for The addicted cullens7/17/2010 c2
4CyanideMangoOfMassDestruction
Yes, you should totally do a chapter on them robbing the bank, even though that would be totally against Carlisle's mortal values...
You may want to work on your punctuation, you could have used a lot of commas. Also, when a new person starts talking, then you always press enter to go to the next line. But I really liked this chapter!
I think you should do one where Jacob has an addiction/obsession with PUPPIES!
4CyanideMangoOfMassDestructionYes, you should totally do a chapter on them robbing the bank, even though that would be totally against Carlisle's mortal values...
You may want to work on your punctuation, you could have used a lot of commas. Also, when a new person starts talking, then you always press enter to go to the next line. But I really liked this chapter!
I think you should do one where Jacob has an addiction/obsession with PUPPIES!
7/12/2010 c1 felican
Wow... This is hilarious! Bella addicted to gambling and only loving money, xD
"im forwarding it, but u better review on fanfic"
REVIEWED
Wow... This is hilarious! Bella addicted to gambling and only loving money, xD
"im forwarding it, but u better review on fanfic"
REVIEWED
7/9/2010 c1 CyanideMangoOfMassDestruction
She SO shoulda killed Edward. But it was good. I have no idea what the other addictions should be...I'll tell you if I get any ideas.
She SO shoulda killed Edward. But it was good. I have no idea what the other addictions should be...I'll tell you if I get any ideas.
