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12THE-BANNED-AUTHOR
I think I've read that series...it was...strange...excuse me a Sue is a virgin?...really? Really? ugh Sues -.-
12THE-BANNED-AUTHORI think I've read that series...it was...strange...excuse me a Sue is a virgin?...really? Really? ugh Sues -.-
12/20/2010 c1 Jay
This is the first of your stories I've read. I love the concept of the opposing cliche and Mary Sue societies. Unfortunately I'm not well read in any of the "fandoms" other than earths children and 1970's reruns of Dr Who on PBS in the US. But I like the way you think.
This is the first of your stories I've read. I love the concept of the opposing cliche and Mary Sue societies. Unfortunately I'm not well read in any of the "fandoms" other than earths children and 1970's reruns of Dr Who on PBS in the US. But I like the way you think.
8/30/2010 c1 tricorvus
Sweet! I'm going 2 look up Mary Sue. Apparently Ayla is one. Maybe Harry Potter is a Gary-Stu? Oh, I c he is! OK I'm good now
Sweet! I'm going 2 look up Mary Sue. Apparently Ayla is one. Maybe Harry Potter is a Gary-Stu? Oh, I c he is! OK I'm good now
7/25/2010 c1 7Goddess on a Highway
That was so funny! Ha, I always thought that Ayla was a Mary Sue, glad I'm not the only one! Love the jokes you made about the "Mother's Gift of Pleasure", all that lemon in the EC series bothered me too! Haha! Sadly Lisa didn't get "in the furs" with Jondalar, loved to see Ayla's face. This was really brilliant!
7Goddess on a HighwayThat was so funny! Ha, I always thought that Ayla was a Mary Sue, glad I'm not the only one! Love the jokes you made about the "Mother's Gift of Pleasure", all that lemon in the EC series bothered me too! Haha! Sadly Lisa didn't get "in the furs" with Jondalar, loved to see Ayla's face. This was really brilliant!
6/9/2010 c1 1Lord Monbodo
I will take you up on the Doctor Who villian thing. (of course) But anyway, another great story!
1Lord MonbodoI will take you up on the Doctor Who villian thing. (of course) But anyway, another great story!
6/7/2010 c1 41The Layman
You know, you almost had me sold on Earth's Children...until the Festival to Honour the Mother. Thanks, but I'll pass.
Now, as Monty Python says (as well as all the fleeing Agents in Insert Random Distraction Here), Run away! Run away!
41The LaymanYou know, you almost had me sold on Earth's Children...until the Festival to Honour the Mother. Thanks, but I'll pass.
Now, as Monty Python says (as well as all the fleeing Agents in Insert Random Distraction Here), Run away! Run away!
5/24/2010 c1 8Numbuh six-sixtysix
Wow, that has to be the first time I have heard of a Sue's, well, Sue-ness, backfiring on them. And wow, I completely forgot how bad-** Harriet could be. Although I think even a British cricket bat may have a little trouble with an energy blast, but otherwise, that was a very 'wow' filled fic. And I can't wait to see what you do with the weeping angels (and lets not forget the other DW villains running around the Library. This is going to be fun;)
8Numbuh six-sixtysixWow, that has to be the first time I have heard of a Sue's, well, Sue-ness, backfiring on them. And wow, I completely forgot how bad-** Harriet could be. Although I think even a British cricket bat may have a little trouble with an energy blast, but otherwise, that was a very 'wow' filled fic. And I can't wait to see what you do with the weeping angels (and lets not forget the other DW villains running around the Library. This is going to be fun;)
5/23/2010 c1 6Here for the Twister
Haha fantastic! Just the image of Daleks zooming through the Library... are they normal Daleks or the Smartie-boyband new Daleks, though?
Eep about the Weeping Angels in the future, mind you... those are the only Doctor Who villains that scare the crap out of me!
6Here for the TwisterHaha fantastic! Just the image of Daleks zooming through the Library... are they normal Daleks or the Smartie-boyband new Daleks, though?
Eep about the Weeping Angels in the future, mind you... those are the only Doctor Who villains that scare the crap out of me!
5/22/2010 c1 22Library Arcanium
-glomps- Is awesome, as always!
I love the purple prose, if only because it's been awhile since i"ve seen it written that well. I've looked up this series on wikipedia and it does sound very Sueish to me. i never enough thought anyone would write about that kind of stuff in the vein of 'Earth's Children', though I have read 'Raptor Red', so I'm not one to talk.
Lisa is getting to be a interesting character- I can't wait to see what really happened to the Count and what happens to Lisa in the end.
Tash is also suffer bad hallucinations...if I were not dead, I would claw my way into dream land and kill them! Kill them dead with fire and the Nice Guy Pose!
*strikes pose, holding up 'V' sign and smiles one of his teeth glinting*
Okay, I stop being silly now...(Like that'd ever happen!)
Love the fic, love you and can't wait for more!
22Library Arcanium-glomps- Is awesome, as always!
I love the purple prose, if only because it's been awhile since i"ve seen it written that well. I've looked up this series on wikipedia and it does sound very Sueish to me. i never enough thought anyone would write about that kind of stuff in the vein of 'Earth's Children', though I have read 'Raptor Red', so I'm not one to talk.
Lisa is getting to be a interesting character- I can't wait to see what really happened to the Count and what happens to Lisa in the end.
Tash is also suffer bad hallucinations...if I were not dead, I would claw my way into dream land and kill them! Kill them dead with fire and the Nice Guy Pose!
*strikes pose, holding up 'V' sign and smiles one of his teeth glinting*
Okay, I stop being silly now...(Like that'd ever happen!)
Love the fic, love you and can't wait for more!
5/22/2010 c1 27Isis the Sphinx
That was funny as all get out. Tash gets knocked out, Harriet gets to beat the crap out of a bunch of people, and Daleks make an appearance. Funfunfun. And there's another one after this? Ooooh.
Looking forward to more. Keep writing!
27Isis the SphinxThat was funny as all get out. Tash gets knocked out, Harriet gets to beat the crap out of a bunch of people, and Daleks make an appearance. Funfunfun. And there's another one after this? Ooooh.
Looking forward to more. Keep writing!
5/22/2010 c1 Aster Selene
Divine Providence has also given her away.
I believe you are mistaken, Tash. We probably have killed the Stu, it's just he goes under a different name than Count, which is what plot dust is telling me.
And let's go kick -Lisa's ** now that Harriet knows whom she is...
Divine Providence has also given her away.
I believe you are mistaken, Tash. We probably have killed the Stu, it's just he goes under a different name than Count, which is what plot dust is telling me.
And let's go kick -Lisa's ** now that Harriet knows whom she is...