for 10 Things I Hate About You Twilight Style7/17/2012 c1
14TygerZ
This is great! I love that it is set up like a movie script. And oh my goodness, the last line made me laugh very hard.
14TygerZThis is great! I love that it is set up like a movie script. And oh my goodness, the last line made me laugh very hard.
4/24/2012 c16 Guest
Funny
Funny
5/2/2011 c16
5Midge 1012
=D haha brilliantly written
i luvd it
i luv how u transfered the twilight characters into the story =] brilliant
my only criticism is maybe, emmet and rosalie would have made a better Patrick and Kat
keep writin
x
5Midge 1012=D haha brilliantly written
i luvd it
i luv how u transfered the twilight characters into the story =] brilliant
my only criticism is maybe, emmet and rosalie would have made a better Patrick and Kat
keep writin
x
4/21/2011 c1
45reviewgirl911
Well, this was interesting to say the least. When I saw a Twilight-10 Things I Hate About You crossover, I thought to myself, 'Dear Lord, how is that going to work?' Somehow, u managed it. I'm not a big fan of Twilight, but this was funny and stayed very true to the movie. I didn't rlly understand why Jasper was from North Dakota, but it was funny nonetheless. I liked how u made Bella and Alice sisters, and the last chapter is funny when they're looking at Edward's freshman yearbook picture. Good job, and thank u for not ruining 10 Things I Hate About You with vampires.
45reviewgirl911Well, this was interesting to say the least. When I saw a Twilight-10 Things I Hate About You crossover, I thought to myself, 'Dear Lord, how is that going to work?' Somehow, u managed it. I'm not a big fan of Twilight, but this was funny and stayed very true to the movie. I didn't rlly understand why Jasper was from North Dakota, but it was funny nonetheless. I liked how u made Bella and Alice sisters, and the last chapter is funny when they're looking at Edward's freshman yearbook picture. Good job, and thank u for not ruining 10 Things I Hate About You with vampires.
1/29/2011 c2 KolaForRansom
I really like that one, "Heinous Bitch" was my favorite line from the movie.
I really like that one, "Heinous Bitch" was my favorite line from the movie.
1/18/2011 c16
2RedOak
Classic fairytale story. Guy gets girls then screws it up they make up get together again and guess what? The bad guy loses. Pretty predictable there. Sorry.
2RedOakClassic fairytale story. Guy gets girls then screws it up they make up get together again and guess what? The bad guy loses. Pretty predictable there. Sorry.
12/4/2010 c16 TexasHomeSlice
Awww! I like the ending! Edward had a perm *giggle*... I like Rosalie and Emmett too... But isn't Jasper right? Don't sunflower seeds come from sunflowers? Or am I just really that slow despite my good grades in school? :0
Awww! I like the ending! Edward had a perm *giggle*... I like Rosalie and Emmett too... But isn't Jasper right? Don't sunflower seeds come from sunflowers? Or am I just really that slow despite my good grades in school? :0
12/4/2010 c8 TexasHomeSlice
LOL! My fave parts:
Miss Jane grabs Bella and shoves her into her office.
Miss Jane to Edward, "Dear God, stay away from her. If you two ever decided to breed, evil would truly walk the earth."
Edward gives Bella one last look before the door shuts, then smiles...
My other faveorite part:
Bella stomps to the door, grabbing her car keys off the hall table and a sweater from the coat rack. She flings open the door and…"
There stands Edward.
"Nine-thirty right?"
Bella's in shock.
Edward continuing, "I'm early."
She holds up her keys, "I'm driving."
He peeks in behind her.
"Who knocked up your sister?"
I like this story a WHOLE LOT!
LOL! My fave parts:
Miss Jane grabs Bella and shoves her into her office.
Miss Jane to Edward, "Dear God, stay away from her. If you two ever decided to breed, evil would truly walk the earth."
Edward gives Bella one last look before the door shuts, then smiles...
My other faveorite part:
Bella stomps to the door, grabbing her car keys off the hall table and a sweater from the coat rack. She flings open the door and…"
There stands Edward.
"Nine-thirty right?"
Bella's in shock.
Edward continuing, "I'm early."
She holds up her keys, "I'm driving."
He peeks in behind her.
"Who knocked up your sister?"
I like this story a WHOLE LOT!
12/4/2010 c1 TexasHomeSlice
Edward, lounging in his seat in the back row, elbows a crusty-looking crony, identified by the name Jacob, embroidered on his work shirt.
"Mother Goose?"
The class titters; Bella wears an expression of intolerance.
LOL! Mother Goose! That idiot! :D
I like your way of wording all of the characters actions and how you draw them all together. I honestly have no idea what "10 Things I Hate About You," is but it sounds intresting!
Good job!
Edward, lounging in his seat in the back row, elbows a crusty-looking crony, identified by the name Jacob, embroidered on his work shirt.
"Mother Goose?"
The class titters; Bella wears an expression of intolerance.
LOL! Mother Goose! That idiot! :D
I like your way of wording all of the characters actions and how you draw them all together. I honestly have no idea what "10 Things I Hate About You," is but it sounds intresting!
Good job!
