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8/5/2010 c1 Rose829
ahh this is a really cute short story! .
7/21/2010 c1 1samaramorgane
Cute!Espetialy when Alice is all "Gentleman" with Bella! Anyway I think it could have been a good Fanfic if you decided to continu it!:)
7/13/2010 c1 6SkipperSquirt246
Nice story you've got going there. Cute in a way.
7/10/2010 c1 4xWannabe-Novelistx
That was really good. If you ever get anymore ideas you should make it into a story. I could help you with ideas if you want.
7/9/2010 c1 150purrpickle
Oh, I really enjoyed this. The setting and atmosphere you conjured up, as well as the dialogue and actions of the two girls were simple charming. Wonderful!
7/9/2010 c1 WaLe
It would be so great if you continued it :(
7/9/2010 c1 11Kyraaah1992
Too bad it's only a one-shot. I think it could've been some great multi-chapter story!
7/7/2010 c1 1CatObsessed
*heart melts* I loved this. :)
7/7/2010 c1 Hier
Awww..mini Alice and mini Bella -mush-
7/7/2010 c1 Avarenda
You have an engaging time period, and an interesting story to boot.

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