for War of the Roses4/18 c27 Scarlett09
Ok, so what he did still makes me ill...but at least he had the "i'm a huge douche tool" epiphany and is acting human. Still not sure i could get past the cheating, but shockingly, I want them to. LOVED the whole twist with Riley/Lauren etc. I figured maybe he was fucking Victoria, but I never saw this coming...in fact I was super suspicious of James, which I'm guessing was your plan in introducing him :) Good stuff.
I'm glad I gave this story a chance.
Ok, so what he did still makes me ill...but at least he had the "i'm a huge douche tool" epiphany and is acting human. Still not sure i could get past the cheating, but shockingly, I want them to. LOVED the whole twist with Riley/Lauren etc. I figured maybe he was fucking Victoria, but I never saw this coming...in fact I was super suspicious of James, which I'm guessing was your plan in introducing him :) Good stuff.
I'm glad I gave this story a chance.
4/17 c19 Scarlett09
He is seriously bi-polar and needs therapy, and detox, and i'm still partial to a boot in his ass. I'm feeling like you're steering us away from liking Riley though...
He is seriously bi-polar and needs therapy, and detox, and i'm still partial to a boot in his ass. I'm feeling like you're steering us away from liking Riley though...
4/17 c15 Scarlett09
I know this happens all the time, but i just want to kick both men in the teeth. WTF? Grow the fuck up! Poor baby felt neglected...let me get you a new nappy! ugh...and still Edward is pissed at her for hurting him? I hope his next sexual partner is a chainsaw.
woooo! I feel better now. :)
I know this happens all the time, but i just want to kick both men in the teeth. WTF? Grow the fuck up! Poor baby felt neglected...let me get you a new nappy! ugh...and still Edward is pissed at her for hurting him? I hope his next sexual partner is a chainsaw.
woooo! I feel better now. :)
4/17 c14 Scarlett09
ok, I have never read a story where I truly felt that Edward had zero redeeming qualities! I also have never truly NOT wanted Edward and Bella together. I'm having a hard time seeing that he could possibly turn this around. He is really a disgusting, pathetic, childish, selfish, ignorant, etc, etc douche bag asshat. Not to mention totally delusional to the point where I wonder if maybe he's just stupid, or maybe even mentally ill. So weird that one minute he seems to sorta feel remorse and the next he's dictating to her, threatening, telling her about what he did to Lauren...and acting like it's no big deal that he impregnated his whore?
I'm sure you've heard this all before, the story has been done for a while but I needed to vent! I normally would never even read a cheating story, but I wanted to see what had so many people reading your story an once I started, although Edward makes me feel kinda violent, I can't stop reading now. The writing is good, and I'm just so intrigued to see whether or not you'll be able to bring me around from wanting to personally castrate Edward and drag him behind my car, to actually being able to want Bella to forgive him, and to not cringe in revulsion at the thought of him touching her!
ok, I have never read a story where I truly felt that Edward had zero redeeming qualities! I also have never truly NOT wanted Edward and Bella together. I'm having a hard time seeing that he could possibly turn this around. He is really a disgusting, pathetic, childish, selfish, ignorant, etc, etc douche bag asshat. Not to mention totally delusional to the point where I wonder if maybe he's just stupid, or maybe even mentally ill. So weird that one minute he seems to sorta feel remorse and the next he's dictating to her, threatening, telling her about what he did to Lauren...and acting like it's no big deal that he impregnated his whore?
I'm sure you've heard this all before, the story has been done for a while but I needed to vent! I normally would never even read a cheating story, but I wanted to see what had so many people reading your story an once I started, although Edward makes me feel kinda violent, I can't stop reading now. The writing is good, and I'm just so intrigued to see whether or not you'll be able to bring me around from wanting to personally castrate Edward and drag him behind my car, to actually being able to want Bella to forgive him, and to not cringe in revulsion at the thought of him touching her!
4/16 c34 
3Mrs-Elena-cullen
it was great, the story was angst all around and Riley was unexpected and edward is seriously dumb and the story was good...but char's dad is going to be 48? when she's old right? but okay..see that's why they say never fuck before getting married...it could lead to dire consequences...LoL
3Mrs-Elena-cullenit was great, the story was angst all around and Riley was unexpected and edward is seriously dumb and the story was good...but char's dad is going to be 48? when she's old right? but okay..see that's why they say never fuck before getting married...it could lead to dire consequences...LoL
4/6 c1 DarkBlueVampWolf
So much angst and drama. . . I love it! The only problem? I'm an ExB fan. Sorry.
So much angst and drama. . . I love it! The only problem? I'm an ExB fan. Sorry.
4/3 c34 Yo
You inspire me. Knowing what it's like to hurt and forgive. To love. To protect. How you know what each of the characters a feeling at the moment they feel them is extra
You inspire me. Knowing what it's like to hurt and forgive. To love. To protect. How you know what each of the characters a feeling at the moment they feel them is extra
3/27 c1 TwiFanfictionRecs.com
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War of the Roses has been added to the Featured Fics Library on www . twifanfictionrecs . com ;-)
3/23 c7 Guest
makes me think of the song bust your windows by jazmine sullivan
makes me think of the song bust your windows by jazmine sullivan
2/15 c28 Amber
I guess boredom really took over me. This story is terribly written. I'm sure you had the right idea.. and just didn't know how to execute it. The characters aren't really characters. There's no development, no real personality. It's all so cliche. And I think you should have actually done some research before writing this. Like how divorce proceedings don't take one day. Or how secretly recording someone is illegal, and will not hold up in court. Come on, when does this shit actually happen in life? Seriously? It's so overly dramatic I wanted to throw up. I guess you'll learn more as time passes.
I guess boredom really took over me. This story is terribly written. I'm sure you had the right idea.. and just didn't know how to execute it. The characters aren't really characters. There's no development, no real personality. It's all so cliche. And I think you should have actually done some research before writing this. Like how divorce proceedings don't take one day. Or how secretly recording someone is illegal, and will not hold up in court. Come on, when does this shit actually happen in life? Seriously? It's so overly dramatic I wanted to throw up. I guess you'll learn more as time passes.
2/13 c25 2MrsEdwardAnthonyMasenCullen
Your fanfics are so clever! Every one that seems innocent isn't, and every one is linked some how. Have you ever considered trying to get this amazing story published? I think its good enough, but I'm no expert :D x
2MrsEdwardAnthonyMasenCullenYour fanfics are so clever! Every one that seems innocent isn't, and every one is linked some how. Have you ever considered trying to get this amazing story published? I think its good enough, but I'm no expert :D x
2/3 c34 AliciaW68
I have just spent all weekend reaading this. I started crying around chapter 5 and never really stopped. Tears of happiness, anger,sadness and love. What a wonderful fic. I loved this . Thank you. Ax
I have just spent all weekend reaading this. I started crying around chapter 5 and never really stopped. Tears of happiness, anger,sadness and love. What a wonderful fic. I loved this . Thank you. Ax