for High School Freshmen9/10/2011 c7 Matthew
Dude new chapter better spelling and grammar use please I am begging you, please I can't stand bad misspelling
Dude new chapter better spelling and grammar use please I am begging you, please I can't stand bad misspelling
9/10/2011 c5 matthew snedden
Dude good story so far, but seriously your grammar and spelling sucks i look forward to reading the rest
Dude good story so far, but seriously your grammar and spelling sucks i look forward to reading the rest
10/11/2010 c7 Reader
I love the start, until the end of this chapter, it was really confusing at the end. but keep up the work.
I love the start, until the end of this chapter, it was really confusing at the end. but keep up the work.
10/7/2010 c7 conn
p.s. please tell us a little about you
p.s. please tell us a little about you
10/7/2010 c7 conn
I love your writeing but i'm surprised that you did this chapter before you introduced ron and Yori. I sure you can think of the possibilities of kim's Jealousy not to mention her other feelings and thought's. I mean think about it when he introduces Yori to kim and then tells her the obvious lie to her face thats when kim knows ron's not only lied to her but is keeping secretes from her as well. And her thoughts and emotions can only get more interesting when Monique implies that Yori's ron's secret girlfriend and I know that kim would be thinking that she as in herself is his secret girlfriend. please write a chapter like this your fan conn
I love your writeing but i'm surprised that you did this chapter before you introduced ron and Yori. I sure you can think of the possibilities of kim's Jealousy not to mention her other feelings and thought's. I mean think about it when he introduces Yori to kim and then tells her the obvious lie to her face thats when kim knows ron's not only lied to her but is keeping secretes from her as well. And her thoughts and emotions can only get more interesting when Monique implies that Yori's ron's secret girlfriend and I know that kim would be thinking that she as in herself is his secret girlfriend. please write a chapter like this your fan conn
10/4/2010 c7 
11EnterpriseCV-6
can't wait for the next chapter to come out by the way have you read chapter five in my story "Kim and Ron summer time fun?"
11EnterpriseCV-6can't wait for the next chapter to come out by the way have you read chapter five in my story "Kim and Ron summer time fun?"
10/4/2010 c7 4CajunBear73
Oh boy is this a bit of a confusing chapter...
So bonds broken, friendships too?
CB73
4CajunBear73Oh boy is this a bit of a confusing chapter...
So bonds broken, friendships too?
CB73
9/30/2010 c6 Reader
IS this story done? if not, how many more chapters left?
IS this story done? if not, how many more chapters left?
8/26/2010 c6 4IriaAngel
Someone is a mastermind, or really good with predicting how Ron and Kim will act...
Really sad, I hope you not ending this story like this!...
4IriaAngelSomeone is a mastermind, or really good with predicting how Ron and Kim will act...
Really sad, I hope you not ending this story like this!...
8/26/2010 c5 IriaAngel
That did not happen!
I was so D*** happy when they finnaly got together...
But the last part of this chapter... Grr... Tara or who this girl is... Need a lot of hurts!
That did not happen!
I was so D*** happy when they finnaly got together...
But the last part of this chapter... Grr... Tara or who this girl is... Need a lot of hurts!
8/26/2010 c3 IriaAngel
Ron is thinking by avoiding his best friend was a good idea? Kim should had beat him up for doing something as stupid!
Now the this mystery girl had some issue, really a killer in my book.
I already start to hate this Stacy girl!
Ron is thinking by avoiding his best friend was a good idea? Kim should had beat him up for doing something as stupid!
Now the this mystery girl had some issue, really a killer in my book.
I already start to hate this Stacy girl!
8/26/2010 c2 IriaAngel
The start of love to the teens.
It had little grammar problem, but not as bad as it could be.
There something going on. emotions raging for both of them, and Kim already knew her feeling? or is she as obvious as Ron?
The start of love to the teens.
It had little grammar problem, but not as bad as it could be.
There something going on. emotions raging for both of them, and Kim already knew her feeling? or is she as obvious as Ron?
8/26/2010 c1 IriaAngel
Nice start, putting their friendship really close.
You did it without ruining the episode!
Nice start, putting their friendship really close.
You did it without ruining the episode!