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11/10/2011 c1 22Falcon97
That was brilliant! You're a great writter and I really enjoyed reading it.
2/10/2011 c1 29Tuli-Susi
Oh, that was heartfelt. And very very true. My mother, if not myself, subscribes to the belief that everything happens for a reason. And one has to wonder what would have happened to Mossflower and Boar the fighter if Rose had survived. And of course to the entire 'Redwall' collection. I have a feeling that Rose was destined to die as soon as she was created.
9/8/2010 c1 YoursTruly
That Was beyond perfect.

I cant believe how well you go the moles speech lol it sounded like the real thing.

^^

The story was beautiful and i really loved it.

you did an awesome job!
7/5/2010 c1 Ted
I wonder if Martin's vision was some sort of 'what if' scenario his mind was playing out? After all, we know from the book that Noonvale wasn't destroyed. I liked how you left that point a little vague.
7/2/2010 c1 11warrior4
Well now, that was a very interesting take on things. Very skillfully written. The story itself is...well bittersweet is how I'd probably call it. Kind of like Martin's life in general. Still all in all a very nice tale. Bravo to you for writing it.
6/30/2010 c1 5Lightkit
Wow. This is good. You captured the moles' accent really well! :) Poor Martin... But what he says makes solid sense. :) Or what you said, anyway.

Good job on this!

~Lightkit

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