for The Commodre and the Little Mermaid12/18/2011 c1 Unther
Ah, yes, the line, "A little mermaid washed up on deck and told us the whole story." That was well-done!
Ah, yes, the line, "A little mermaid washed up on deck and told us the whole story." That was well-done!
8/28/2010 c1 duchessloki
"... A little mermaid flopped up on deck and told him the whole story."
Ha ha! This was a great one-shot, I loved it! Excellent job, hon! :)
xx darkness xx
"... A little mermaid flopped up on deck and told him the whole story."
Ha ha! This was a great one-shot, I loved it! Excellent job, hon! :)
xx darkness xx
5/23/2010 c1 
43nineteennintytwo
Shrieking in terror, Gillette jumped into Norrington's arms.
"Get off me, you poor, insufferable excuse for a man", said Norrington, dropping Gillette.
*the reviewer rolls on the floor laughing*
That bit was just hilarious! This was a good oneshot; well worth the wait! A few grammar mistakes here and there, but no one's perfect, right?
And I don't know what his real name is, either; I guess Andrew does sound better. I think it was mentioned, though, in FantasyBard's stories, although I can't remember.
Loved it!
nineteennintytwo
P.S. Thanks for the little mention of my challenge :)
43nineteennintytwoShrieking in terror, Gillette jumped into Norrington's arms.
"Get off me, you poor, insufferable excuse for a man", said Norrington, dropping Gillette.
*the reviewer rolls on the floor laughing*
That bit was just hilarious! This was a good oneshot; well worth the wait! A few grammar mistakes here and there, but no one's perfect, right?
And I don't know what his real name is, either; I guess Andrew does sound better. I think it was mentioned, though, in FantasyBard's stories, although I can't remember.
Loved it!
nineteennintytwo
P.S. Thanks for the little mention of my challenge :)