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3VitaniSachi115
I'll be honest, the first time I saw this story summary I thought it wasn't the story for me. Then, on Tumblr, I saw a review for it and thought I'd give it a shot. I fell in love with this story almost instantly, I loved the dynamic character personalities. I caught up in reading the whole thing in two days and I'm very apprehensive to follow the story to the end! I think they should stay on Konoha for the record. Congratulations and good job with the amazing story! I greatly appreciate talented authors such as yourself!:)
3VitaniSachi115I'll be honest, the first time I saw this story summary I thought it wasn't the story for me. Then, on Tumblr, I saw a review for it and thought I'd give it a shot. I fell in love with this story almost instantly, I loved the dynamic character personalities. I caught up in reading the whole thing in two days and I'm very apprehensive to follow the story to the end! I think they should stay on Konoha for the record. Congratulations and good job with the amazing story! I greatly appreciate talented authors such as yourself!:)
5/19 c51 Beautiful Garnet
Yeah.. this chap is really sappy. I can't hold back my tears to flow.
I really like your writing style. Keep it up!
Yeah.. this chap is really sappy. I can't hold back my tears to flow.
I really like your writing style. Keep it up!
5/19 c50 Beautiful Garnet
Oh my god! This chapter was full with emotion and tears. I can't help but cry when Sasuke's anger & misunderstanding made Naruto injured & very hurt.
Oh my god! This chapter was full with emotion and tears. I can't help but cry when Sasuke's anger & misunderstanding made Naruto injured & very hurt.
5/18 c65 1Katsumi-phoenix
Wow! I can't tell you how amazing it is you fic. I fall in love and I've been drug with it, reading it since I discover it 2 weeks ago.
It's... It's... It's just incredible. You are an amazing writter!
I hope college gets better and give you more time. Besides, I know is not bad :P but I really hope and like that you'll update the next one soon, because I can't wait to know what's going to happend next!
Hope hear from you soon! _
1Katsumi-phoenixWow! I can't tell you how amazing it is you fic. I fall in love and I've been drug with it, reading it since I discover it 2 weeks ago.
It's... It's... It's just incredible. You are an amazing writter!
I hope college gets better and give you more time. Besides, I know is not bad :P but I really hope and like that you'll update the next one soon, because I can't wait to know what's going to happend next!
Hope hear from you soon! _
5/17 c65 mgd
damnit! i reached the last chapter updated in 2 days!
dsfg NOOO! I LOVE THIS STORY I WISH IT WAS COMPLETED WITH THE REST OF THE CHAPS DX
I dun like waiting
damnit! i reached the last chapter updated in 2 days!
dsfg NOOO! I LOVE THIS STORY I WISH IT WAS COMPLETED WITH THE REST OF THE CHAPS DX
I dun like waiting
5/17 c65 Kurodarkness
I love this story! I just started reading it and couldn't stop until I completely finished all that's been written and it's so good! I've never cried and laughed so much in a story, thank you for writing this and I can't wait to read future updates!
I love this story! I just started reading it and couldn't stop until I completely finished all that's been written and it's so good! I've never cried and laughed so much in a story, thank you for writing this and I can't wait to read future updates!
5/17 c61 1rhaiven lavine
i like it how you made sai so hilarious and also i'm a yaoi fan so i say i really enjoyed this!
1rhaiven lavinei like it how you made sai so hilarious and also i'm a yaoi fan so i say i really enjoyed this!
5/16 c65 1DevilishWolf
I love your story so much. It's well written, the characters are very authentic and the story line is incredible. This is my absolutely favourite story and I hope you won't ever stop continuing it. Please update it quickly. I just can't wait for more.
1DevilishWolfI love your story so much. It's well written, the characters are very authentic and the story line is incredible. This is my absolutely favourite story and I hope you won't ever stop continuing it. Please update it quickly. I just can't wait for more.
5/7 c65 6Yuuka-90
hi i want to congratulate you for the excellent story to miss me mourn, laugh with its chapters and scenes imnumerables between Sasuke and Naruto. I look forward to the next chapter of the fic and that has left me in awe. Ojara update soon as you have earned another reader. goodbye
6Yuuka-90hi i want to congratulate you for the excellent story to miss me mourn, laugh with its chapters and scenes imnumerables between Sasuke and Naruto. I look forward to the next chapter of the fic and that has left me in awe. Ojara update soon as you have earned another reader. goodbye
5/3 c65 SamoanKunoichi
Kyaaaaaa! I. Love. This. Fic! :D I almost died coz my wifi died and i couldnt read this but now im HAPPY! Yeah... Just dont die becoz ill die too :) no pressure
Kyaaaaaa! I. Love. This. Fic! :D I almost died coz my wifi died and i couldnt read this but now im HAPPY! Yeah... Just dont die becoz ill die too :) no pressure
5/4 c20 21maipigen
loving this story so far - only tiny thing in this chapter irked me a little - Naruto is in fact a pretty good strategist, especially in battle, but I know what you meant so I'm not being totally against the wording hehe.
Your grammar issues aren't too bad given you're from a non english speaking country, I should know I am too, so I tend to notice errors that aren't my own at least;D I don't know if you have a beta so far or in the later parts of the story, but if not I'd suggest you find someone who's great with tenses and that stuff 'cause that's where most of it tends to fall apart from time to time.
But...enough nitpicking, I just want you to know that I'm extremely into this lovely tale of yours and aside from a personal hope that Naruto doesn't end up with Sakura, I can't wait to keep reading!
21maipigenloving this story so far - only tiny thing in this chapter irked me a little - Naruto is in fact a pretty good strategist, especially in battle, but I know what you meant so I'm not being totally against the wording hehe.
Your grammar issues aren't too bad given you're from a non english speaking country, I should know I am too, so I tend to notice errors that aren't my own at least;D I don't know if you have a beta so far or in the later parts of the story, but if not I'd suggest you find someone who's great with tenses and that stuff 'cause that's where most of it tends to fall apart from time to time.
But...enough nitpicking, I just want you to know that I'm extremely into this lovely tale of yours and aside from a personal hope that Naruto doesn't end up with Sakura, I can't wait to keep reading!
5/2 c65 Lord of the Disc
Cute story so far. Some of the family scenes remind me a little bit of a fic called "Medicinal Lullaby" by Shivakashi (in that Naruto is a single parent who rises his child outside the village and struggles to return to the ninja village).
Looking forward to the nect chapter.
Cute story so far. Some of the family scenes remind me a little bit of a fic called "Medicinal Lullaby" by Shivakashi (in that Naruto is a single parent who rises his child outside the village and struggles to return to the ninja village).
Looking forward to the nect chapter.