for Your Betrayal8/2/2012 c14 D. Unique
Wow, I had written so much in my review but only to find out that my phone wouldn't allow me to send it. I'm sorry to say that this review will me much shorter than the other one I had intended on giving you. I love this story, but seeing as you didn't update since two months ago, I don't know whether my attention span for the story will stay. I love how you keep the characters with their powers just like the show. About this particular chapter, I would say I liked Andrew's part in it. He seemed like he was caught doing something he wasn't supposed to do, so I am wandering if there is something going to happen in the next chapter. I can't wait for you to update, please don't take too long because I like to read completed stories so that I wouldn't have to wait for the author to finish the chapter. I am going to follow this story, because by far, I thought that I had found my favorite Sailor Moon Story, but yours had proved me wrong. This is one of my favorites. Ha, ha, maybe the short review didn't turn out to be so short afterall.
Wow, I had written so much in my review but only to find out that my phone wouldn't allow me to send it. I'm sorry to say that this review will me much shorter than the other one I had intended on giving you. I love this story, but seeing as you didn't update since two months ago, I don't know whether my attention span for the story will stay. I love how you keep the characters with their powers just like the show. About this particular chapter, I would say I liked Andrew's part in it. He seemed like he was caught doing something he wasn't supposed to do, so I am wandering if there is something going to happen in the next chapter. I can't wait for you to update, please don't take too long because I like to read completed stories so that I wouldn't have to wait for the author to finish the chapter. I am going to follow this story, because by far, I thought that I had found my favorite Sailor Moon Story, but yours had proved me wrong. This is one of my favorites. Ha, ha, maybe the short review didn't turn out to be so short afterall.
6/30/2012 c5 Guest
I really enjoyed this chapter, it really showed the raw emotion between Serena and Darien.
I think it is really good. :D Keep it up.
I really enjoyed this chapter, it really showed the raw emotion between Serena and Darien.
I think it is really good. :D Keep it up.
5/20/2012 c14 Jazz379705
Yeah Go Andrew I always knew there was a reason I though that he was a major cutie
Yeah Go Andrew I always knew there was a reason I though that he was a major cutie
5/18/2012 c14 TropicalRemix
I wonder who the new enemy is. The way you described his eyes, is it darien?
I wonder who the new enemy is. The way you described his eyes, is it darien?
5/18/2012 c14 
10TsukiyoTenshi
That had better not be Darien misusing his powers to spy on Serena!
UPDATE WHENEVER!
10TsukiyoTenshiThat had better not be Darien misusing his powers to spy on Serena!
UPDATE WHENEVER!