for Just Another Completely Normal Day, NOT!5/14/2011 c3 
3AngelWolf1994
Soo far so good. Hey did Viral fall with them to becuse if did that would be...SOOOO COOOOL! Viral is one of my faverit chacters
3AngelWolf1994Soo far so good. Hey did Viral fall with them to becuse if did that would be...SOOOO COOOOL! Viral is one of my faverit chacters
2/18/2011 c1 2AbyssBlur
Nice so far! :) By the way, a question. Is it based on the Pokemon Anime or the Games?
2AbyssBlurNice so far! :) By the way, a question. Is it based on the Pokemon Anime or the Games?
12/30/2010 c1 1Illusory Dignity
A couple problems. One, how in anyway was it Kamina's fault that nobody noticed the Beastmen? If that's not what you meant, then what was the point of this sentence?
"Everyone *coughcough Kamina coughcough* was just goofing off." Do you have something against Kamina?
And a pot-shot is a shot taken without careful aim,an easy shot during an ambush, or a shot that violates the rules of hunting.
1Illusory DignityA couple problems. One, how in anyway was it Kamina's fault that nobody noticed the Beastmen? If that's not what you meant, then what was the point of this sentence?
"Everyone *coughcough Kamina coughcough* was just goofing off." Do you have something against Kamina?
And a pot-shot is a shot taken without careful aim,an easy shot during an ambush, or a shot that violates the rules of hunting.