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3Atalantide
That made my laugh! I know it was probably meant to be a fluffy fic, but that 'royal slouch’ bit was GrEaT!
3AtalantideThat made my laugh! I know it was probably meant to be a fluffy fic, but that 'royal slouch’ bit was GrEaT!
9/10/2012 c1 atlanta
work it out cor ... and he still is figuring it out...
boys are hope less
work it out cor ... and he still is figuring it out...
boys are hope less
1/15/2012 c1 2LuMezenga
Good, good. I had it up on my favorites and re-read it just now...
Short, but cute ;)
And you're the beta of MADDIE ROSE? That makes you one hell of a writer, to be the beta if such an original author!
You have gained my respect, girl.
-LuMezenga
2LuMezengaGood, good. I had it up on my favorites and re-read it just now...
Short, but cute ;)
And you're the beta of MADDIE ROSE? That makes you one hell of a writer, to be the beta if such an original author!
You have gained my respect, girl.
-LuMezenga
5/23/2011 c1 Hilariter
That was awesome! Short, sweet, to the point, amazing!
That was awesome! Short, sweet, to the point, amazing!
4/16/2011 c1 10CrazyDyslexicNerd
LOL! I love how clueless Cor is and how miscevoius Corin is! I have a thing for making random titles of illiteration. One of my friends is Carnivorus Cassie, another is Evil Emily and so on. I have just made up one for each character in this fic! Cor of course is Clueless Cor, what else? Then there's Cheeky Corin not the best but still, and Annoyed Aravis, which suits her quite often, although sometimes she's Awesome!
-Dyslexic Nerd
10CrazyDyslexicNerdLOL! I love how clueless Cor is and how miscevoius Corin is! I have a thing for making random titles of illiteration. One of my friends is Carnivorus Cassie, another is Evil Emily and so on. I have just made up one for each character in this fic! Cor of course is Clueless Cor, what else? Then there's Cheeky Corin not the best but still, and Annoyed Aravis, which suits her quite often, although sometimes she's Awesome!
-Dyslexic Nerd
1/24/2011 c1 AslanLover
Oh,oh,oh...
Could you PLEASE make a sequel?
Please?
It's really good.:)
Oh,oh,oh...
Could you PLEASE make a sequel?
Please?
It's really good.:)
12/7/2010 c1 AslanLover
Um, could you like,
I son't know...
Update?
Um, could you like,
I son't know...
Update?
11/24/2010 c1 childoffaith
i really like it! do you think you could extend it into some awesome story? i would love that!
i really like it! do you think you could extend it into some awesome story? i would love that!
9/16/2010 c1 apocalyptic lullabies
Cute. A bit out of character, though, speaking in terms of Aravis. She wouldn't say "Shut up", as that is a modern saying. The Golden Age is barely 'modern'.
Oh, and from something you wrote on your profile about Aravis and Cor. Wouldn't she be saying something more along the lines of: "Oh my Aslan, he is hot," as opposed to: "Oh my God, he is hot." However, that said, they are both blasphemous, and not something that should be said in their interpenetrating dimension, as Aslan, or Elohim, walks the planet still...
Anyhow, this was still a very cute story, and showed the brother in character believably, I simply do not see her as that lady-like, or her phrasing.
-Amariah, WAoSC
Cute. A bit out of character, though, speaking in terms of Aravis. She wouldn't say "Shut up", as that is a modern saying. The Golden Age is barely 'modern'.
Oh, and from something you wrote on your profile about Aravis and Cor. Wouldn't she be saying something more along the lines of: "Oh my Aslan, he is hot," as opposed to: "Oh my God, he is hot." However, that said, they are both blasphemous, and not something that should be said in their interpenetrating dimension, as Aslan, or Elohim, walks the planet still...
Anyhow, this was still a very cute story, and showed the brother in character believably, I simply do not see her as that lady-like, or her phrasing.
-Amariah, WAoSC
9/11/2010 c1 FelipeMarcusThomas
I like this one shot. You have the three characters behaving in a way that seems quite realistic.
I like this one shot. You have the three characters behaving in a way that seems quite realistic.
8/22/2010 c1 6FF.netfanHANNAH
You are being too harsh on yourself. It is a great one-shot.
* hannah *
6FF.netfanHANNAHYou are being too harsh on yourself. It is a great one-shot.
* hannah *
8/2/2010 c1 17Calyn
Cor looked between the two, confused. "Aravis? You're with Corin?"
"Nay," Corin said with an air of smug satisfaction.
"Corin," Aravis said menacingly. "Shut. Up."
THIS. IS. PERFECT. And you capture Corin's mischievousness, Aravis' lady-ness, and Cor's cluelessness wonderfully, although I probably love Corin the best. He's so cheeky.
Not sucky at all. Shut up.
17CalynCor looked between the two, confused. "Aravis? You're with Corin?"
"Nay," Corin said with an air of smug satisfaction.
"Corin," Aravis said menacingly. "Shut. Up."
THIS. IS. PERFECT. And you capture Corin's mischievousness, Aravis' lady-ness, and Cor's cluelessness wonderfully, although I probably love Corin the best. He's so cheeky.
Not sucky at all. Shut up.
6/26/2010 c1 4HideSeekKeep
This was not awful at all! It was incredibly sweet, as a matter of fact. I enjoyed Cor's confusion (and possible jealousy?) to what was going on. The interaction among the three of them was also very enjoyable to read. Great job!
4HideSeekKeepThis was not awful at all! It was incredibly sweet, as a matter of fact. I enjoyed Cor's confusion (and possible jealousy?) to what was going on. The interaction among the three of them was also very enjoyable to read. Great job!
6/21/2010 c1 38almostinsane
Great story! I think it was nice to read and it brought a smile to my face. Thanks for writing this. God bless!
38almostinsaneGreat story! I think it was nice to read and it brought a smile to my face. Thanks for writing this. God bless!