Reviews: Pokemon XY & XX Version

3/8/2012 c6 joe
you should make the next chapter soon.

10/9/2010 c3

10Mumble 101
Need to work on grammer. Not bad though.

8/15/2010 c6 lina
DAMN! I was so hoping in that scene for May to fucking get raped! Gang bang her next time please!

7/12/2010 c7

1plainoldme1
its a bit hard too keep my attenetion on it, but good work my friend