for The Cullens do it Different5/16 c2 Guest
YOOOOOUU SUCK U HATER
YOOOOOUU SUCK U HATER
5/16 c1 awesomegirl
Sexist pig twilight awesome!
Sexist pig twilight awesome!
5/17/2012 c8 Guest
Omg soooo funny wright more
Omg soooo funny wright more
4/23/2012 c8 C1AH3LBR0VIC
IT IS TOTALLY AWESOME I MEAN WHY DON'T YOU JUST DO MORE CHAPTERS OF THIS THIS IS HELLA GREAT
IT IS TOTALLY AWESOME I MEAN WHY DON'T YOU JUST DO MORE CHAPTERS OF THIS THIS IS HELLA GREAT
12/7/2011 c8 jen
please please please please write more :D it is an amazing story so far :D
please please please please write more :D it is an amazing story so far :D
3/28/2011 c8 Laura
Please update!
Please update!
8/5/2010 c6 
51WhyFightAnEclipseWhenTheresJaz
Wow! haha. I think you should have it be like impossible for the Cullens to get out. Or the principle watches the hotel tapes to make sure no one snuck out at night. Then they get caught. Haha. Update
51WhyFightAnEclipseWhenTheresJazWow! haha. I think you should have it be like impossible for the Cullens to get out. Or the principle watches the hotel tapes to make sure no one snuck out at night. Then they get caught. Haha. Update
7/22/2010 c5 51WhyFightAnEclipseWhenTheresJaz
Good work. Maybe you could have the Jock run tothe princples while hes still on stage and whisperes in his ear that Jake punched him. So he makes jake go to the office. He comes back and talks to him but says that he can go to canada. But jake pulls out a wud of cash, thanking Edward for slipping it into his hands before he leaves the aditoruim. So he ends up bragging him for money. Maybe a little yelling from the pronciple... some threats from Jake :O I think that'd add to a little something. Haha. But update! 33
51WhyFightAnEclipseWhenTheresJazGood work. Maybe you could have the Jock run tothe princples while hes still on stage and whisperes in his ear that Jake punched him. So he makes jake go to the office. He comes back and talks to him but says that he can go to canada. But jake pulls out a wud of cash, thanking Edward for slipping it into his hands before he leaves the aditoruim. So he ends up bragging him for money. Maybe a little yelling from the pronciple... some threats from Jake :O I think that'd add to a little something. Haha. But update! 33
7/14/2010 c4 1Queen of Night
hehe it would be awesome if the jock was talking about nessie and she wailed on him; just a thought :D
1Queen of Nighthehe it would be awesome if the jock was talking about nessie and she wailed on him; just a thought :D
7/14/2010 c4 51WhyFightAnEclipseWhenTheresJaz
Good chapter! I cant wait! Maybe you could have the jock after Nessie. Then Jacobb getss all defesive and takes that stupid jock out. I think you need to have a little more bullying from the guys. I mean, I can deffentily see Emmett and Jacob, maybe more Jacob, getting into a fist fight! :D You should have that over Renesmee then Renesmee comes over and talks her crap and is all like wtf, live my man alone. I don't want some creep that only thinks about football. Somthing like that. Well, whatever you have totally works. So like totally like review like soon. ;p
And it works again! my keyboard! :DDDD
51WhyFightAnEclipseWhenTheresJazGood chapter! I cant wait! Maybe you could have the jock after Nessie. Then Jacobb getss all defesive and takes that stupid jock out. I think you need to have a little more bullying from the guys. I mean, I can deffentily see Emmett and Jacob, maybe more Jacob, getting into a fist fight! :D You should have that over Renesmee then Renesmee comes over and talks her crap and is all like wtf, live my man alone. I don't want some creep that only thinks about football. Somthing like that. Well, whatever you have totally works. So like totally like review like soon. ;p
And it works again! my keyboard! :DDDD
7/13/2010 c4 crazychocochica17
When I finished this chapter I said one thing: Oh God. This will not end well for the jock but it's enjoyment for me! Hehehe I think he is thinking about Nessie and Jake with totally do a smack down on the jock's ass and Edward will get in it too. Awesome chap! Update SOON!
When I finished this chapter I said one thing: Oh God. This will not end well for the jock but it's enjoyment for me! Hehehe I think he is thinking about Nessie and Jake with totally do a smack down on the jock's ass and Edward will get in it too. Awesome chap! Update SOON!