Reviews: An Adventure Beyond Time

5/7 c6

5Warpwind
you do realize that ancient Greeks didn't have girlfriends right?

3/21 c53 WhirlPoolLord
Oh, so the gift is a bracelet for the person he will marry. Wasn't expecting that. Anyway, Part 2 here we go.

3/21 c52 WhirlPoolLord
Aw... sad departure. Though, the last chap is ahead. :D

3/21 c49 WhirlPoolLord
Uh, the thanking Kronos thing was sarcasm right...

3/21 c43 WhirlPoolLord
Well, that was deep. Hmm... now Rachel or Zoe... Rachel or Zoe... I can't decide now. :(

3/21 c41 WhirlPoolLord
it's amusing how they both run into a different girl. :3

3/21 c39 WhirlPoolLord
I wonder what the gift is going to be. Maybe a weapon?

3/21 c29 WhirlPoolLord
The story is perfect except for a few grammar mistakes, but who's perfect? :3

3/21 c15 WhirlPoolLord
I hope it's Zoe. If not then oh well. :(

3/19 c6

30Leonard Church814
Lol

2/7 c1

7SingWritePercabeth
You aren't messing Percabeth up... are you?
Because Percabeth is my life, and Prachel?
That is my enemy...
Sorry for dramatics. Just kinda funny.
But seriously, up there what I said was true.
Just like, not as dramatic.

1/30 c3 Anon
I like it, but Percy is really sophisticated in his language and planning.

1/16 c10

10lateVMlover
Oh, I remember now who she is!

1/16 c9 lateVMlover
I don't really remember Zoe. Only read the books once and it's been 2 years!

1/16 c7 lateVMlover
Okay, I seemed to forgot an important detail in the books. Who is Rachel? I was think she was the daughter of Athena, the main female in the books.

319 P 1 3 Last Next »