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4/19/2011 c6 
235FaithInHim4ever
Hi! This chapter is awesome! I loved the whole banter between the kids! I can't wait to see them battle and win! You're writing Megan well too! I can't wait for more!
God bless,
Lauren
235FaithInHim4everHi! This chapter is awesome! I loved the whole banter between the kids! I can't wait to see them battle and win! You're writing Megan well too! I can't wait for more!
God bless,
Lauren
4/18/2011 c4 FaithInHim4ever
Aloha! I hope you're doing well! Your prequel story sounds awesome ! I can't wait to read more of this one! The Moochick always cracked me up! I can't wait for Sara to use the Rainbow of Light again! I hope Fizzy and Firefly are okay! I really did like this chapter! I'm really enjoying this story a lot. Do you have any other MLP stories I could read?
God bless
Lauren
Aloha! I hope you're doing well! Your prequel story sounds awesome ! I can't wait to read more of this one! The Moochick always cracked me up! I can't wait for Sara to use the Rainbow of Light again! I hope Fizzy and Firefly are okay! I really did like this chapter! I'm really enjoying this story a lot. Do you have any other MLP stories I could read?
God bless
Lauren
4/17/2011 c3 FaithInHim4ever
Hi! Awesome! Sara is the new keeper for the Rainbow of Light! YAY! I'm so happy! I really liked this chapter! I can't wait for more! I hope they get Firefly out soon!
God bless
Hi! Awesome! Sara is the new keeper for the Rainbow of Light! YAY! I'm so happy! I really liked this chapter! I can't wait for more! I hope they get Firefly out soon!
God bless
4/17/2011 c2 FaithInHim4ever
Hi! I hope you're doing wel. I really liked this chapter. I knew it! I knew Sara was Megan's. There are a few things I need to correct you on. I'm just trying to help. First off, it's Tearek. Secondly Megan was eleven when she first met Firefly and the rest of them. Other than that, you did an awesome job! I really love this story and I can't wait to read more. Did you write a story where MEgan met her husband and gets married? If you need any further help on MLP info, don't hesitate to ask.
God bles
Hi! I hope you're doing wel. I really liked this chapter. I knew it! I knew Sara was Megan's. There are a few things I need to correct you on. I'm just trying to help. First off, it's Tearek. Secondly Megan was eleven when she first met Firefly and the rest of them. Other than that, you did an awesome job! I really love this story and I can't wait to read more. Did you write a story where MEgan met her husband and gets married? If you need any further help on MLP info, don't hesitate to ask.
God bles
4/17/2011 c1 FaithInHim4ever
Hi! I really loved this first chapter. I LOVED Megan's daughter the best. At least I think Sara is hers. She could be Molly's for all I know. But from the way she acts, I Think it's safe to say that she's Megan's. I really like Sara and Kairi the best. Goofy getting bashed was hilarious! I'm not a Goofy fan, but I love when he gets made fun of. Will Fizzy or Firefly be in this? I'm just curious. They are two of my favorites. I hope to read more from you soon! This is defgoing on my favorites list and story alert.
God bless
Hi! I really loved this first chapter. I LOVED Megan's daughter the best. At least I think Sara is hers. She could be Molly's for all I know. But from the way she acts, I Think it's safe to say that she's Megan's. I really like Sara and Kairi the best. Goofy getting bashed was hilarious! I'm not a Goofy fan, but I love when he gets made fun of. Will Fizzy or Firefly be in this? I'm just curious. They are two of my favorites. I hope to read more from you soon! This is defgoing on my favorites list and story alert.
God bless
4/16/2011 c10 Heartless Killer
I tale it that theose two demon surivers our going to reapear soon. Also i can't wait for Kenshin and the others to meet Sora again.
I tale it that theose two demon surivers our going to reapear soon. Also i can't wait for Kenshin and the others to meet Sora again.
11/22/2010 c10 11stabbythings
This one was awesome, I didn't think you could do much with My Little Pony but I was proved wrong and Kenshin was awesome *nods* I loved it!
11stabbythingsThis one was awesome, I didn't think you could do much with My Little Pony but I was proved wrong and Kenshin was awesome *nods* I loved it!
11/17/2010 c1 stabbythings
Sorry I'm so fraking late don't mean to be but eh I'll tell you what I think when I get to the end if you don't mind again I'm also very sory for being also very later.
Sorry I'm so fraking late don't mean to be but eh I'll tell you what I think when I get to the end if you don't mind again I'm also very sory for being also very later.
7/3/2010 c10 17D.J. Scales
Well comedy certainly has found itself useful here. Well at least the forces of Darkness have found a useful ally around here. So what next another princess of heart in the next volume?
17D.J. ScalesWell comedy certainly has found itself useful here. Well at least the forces of Darkness have found a useful ally around here. So what next another princess of heart in the next volume?
6/27/2010 c9 14Shire Folk
"Ah! After ten thousand years I'm free! It's time to conquer Earth!"
"Alpha, Rita's escaped. Recruit a team of teenagers with attitudes."
"Go go Power Rangers! Go go Power Rangers! Go go Power Rangers, you Mighty Morphin Power Rangers!"
That whole bit at the end just reminded me of that.
May the Grace of the Valar Protect You
Shire Folk
14Shire Folk"Ah! After ten thousand years I'm free! It's time to conquer Earth!"
"Alpha, Rita's escaped. Recruit a team of teenagers with attitudes."
"Go go Power Rangers! Go go Power Rangers! Go go Power Rangers, you Mighty Morphin Power Rangers!"
That whole bit at the end just reminded me of that.
May the Grace of the Valar Protect You
Shire Folk
6/27/2010 c9 Guest
The final battle has come now the big man has come to destroy our heroes but they'll win in the end that I'm for sure.update soon.
The final battle has come now the big man has come to destroy our heroes but they'll win in the end that I'm for sure.update soon.