for The After School Special2/27 c4 Riam
Funny! I loved it, looking forward to a folow up.
Funny! I loved it, looking forward to a folow up.
4/28/2012 c4 
5Miki and Mel
I love this story! i cant wait until you update!
Keep up all the good work..
Mel :)
5Miki and MelI love this story! i cant wait until you update!
Keep up all the good work..
Mel :)
3/2/2012 c4 0xxxxxx0
OMIGOD! You're amazing! Why did you ever stop writing this? It's fantastic! Please write more; it's a crime not to! (Well, maybe not a crime, but...)
OMIGOD! You're amazing! Why did you ever stop writing this? It's fantastic! Please write more; it's a crime not to! (Well, maybe not a crime, but...)
7/17/2011 c4 dribnevar
love it! especially the part where she was envisioning him through the ages! thanks for the hard work!
love it! especially the part where she was envisioning him through the ages! thanks for the hard work!
7/13/2011 c4 3dunedin girl
Sorry I didn't leave a review on the other chapters but I was reading on my mobile phone and it is soooo slow to log in and type the damn thing. I hope you made your friend really happy with this story (or gave the appropriate kick). I really like this version of mental Edward and Bella they're more real and funny, so job well done, I've also added you to my favourites and alerts and hope you 'll update soon...
3dunedin girlSorry I didn't leave a review on the other chapters but I was reading on my mobile phone and it is soooo slow to log in and type the damn thing. I hope you made your friend really happy with this story (or gave the appropriate kick). I really like this version of mental Edward and Bella they're more real and funny, so job well done, I've also added you to my favourites and alerts and hope you 'll update soon...
7/11/2011 c3 bzwifenmom24-7
Bella holding the biggest crucifix we owned, roughly the size of our lab table and just as thick, across her chest like a hunting rifle. She took a big breath and growled out,
"Bring it!"
LMFAO!
Bella holding the biggest crucifix we owned, roughly the size of our lab table and just as thick, across her chest like a hunting rifle. She took a big breath and growled out,
"Bring it!"
LMFAO!
7/11/2011 c4 2Stephanie O
Of course I'm still having fun! This story has been a blast so far, and I can't wait to see Ch. 5! :)
2Stephanie OOf course I'm still having fun! This story has been a blast so far, and I can't wait to see Ch. 5! :)
6/21/2011 c1 Ray
That was so good:) you did a great job!
That was so good:) you did a great job!
6/20/2011 c3 pinkdrink
Lol awsome! Now can rosalie get her ass handedto her because every story I read she's so bad ass and so scary and... I really dontthink that's fair cause she's really not :-) can't wait for the next chapter
Lol awsome! Now can rosalie get her ass handedto her because every story I read she's so bad ass and so scary and... I really dontthink that's fair cause she's really not :-) can't wait for the next chapter
6/16/2011 c3 KhristenHartgrove
hahaha really bella is funny that had me lauging. this story is really goood.
hahaha really bella is funny that had me lauging. this story is really goood.