for Starstruck5/16 c10 Guest
Will you please update? This is my favorite fanfiction on this website, and this is actually the only fic I still read on here. I love all your characters, and your writing is fantastic.
ITS KILLING ME TO WAIT FOR MONTHS BETWEEN UPDATES
Will you please update? This is my favorite fanfiction on this website, and this is actually the only fic I still read on here. I love all your characters, and your writing is fantastic.
ITS KILLING ME TO WAIT FOR MONTHS BETWEEN UPDATES
5/13 c3 Sellesia-Smile
So I just read this for the third time. I keep trying to get hooked on other fan fictions, but I just can't help but think "but why aren't the Marauders in a band?" I'm seriously fangirling over this story. So you should update. Because I love you. That's right. I said it. The L word. Love. OMG I have no idea what I'm saying! Please bring me some sanity in the form of another chapter. I'm begging you! lessthanthree
So I just read this for the third time. I keep trying to get hooked on other fan fictions, but I just can't help but think "but why aren't the Marauders in a band?" I'm seriously fangirling over this story. So you should update. Because I love you. That's right. I said it. The L word. Love. OMG I have no idea what I'm saying! Please bring me some sanity in the form of another chapter. I'm begging you! lessthanthree
5/13 c5 Guest
I'm really loving this story so far.
I don't think Lily was too harsh to James. Why would she be nice to him? She didn't ask him to come to her house. Plus, he's being arrogant and kind of rude, smirking all the time. But, yes, that's James, and he was an arrogant little prat.
Does Remus have lupus? It would make sense. His surname is Lupin, and he can't be a werewolf since they're not magical in this AU.
Ok, I'll just stop talking and go read the next chapter.
I'm really loving this story so far.
I don't think Lily was too harsh to James. Why would she be nice to him? She didn't ask him to come to her house. Plus, he's being arrogant and kind of rude, smirking all the time. But, yes, that's James, and he was an arrogant little prat.
Does Remus have lupus? It would make sense. His surname is Lupin, and he can't be a werewolf since they're not magical in this AU.
Ok, I'll just stop talking and go read the next chapter.
5/13 c9 
6yanne xx
The song. Please please please it has to be given a tune please please please. This is an uhmazing AU. :')))
6yanne xxThe song. Please please please it has to be given a tune please please please. This is an uhmazing AU. :')))
5/13 c1 Guest
I ADORE this story. To death. It is everything I never knew I needed. The scene where James sings to Lily is perfect and I love his nickname for her. My favorite part of the whole story so far is definitely the quidditch game! I love that you have incorporated a bunch of things from the wizarding world instead of just taking the characters. When are you going to update? I don't know how much more waiting I can take? (Though I understand you are probably super busy and I don't want to put any pressure on you)
I ADORE this story. To death. It is everything I never knew I needed. The scene where James sings to Lily is perfect and I love his nickname for her. My favorite part of the whole story so far is definitely the quidditch game! I love that you have incorporated a bunch of things from the wizarding world instead of just taking the characters. When are you going to update? I don't know how much more waiting I can take? (Though I understand you are probably super busy and I don't want to put any pressure on you)
5/10 c2 Guest
British (European): 'football'. American: 'soccer'.
Sorry, I had to point that out, because these characters are British, so you should make them look/sound British. Unless they're Americans in this story?
I'm sorry for being pain in the butt, but, you said you wanted reviews and you wanted people to tell you what they thought was lacking, so...
British (European): 'football'. American: 'soccer'.
Sorry, I had to point that out, because these characters are British, so you should make them look/sound British. Unless they're Americans in this story?
I'm sorry for being pain in the butt, but, you said you wanted reviews and you wanted people to tell you what they thought was lacking, so...
5/10 c1 Guest
You Americans are obsessed with Russians. They're always the main villains in your movies/books/fan fiction, while they couldn't care less about you. That's hilarious. But, you could at least do some research, because Valentino is not a Russian name. Hell, it's not even a Slavic name. Valentino DeMort, sounds more like Italian-French combination.
Other than that, I think this is really interesting and I like it. :)
You Americans are obsessed with Russians. They're always the main villains in your movies/books/fan fiction, while they couldn't care less about you. That's hilarious. But, you could at least do some research, because Valentino is not a Russian name. Hell, it's not even a Slavic name. Valentino DeMort, sounds more like Italian-French combination.
Other than that, I think this is really interesting and I like it. :)
5/5 c10 Guest
UPDATE PLEASE
UPDATE PLEASE
5/4 c10 Nict
Fantastic story! Really, good job on it.
Fantastic story! Really, good job on it.
5/2 c10 1LostInTranslation226
This whole thing is great! I love all the parallels to the books, clever Gollum, you ;) I can't wait for more!
1LostInTranslation226This whole thing is great! I love all the parallels to the books, clever Gollum, you ;) I can't wait for more!
4/28 c10 Guest
This is seriously the best Jily AU I've ever read. Please update soon!
This is seriously the best Jily AU I've ever read. Please update soon!
4/25 c1 Guest
OMG! You need to update ASAP it really great, brilliant etc. so what'cha siting for hurry!
OMG! You need to update ASAP it really great, brilliant etc. so what'cha siting for hurry!
4/11 c10 Guest
can u pls update on the next chapter soon!
can u pls update on the next chapter soon!
4/8 c9 Guest
Please continue
Please continue