for the green pteranodon7/20/2012 c9 
1retrowolf
i have the story planned out already, the problem i that i don't know how to word the story out. but thanks for the help, can't wait for your story
1retrowolfi have the story planned out already, the problem i that i don't know how to word the story out. but thanks for the help, can't wait for your story
7/10/2012 c9 24StoryMaker7
I can't wait to see his suit. Sorry I haven't started mine yet, but I have so manny ideas and I'm a bit lazy right now, but I'll tell you when it's up, maybe you won't have so much writers block with someone els giving ideas. LIke maybe givine petrie a girl freind. I know it's clitch but a so fun and it's a bit of a tradition in a way.
24StoryMaker7I can't wait to see his suit. Sorry I haven't started mine yet, but I have so manny ideas and I'm a bit lazy right now, but I'll tell you when it's up, maybe you won't have so much writers block with someone els giving ideas. LIke maybe givine petrie a girl freind. I know it's clitch but a so fun and it's a bit of a tradition in a way.
7/26/2011 c7 5JudgmentDragon25
Ouch. That's going to hurt for Petrie. I have a suggestion for your story. When I read your story, I get confused a little bit as I read. The sentences are not spaced, I sometimes read on the same line and words, so my suggestion is to separate the sentences. And I made an Aladdin with LBT crossover. And check out my two Nightmare BC stories. The sequel will blow your mind. And don't forget to review.
5JudgmentDragon25Ouch. That's going to hurt for Petrie. I have a suggestion for your story. When I read your story, I get confused a little bit as I read. The sentences are not spaced, I sometimes read on the same line and words, so my suggestion is to separate the sentences. And I made an Aladdin with LBT crossover. And check out my two Nightmare BC stories. The sequel will blow your mind. And don't forget to review.
4/20/2011 c5 5JudgmentDragon25
Green Lantern is one of my top 5 favorite super heroes! Nice Crossover BTW! Also, I made a crossover of LBT and Nightmare Before Christmas. Hope u enjoy the story and review!
5JudgmentDragon25Green Lantern is one of my top 5 favorite super heroes! Nice Crossover BTW! Also, I made a crossover of LBT and Nightmare Before Christmas. Hope u enjoy the story and review!
3/30/2011 c4 e4r4r4
kill yourself
kill yourself
12/29/2010 c3 8Insomniazzz
Hey! this really is a unique concept. I'm not exactly well versed in either series or concepts, but I am familiar with your formatting...
it's like you write how you see it, which allows for some decent, and descriptive scenes! although there is the issue of formatting dialogue which can be a bit cumbersome on the reader, but that comes with time.
just a matter of finding and developing your own style of grammar that jives with the reader and puts the story into a rhythm, to where they don't even realize they're reading. but now i'm babbling.
i do like the action in your scenes up to this point and when the migraine leaves, i swear i'll read the rest...
maybe in a few months i'll have the time to be a beta reader. if that happens, i'll let ya know.
keep writing. even when it's hard to make the time. ^_^
8InsomniazzzHey! this really is a unique concept. I'm not exactly well versed in either series or concepts, but I am familiar with your formatting...
it's like you write how you see it, which allows for some decent, and descriptive scenes! although there is the issue of formatting dialogue which can be a bit cumbersome on the reader, but that comes with time.
just a matter of finding and developing your own style of grammar that jives with the reader and puts the story into a rhythm, to where they don't even realize they're reading. but now i'm babbling.
i do like the action in your scenes up to this point and when the migraine leaves, i swear i'll read the rest...
maybe in a few months i'll have the time to be a beta reader. if that happens, i'll let ya know.
keep writing. even when it's hard to make the time. ^_^
12/29/2010 c4 24StoryMaker7
Not bad, hope they get longer and start seperating lines, but only if you want I don't want to be bossy, I hope we get to see the others soon.
24StoryMaker7Not bad, hope they get longer and start seperating lines, but only if you want I don't want to be bossy, I hope we get to see the others soon.
8/14/2010 c2 yyy
good.
good.
8/14/2010 c3 yyyy
good job.
good job.
7/26/2010 c2 henry
I like it.
I like it.