for A Summer Blessing1/4/2011 c3 
18Gunlord500
Not much I can say about this except very cute. XD Nice work, Emblemqueen, it's great to see this completed. :D
18Gunlord500Not much I can say about this except very cute. XD Nice work, Emblemqueen, it's great to see this completed. :D
12/1/2010 c2 13Undercover-Dark-Knight
I had an allergic reaction to the fluffy stuff in here. I had to pull out the tissues about halfway into the the first chapter. However, once i start something, i always get to the end, no matter the pain.
It's a good fic, although the bit which Elicina knees Ike in the groin is a bit... odd, though it works. The only real gripe is the two of them feel like a pair of teenagers more than a royal couple at times. Given they're at the beach and alone though (which is VERY irresponsible for king and queen), i suppose it's ok. Honeymoon no.2, anyone?
I wonder... what's happening to Elicina? Could she be... hmmm... FAMILY?
13Undercover-Dark-KnightI had an allergic reaction to the fluffy stuff in here. I had to pull out the tissues about halfway into the the first chapter. However, once i start something, i always get to the end, no matter the pain.
It's a good fic, although the bit which Elicina knees Ike in the groin is a bit... odd, though it works. The only real gripe is the two of them feel like a pair of teenagers more than a royal couple at times. Given they're at the beach and alone though (which is VERY irresponsible for king and queen), i suppose it's ok. Honeymoon no.2, anyone?
I wonder... what's happening to Elicina? Could she be... hmmm... FAMILY?
11/22/2010 c2 5ExposedWiresExposedVeins
The cuteness hurts! Haha, it's great so far! I'm not into such warm and fuzzy stories, but I like it alot! Keep at it!
5ExposedWiresExposedVeinsThe cuteness hurts! Haha, it's great so far! I'm not into such warm and fuzzy stories, but I like it alot! Keep at it!
11/21/2010 c2 18Gunlord500
Hey EmblemQueen, nice to see you again! Reviewin as you requested ^^ Can't say much about this chappie except that it was reasonably well written (maybe a couple errors here and there, but nothing big) and cute. Hope to see moar! :D
18Gunlord500Hey EmblemQueen, nice to see you again! Reviewin as you requested ^^ Can't say much about this chappie except that it was reasonably well written (maybe a couple errors here and there, but nothing big) and cute. Hope to see moar! :D
5/26/2010 c1 2CharonicImpulse
THE CUTE, IT BURNS *withers away*
ElinciaxIke? HOOOORRAAAAYYYYYYY *thumbs up*
"Oh! Goodness me! I'm so sorry, Ike!"
Seems kinda forced, out of place, and artificial. If you just kneed your husband/friend in the junk, I don't feel this is what you would say. Compress it perhaps.
"However, Sothe suspected Micaiah still held some kind of grudge against Ike for whatever reason"
I don't feel that this is how it plays out, especially as Yune's Vessel and Tellius' Chosen interact in the Tower, as well as the parts leading up to it. Micaiah may have been bitter earlier, but as they interacted, I feel that she would be swept up by his charisma as well. Alas, we will never know given the dearth of character development in RD.
One note I particularly enjoyed was Ike's would be reasons for leaving Tellius, small details such as that are of particular importance to fics.
I also couldn't help but chuckle at, ah, Ike's musculature. xD
2CharonicImpulseTHE CUTE, IT BURNS *withers away*
ElinciaxIke? HOOOORRAAAAYYYYYYY *thumbs up*
"Oh! Goodness me! I'm so sorry, Ike!"
Seems kinda forced, out of place, and artificial. If you just kneed your husband/friend in the junk, I don't feel this is what you would say. Compress it perhaps.
"However, Sothe suspected Micaiah still held some kind of grudge against Ike for whatever reason"
I don't feel that this is how it plays out, especially as Yune's Vessel and Tellius' Chosen interact in the Tower, as well as the parts leading up to it. Micaiah may have been bitter earlier, but as they interacted, I feel that she would be swept up by his charisma as well. Alas, we will never know given the dearth of character development in RD.
One note I particularly enjoyed was Ike's would be reasons for leaving Tellius, small details such as that are of particular importance to fics.
I also couldn't help but chuckle at, ah, Ike's musculature. xD
5/26/2010 c1 18Gunlord500
Hey there, EmblemQueen! Gunlord here, as requested. Man, you really like Ike x Elincia, don't you? :D Well, nothing much I can say here-I noticed a couple lil' errors, but nothing major, so I didnt wanna nitpick. Very nice work, I thought the scenes between the two of them were adorable ^^ Some may question how Tellius has swim trunks and two-pieces, but for me it's no biggie XD Nice work :D
18Gunlord500Hey there, EmblemQueen! Gunlord here, as requested. Man, you really like Ike x Elincia, don't you? :D Well, nothing much I can say here-I noticed a couple lil' errors, but nothing major, so I didnt wanna nitpick. Very nice work, I thought the scenes between the two of them were adorable ^^ Some may question how Tellius has swim trunks and two-pieces, but for me it's no biggie XD Nice work :D
5/26/2010 c1 2Funk-tastic
Oooh, I just noticed that this is under Romance/Family. Does that have anything to do with Elincia being sick, wink wink, nudge, nudge? I like this fic! Can't wait for more!
And God in heaven, I loved the Geoff/Neph references. They made me squeal with delight.
~HotDiggety
2Funk-tasticOooh, I just noticed that this is under Romance/Family. Does that have anything to do with Elincia being sick, wink wink, nudge, nudge? I like this fic! Can't wait for more!
And God in heaven, I loved the Geoff/Neph references. They made me squeal with delight.
~HotDiggety
5/26/2010 c1 128AngelWarriors
awe I was hoping someone will do a summer type piece for this pairing, I cant wait to read what happens next.
128AngelWarriorsawe I was hoping someone will do a summer type piece for this pairing, I cant wait to read what happens next.