for Left 4 Life10/20/2012 c2 Some guy
Are you Gabe Newell? Cuz Episode 3 hasn't come
Are you Gabe Newell? Cuz Episode 3 hasn't come
7/17/2012 c2 I'm not telling
Really good story line. Where's Episode 3?
Really good story line. Where's Episode 3?
6/1/2011 c1 Maruigi44
Quite a good story, it's nice, action-y, slightly romantic, and just awesome. I look forward to more of these :D
Quite a good story, it's nice, action-y, slightly romantic, and just awesome. I look forward to more of these :D
12/8/2010 c1 
1REV6Pilot
You asked for a review pointing things out. I'll do it.
You write well, in a grammar sense. No wrong words, corect punctuation, etc. I appreciate that.
Unfortunately, the STORY makes no sense. How did the worlds merge, for an example? The characters are shallow and non-conflicting as they should be. The survivors simply ran because Alyx told them to. Nobody is shocked to see aliens or zombies. The list goes on.
I gotta say, you would be a good beta. But you're a bad writer. Try and read more literature (written fiction in general) to get a basis on how to proceed before writing yourself. Because THIS isn't a fanfic worth mentioning anywhere as a good thing.
1REV6PilotYou asked for a review pointing things out. I'll do it.
You write well, in a grammar sense. No wrong words, corect punctuation, etc. I appreciate that.
Unfortunately, the STORY makes no sense. How did the worlds merge, for an example? The characters are shallow and non-conflicting as they should be. The survivors simply ran because Alyx told them to. Nobody is shocked to see aliens or zombies. The list goes on.
I gotta say, you would be a good beta. But you're a bad writer. Try and read more literature (written fiction in general) to get a basis on how to proceed before writing yourself. Because THIS isn't a fanfic worth mentioning anywhere as a good thing.