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36InsanityRunsInMyBlood
Heartbreaking. Excellent. I love the portrayal of emotions from the cool prince.
36InsanityRunsInMyBloodHeartbreaking. Excellent. I love the portrayal of emotions from the cool prince.
5/20/2011 c1 6Andartha
A quiet, delicate story, packed with intense emotions conveyed by no more than a subtle gesture here and a small detail there. A superb example of good story-telling. I love it.
6AndarthaA quiet, delicate story, packed with intense emotions conveyed by no more than a subtle gesture here and a small detail there. A superb example of good story-telling. I love it.
6/6/2010 c1 35Rushing'Beauty'Wonder
WOW! I got very teary eyed. The reltionship between Ozai and his mother was Wonderfully written. This probly is one of the best fics i've read in a long time.
35Rushing'Beauty'WonderWOW! I got very teary eyed. The reltionship between Ozai and his mother was Wonderfully written. This probly is one of the best fics i've read in a long time.
6/4/2010 c1 69Rickashay
This has the protential to become a fantastic story. It can stand alone but I would recommend continuing it. Wonderful writing. It had just enough detail to keep me interested in the end, perfect timing with everything, and I think you did a wonderful job as giving us a taste of a younger Ozai and Ursa. Great job!
69RickashayThis has the protential to become a fantastic story. It can stand alone but I would recommend continuing it. Wonderful writing. It had just enough detail to keep me interested in the end, perfect timing with everything, and I think you did a wonderful job as giving us a taste of a younger Ozai and Ursa. Great job!
6/4/2010 c1 20Mme.Lolabelle
Wonderful! Perfectly in character (because people like Ozai tend to be shy and reclusive in their youth)and i loved that neither Ozai or Ursa said anything, it made the instant emotional connection seem stronger.
Because it was awesome ;) I went back and read it a second time and picked up on lots of delicious little details. One, Ozai and his mother reminded me of Zuko and Ursa,
I'd never really thought about Ozai's relationship with his mother before. Secondly, in Ozai's rage Ursa held him back and calmed him down, it's a wonderful link to the series, when you think about what happens when Ursa isn't there to rein him in.
In short, everything was IC, it flowed nicely and was incredibly well thought out, all of which equals EPIC WIN for you :D
20Mme.LolabelleWonderful! Perfectly in character (because people like Ozai tend to be shy and reclusive in their youth)and i loved that neither Ozai or Ursa said anything, it made the instant emotional connection seem stronger.
Because it was awesome ;) I went back and read it a second time and picked up on lots of delicious little details. One, Ozai and his mother reminded me of Zuko and Ursa,
I'd never really thought about Ozai's relationship with his mother before. Secondly, in Ozai's rage Ursa held him back and calmed him down, it's a wonderful link to the series, when you think about what happens when Ursa isn't there to rein him in.
In short, everything was IC, it flowed nicely and was incredibly well thought out, all of which equals EPIC WIN for you :D
6/3/2010 c1 13FutureAirbender18
Meep...(This is me being speechless)
Absolutely beautiful! You have woven a wonderful tale that I am definitely favorite-ing! This makes me sympathize with Ozai, and...well... I love it. It is absolutely how I pictured him as a child, always being second best to his brother, locking his emotions up inside of him and having them all gush out at once in a heart-wrenching event. :) And adding Ursa to it was wonderful as well. The fact that she was able to calm him is perfect... ah poo, I'm rambling again. Anyways, I hope you decide to write at least one more story about these two... please. For me? Haha
13FutureAirbender18Meep...(This is me being speechless)
Absolutely beautiful! You have woven a wonderful tale that I am definitely favorite-ing! This makes me sympathize with Ozai, and...well... I love it. It is absolutely how I pictured him as a child, always being second best to his brother, locking his emotions up inside of him and having them all gush out at once in a heart-wrenching event. :) And adding Ursa to it was wonderful as well. The fact that she was able to calm him is perfect... ah poo, I'm rambling again. Anyways, I hope you decide to write at least one more story about these two... please. For me? Haha
6/3/2010 c1 125TheBlueFoxtrot A Samba
You made me go all teary eyed! For freakin' Ozai dang it! YOU are good. I do not cry.
125TheBlueFoxtrot A SambaYou made me go all teary eyed! For freakin' Ozai dang it! YOU are good. I do not cry.
6/3/2010 c1 card castles
I loved this story. I really did. The style was refreshing, and your characterization of Ozai was new and different. This is my favorite line:
"He was not a good conversationalist, but Wai-Lin enjoyed watching him interact with the world. He always appeared to be foreign to everything."
I can see Ozai being quiet, shy, and aloof. It makes a lot of sense. Great job :)
I loved this story. I really did. The style was refreshing, and your characterization of Ozai was new and different. This is my favorite line:
"He was not a good conversationalist, but Wai-Lin enjoyed watching him interact with the world. He always appeared to be foreign to everything."
I can see Ozai being quiet, shy, and aloof. It makes a lot of sense. Great job :)