for Look no further4/1/2012 c9 
4dcurley1
I hope you come back to this story! It's really good and I'd love to see where you go with it. :)
4dcurley1I hope you come back to this story! It's really good and I'd love to see where you go with it. :)
6/28/2011 c5 27silver drip
Two things I've noticed about your writing as of late is: A simple grammar error 'of' isn't 'off'. You often use of when off would make more sense. Idk how to explain the difference between the two so just look it up in a dictionary. You've done this in many of your stories. The other thing I've noticed is your use of the word 'anyhow'. It's not a common thing to say in the part of the country where I reside so it might just be me who notices that you use it a bit often. Not noticeably so to most, this is just sort of a side note. I only noticed it because I love the English language. Nice story so far btw.
27silver dripTwo things I've noticed about your writing as of late is: A simple grammar error 'of' isn't 'off'. You often use of when off would make more sense. Idk how to explain the difference between the two so just look it up in a dictionary. You've done this in many of your stories. The other thing I've noticed is your use of the word 'anyhow'. It's not a common thing to say in the part of the country where I reside so it might just be me who notices that you use it a bit often. Not noticeably so to most, this is just sort of a side note. I only noticed it because I love the English language. Nice story so far btw.
4/19/2011 c9 stacey c
I just read this story and I think its good. Can't wait for the next chapter if you plan on continuing it.
I just read this story and I think its good. Can't wait for the next chapter if you plan on continuing it.
2/9/2011 c2 popila
i really love your idea. i alwayt though that their first meeting was wrong... you know... he is a god of war and he just follow her -suuuuuure...
i really love your idea. i alwayt though that their first meeting was wrong... you know... he is a god of war and he just follow her -suuuuuure...