for Will of Fire5/30 c26 kiddamix
It's been about a year that you finished this up but i just wanted to say that i really enjoyed this fic. you wrote it beautifully, they story/plot were amazing. You caught every character's personality perfectly and the ending was excellent as well. I love that you didn't rush things at any point and can i just say that right when you had Sakura and the others put the genjutsu barrier up i squealed? My sister asked what was wrong and all i could say was "It's starting! It's starting!"X3 thanks for such a great work :) looking forward to reading more of your other stuff :D
It's been about a year that you finished this up but i just wanted to say that i really enjoyed this fic. you wrote it beautifully, they story/plot were amazing. You caught every character's personality perfectly and the ending was excellent as well. I love that you didn't rush things at any point and can i just say that right when you had Sakura and the others put the genjutsu barrier up i squealed? My sister asked what was wrong and all i could say was "It's starting! It's starting!"X3 thanks for such a great work :) looking forward to reading more of your other stuff :D
5/26 c26 Guest
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5/25 c24 Guest
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5/25 c24 Little Kunai
I loved the quiet moments the flashbacks I can feel the tension running through everyone tight in my gut
I loved the quiet moments the flashbacks I can feel the tension running through everyone tight in my gut
5/25 c23 Little Kunai
Shit you scared me half to death when kakashi was on the operating table. I'm glad they squashed the moss and root like bugs
Shit you scared me half to death when kakashi was on the operating table. I'm glad they squashed the moss and root like bugs
5/25 c22 Little Kunai
Shit! They were captured? Pakkun is as outspoken and independent as kaakashi so no surprise there. Hope they will get there in time
Shit! They were captured? Pakkun is as outspoken and independent as kaakashi so no surprise there. Hope they will get there in time
5/22 c23 Guest
What a mess
What a mess
5/22 c22 Guest
Omg ;(
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5/22 c21 Guest
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5/21 c23 Guest
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5/21 c22 Guest
Omg
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5/21 c21 Guest
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5/21 c26 Aemoxx
Beautiful story. one of the best and i am so in love with your pictures that you drew for the story, cant stop looking at them! you are amazing.
Beautiful story. one of the best and i am so in love with your pictures that you drew for the story, cant stop looking at them! you are amazing.
5/10 c18 Guest
omg so sad
omg so sad

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