for Both Far From Normal5/20/2010 c1 
24HeavyDrugsOrGroupHugs
I loved this. It's actually so amazing how similar their situations are. I love how you paralled them so well. Good job
24HeavyDrugsOrGroupHugsI loved this. It's actually so amazing how similar their situations are. I love how you paralled them so well. Good job
5/18/2010 c1 336rainbowfish22
I really enjoyed this story. I like how you started and ended each paragraph with the same thing.
One thing I think you should change, though: the two long paragraphs make it hard to read. You should break the big paragraphs up into smaller paragraphs.
Other than that, this story was great! :D
336rainbowfish22I really enjoyed this story. I like how you started and ended each paragraph with the same thing.
One thing I think you should change, though: the two long paragraphs make it hard to read. You should break the big paragraphs up into smaller paragraphs.
Other than that, this story was great! :D