for Back to Elementary School1/29 c3 wolf girl811
will ranma learn any martial art move in his little child form she a fighter and crazy keep happening to ranma better to keep your skill sharp and get stronger cause i won't be surprise if there were rival who would make arch nemesis out of ranma the life a martial artist is a path full of challenges.
will ranma learn any martial art move in his little child form she a fighter and crazy keep happening to ranma better to keep your skill sharp and get stronger cause i won't be surprise if there were rival who would make arch nemesis out of ranma the life a martial artist is a path full of challenges.
11/28/2012 c3 
10Noy Telin'u
Hi there!
By coincidence, I saw this on Rankofics when I was seeing the updates!
This story... There are a few problems.
One, Ranma was a bit wordy with Cologne and others. It didn't seem right.
Two, did Ranma tell his life story? He doesn't do that! Arggg!
Three, even being that tiny, I doubt the truck would kill him. But... Eh.
Four, Ryoga can be cruel, but he's not THAT cruel. Laying it a little thick.
Oddly, I am reading this manga for the last few days before finding this.
Weird... O_o
Anyway, write on! I'll enjoy it even if I groan a bit.
Crazy pervert girl... Seriously, do first graders in Japan have clothes like that available? Wow.
10Noy Telin'uHi there!
By coincidence, I saw this on Rankofics when I was seeing the updates!
This story... There are a few problems.
One, Ranma was a bit wordy with Cologne and others. It didn't seem right.
Two, did Ranma tell his life story? He doesn't do that! Arggg!
Three, even being that tiny, I doubt the truck would kill him. But... Eh.
Four, Ryoga can be cruel, but he's not THAT cruel. Laying it a little thick.
Oddly, I am reading this manga for the last few days before finding this.
Weird... O_o
Anyway, write on! I'll enjoy it even if I groan a bit.
Crazy pervert girl... Seriously, do first graders in Japan have clothes like that available? Wow.
11/3/2012 c1 5Pyromania101
Why those cowardly bastards! They keep bitching about honor, yet possess none themselves. Hypocrites, the lot of them! Maybe Mikuro could set them straight, or something terrible could happen to them. I hope one or the other happenes, as those bastards deserve it! Anyway, bye!
5Pyromania101Why those cowardly bastards! They keep bitching about honor, yet possess none themselves. Hypocrites, the lot of them! Maybe Mikuro could set them straight, or something terrible could happen to them. I hope one or the other happenes, as those bastards deserve it! Anyway, bye!
11/3/2012 c2 Pyromania101
Heh heh, the spanking was funny, but canon. I hope those NWC bastards get what they deserve in due time. I;d go onto a long-winded review, but then I'd be wasting your time, so c'ya!
Heh heh, the spanking was funny, but canon. I hope those NWC bastards get what they deserve in due time. I;d go onto a long-winded review, but then I'd be wasting your time, so c'ya!
11/2/2012 c3 Pyromania101
This story is very cute so far. Ranma having to go back to elementary school in his girl form is gonna be a hoot and a half! Anyway, see you next time!
This story is very cute so far. Ranma having to go back to elementary school in his girl form is gonna be a hoot and a half! Anyway, see you next time!
6/23/2012 c2 frytrix
yet another story where the author forces ranma to stay 100% girl one way or another,, and the same story makes him way to manipulated, he has been manipulated all his life and should have been able to spot the lies...
I am going to stop reading the story here, feel free to delete it or keep writing it, anyhow good luck with whatever you chose.
i am propably pretty annoyed for one reason or another as i post this, that and i hate stories where he stays permanent as a girl, it is just wrong in many ways.
F
yet another story where the author forces ranma to stay 100% girl one way or another,, and the same story makes him way to manipulated, he has been manipulated all his life and should have been able to spot the lies...
I am going to stop reading the story here, feel free to delete it or keep writing it, anyhow good luck with whatever you chose.
i am propably pretty annoyed for one reason or another as i post this, that and i hate stories where he stays permanent as a girl, it is just wrong in many ways.
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6/18/2012 c2 10mikebreslau
Quite well written, and amusing too.
However, not being familiar with the obscure crossover series, I found the characters ill-defined and unbelievable. Also, too many absurdities were packed into these two chapters - you have strained my suspension of disbelief.
good try.
Mike
10mikebreslauQuite well written, and amusing too.
However, not being familiar with the obscure crossover series, I found the characters ill-defined and unbelievable. Also, too many absurdities were packed into these two chapters - you have strained my suspension of disbelief.
good try.
Mike
5/29/2012 c3 1the Original Anonymous
Wow. It's been a while. Nice chapter. Just to sate my curiosity, are you going to have Ranma opt to stay as he is now? I know the canon series isn't finished yet, but it seems more and more Iori is leaning towards just staying a child. Considering Ranma has considerably brighter circumstances, will he decide to stay a kid? Obviously, you don't have to tell me, but I do wonder.
1the Original AnonymousWow. It's been a while. Nice chapter. Just to sate my curiosity, are you going to have Ranma opt to stay as he is now? I know the canon series isn't finished yet, but it seems more and more Iori is leaning towards just staying a child. Considering Ranma has considerably brighter circumstances, will he decide to stay a kid? Obviously, you don't have to tell me, but I do wonder.
5/17/2012 c3 2Guardoflight
Another lovely chapter, a few easy mistakes such buy instead of by but anyways its a captivating read I look forward to your next chapter.
On another note I'm curious whether Yume would teach Ranma some common sense about acting his age to not arose suspicion.
2GuardoflightAnother lovely chapter, a few easy mistakes such buy instead of by but anyways its a captivating read I look forward to your next chapter.
On another note I'm curious whether Yume would teach Ranma some common sense about acting his age to not arose suspicion.
5/16/2012 c3 7FrictionX42
Fantastic work, as usual. Been looking forward to another chapter of this for a long time. The wait was worth it- that was great! Ranma actually gets to look smart for once!
7FrictionX42Fantastic work, as usual. Been looking forward to another chapter of this for a long time. The wait was worth it- that was great! Ranma actually gets to look smart for once!
5/16/2012 c3 Ranmayamabushi
well worth waiting for, fun story, 3 how is Ranma going to get out of this one...maybe get away from the nutjob lol but reliving his missed childhood. mmm would be fun matching him with Cheeta's daughter. blah mark of a good story having me thinking of all the things that Could happen!
well worth waiting for, fun story, 3 how is Ranma going to get out of this one...maybe get away from the nutjob lol but reliving his missed childhood. mmm would be fun matching him with Cheeta's daughter. blah mark of a good story having me thinking of all the things that Could happen!
5/15/2012 c3 Jokulmorder
Looks like you discovered the word 'extirpate', not a word commonly used. Nice seeing someone using higher language however.
Looks like you discovered the word 'extirpate', not a word commonly used. Nice seeing someone using higher language however.