had left a comment! stupid me! stupid! .
Man, it's like Im sitting on nails while reading this! is so suspenseful! xD
Nice seeing Don awake and walking. Im really curious about what kinda plan he has.
This story's so good! And where the hell did the other reviewers go? This deserves more feedback!
Moaboa
Oh, Im so sorry! i thought I had left a comment! stupid me! stupid! .
Man, it's like Im sitting on nails while reading this! is so suspenseful! xD
Nice seeing Don awake and walking. Im really curious about what kinda plan he has.
This story's so good! And where the hell did the other reviewers go? This deserves more feedback!
Moaboa
1/7/2012 c20 moaboa
Yay! Two more chapters! xD
Once again you made me cry... I feel so sorry for Don.
I can't even imagined what he must be feeling.
I just don't get why there are so few reviews on this? One of the best fanfics ever written!
Moaboa
Yay! Two more chapters! xD
Once again you made me cry... I feel so sorry for Don.
I can't even imagined what he must be feeling.
I just don't get why there are so few reviews on this? One of the best fanfics ever written!
Moaboa
12/12/2011 c18 moaboa
Nice seeing two more chapters up! Just love this story so much! It's awesome! :D
I have to be honest, I ended up all teary eyed reading this chapter. It's so tragic...
I wonder how this all will end.
Update soon! I'll read this till the end! ;)
Moaboa
Nice seeing two more chapters up! Just love this story so much! It's awesome! :D
I have to be honest, I ended up all teary eyed reading this chapter. It's so tragic...
I wonder how this all will end.
Update soon! I'll read this till the end! ;)
Moaboa
12/10/2011 c18 S.P.J.N.D
Maybe you could introduce Leatherhead to the HEAT team.
Maybe you could introduce Leatherhead to the HEAT team.
