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9/9/2011 c30 5Kasadija957
Sorry to say but Charlie isn't going to last for long at this rate. I mean how long have it been since he last ate? And with broken knee, now water and cold place what regularly get's overflow, dude we're lucky he survived so long. Still it's Charlie’s own fault. Don said it would be safer if Charlie would drive off somewhere, but no, Charlie had to be stubborn jerk and look where he's now. Getting more problems on his brother’s shoulders.
9/5/2011 c1 nessy22
Hi!

When I started to read this story, I thought, I know it already. Read it in German.

It is a very good story. I don't understand why you don't have more reviews. But I'm sure there are more people reading it.
9/3/2011 c30 notsing
Oh please, you've got to have a break in this! I'm ready to beat the tar out of those Russian mobsters myself. I can imagine how frustrated poor Don is! And how hopeless Charlie must feel. Thanks for posting! Hi Kasadija975! Glad someone else is reviewing!
8/29/2011 c22 Kasadija957
I do understand a bit Russian, but since neither English, nor Russian is my home language it was rather interesting to click from one language to another and then back.
8/28/2011 c19 Kasadija957
Awww, so sweet brotherly line. Though it is kind of annoying how stubborn is Charlie.
8/28/2011 c16 Kasadija957
Wow, you're so good at this. Explanation part totally sounded like from numb3rs episode.
8/26/2011 c5 Kasadija957
That was great. Really exciting so far. Great work!
8/26/2011 c2 Kasadija957
**! Letting out air from his brothers bike's tyres? Seriously what a jerk.
8/16/2011 c29 notsing
Wow! Good chapter! I'm glad you're going to finish this, thank-you. I'm frustrated that more people aren't reviewing, I know I can't be the only enjoying this. Thanks again for posting.
8/5/2011 c28 notsing
So glad you're continuing this, I don't understand why you aren't gettng more reviews. Nice reference to Dirty Bomb! I like how you're keeping all the characters involved-like Alan, Amita, and Larry. Thanks again for posting.
7/21/2011 c27 notsing
And the plot thickens! I can't help but wonder if the FBI will try to play the Russians mobsters against each other, since they know there's competing branches. Thanks for the update!
7/9/2011 c26 notsing
Thanks for the update! I hope Charlie gets rescued soon, going hungry and thirsty would be painful. I think you should have Don a little angry at Charlie, as well as worried. I mean, I would think the thought would occur to Don that if Charlie had left town, he wouldn'thave been kidnapped. Just as Charlie is frustrated when his math is ignored, I think Don is frustrated when his advice about criminals is blown off. Anyway, thanks again for posting.
6/2/2011 c25 Asuka Yukimura
I've just found your story and it's really good, I hope you continue updating and don't give up on it! ;) I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
6/2/2011 c25 30Cissyaliza
Another good chapter.
6/1/2011 c25 notsing
I have been reading your story, but I haven't been reviewing it until now. To be honest, I was kind of half-n-half about it. The plot was interesting, but I thought you made Don too much of an **, and I thought I simply couldn't bother with another story that made Charlie Mr. Wonderful, and Don Mr. Jerk. But I've been slowly changing my mind, and I thought this chapter was very good, especially the interaction between Don and Alan. And what a terrifying position Charlie's in! I'll be watching for new updates.
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