for iDare You4/1 c5 Barnacle
The whole spencer-Carly thing has ruined it for me, just to much inbredness
The whole spencer-Carly thing has ruined it for me, just to much inbredness
2/7 c5 Guest
I really liked this
I really liked this
2/5 c1 Dbz fan
Yet another masterpiece comes from your mind!You are my favorite author! funny and hot, thats what the people want! Dont u dare quit dude, no matter how many times people call u sick,lots of other people think your stories are hilarious!
Yet another masterpiece comes from your mind!You are my favorite author! funny and hot, thats what the people want! Dont u dare quit dude, no matter how many times people call u sick,lots of other people think your stories are hilarious!
1/5 c3 Maddie Cakes 123
LOLZ the cafateria scene reminded me of high school musical instead of singing they just started fucking and then everyone else just joined in... HIGH SCOOL ORGY!
LOLZ the cafateria scene reminded me of high school musical instead of singing they just started fucking and then everyone else just joined in... HIGH SCOOL ORGY!
1/5 c5 Guest
awsome. pls tell us what happened with freddy and what went on in the interveiw.
awsome. pls tell us what happened with freddy and what went on in the interveiw.
1/3 c1 Luis F. Lebron
I love this story by far the best 30 min read of my life. The way u mix sex and funny joke/ moments bravo. Im begging u to plz keep adding to this story and if u get stuck id be happy to help in anyway. Btw ive read over 225 books in the last 2 years and this story is in my top 10. Dont worry bout the haters because u will never please them no matter what u say or do. Im a big fan of urs so plz dont stop and keep up the awsome work L.F.L
I love this story by far the best 30 min read of my life. The way u mix sex and funny joke/ moments bravo. Im begging u to plz keep adding to this story and if u get stuck id be happy to help in anyway. Btw ive read over 225 books in the last 2 years and this story is in my top 10. Dont worry bout the haters because u will never please them no matter what u say or do. Im a big fan of urs so plz dont stop and keep up the awsome work L.F.L
12/31/2012 c1 Guest
That was amazing
That was amazing
12/29/2012 c1 
8tomboys rule girly girls suck
trash and pointless jokes with stupidity mixed in and hidden in each sentenced is all it is or will ever be do yourself a favor and delete it.
8tomboys rule girly girls sucktrash and pointless jokes with stupidity mixed in and hidden in each sentenced is all it is or will ever be do yourself a favor and delete it.
12/28/2012 c5 Boris Yeltsin
Love the idea.
Hope this story's stil going.
Hmm.
Can I do more then one dare?
I dare Carly to dress up and act like a baby and for Sam to play the mommy then a reverse later with Sam as the baby and Carly as the mommy.
Love the idea.
Hope this story's stil going.
Hmm.
Can I do more then one dare?
I dare Carly to dress up and act like a baby and for Sam to play the mommy then a reverse later with Sam as the baby and Carly as the mommy.
11/27/2012 c1 Anon
Wow. This story was great I really liked it. I haven't read much on this site but this was one of the best. :)
Wow. This story was great I really liked it. I haven't read much on this site but this was one of the best. :)
11/24/2012 c4 Guest
Dude...what the hell just happened here? Spencer getting off on his little sister was creepy enough, but him actually...and her actually enjoying it...that was incredibly disturbing. And I know that rape victims (some of whom have probably been sexually exploited or abused by their own siblings) wouldn't appreciate this chapter in the least. I was more or less okay with this story up until Chapter 4. I...don't even know what to say.
Dude...what the hell just happened here? Spencer getting off on his little sister was creepy enough, but him actually...and her actually enjoying it...that was incredibly disturbing. And I know that rape victims (some of whom have probably been sexually exploited or abused by their own siblings) wouldn't appreciate this chapter in the least. I was more or less okay with this story up until Chapter 4. I...don't even know what to say.
11/24/2012 c4 RayLedgend
At kyookiequail:
No no, that's not what I'm saying. It isn't that anyone who dislikes me is just a troll, it's the fact that you read so far in despite having hated it that baffled me. As someone who does a lot of trolling on youtube, it just felt like something I'd do, y'know?
Also, you say it like a joke involving rape can never be funny, but I actually disagree. I think all dark subject matter, rape included, can make for a funny joke just fine if approached right. I actually thought a lot about that, and I ran the joke by my mom of all people. She thought it was funny too, which made me feel like I had approached it in a way that wouldn't be offensive. Like I said, I apologize if I really did offend people, but that wasn't the intent.
Anyway, by this point I feel like this discussion is artificially padding my review count, so I don't think I'll reply anymore. You can have the last word if you want, but I feel I said what I feel on the subject already.
At kyookiequail:
No no, that's not what I'm saying. It isn't that anyone who dislikes me is just a troll, it's the fact that you read so far in despite having hated it that baffled me. As someone who does a lot of trolling on youtube, it just felt like something I'd do, y'know?
Also, you say it like a joke involving rape can never be funny, but I actually disagree. I think all dark subject matter, rape included, can make for a funny joke just fine if approached right. I actually thought a lot about that, and I ran the joke by my mom of all people. She thought it was funny too, which made me feel like I had approached it in a way that wouldn't be offensive. Like I said, I apologize if I really did offend people, but that wasn't the intent.
Anyway, by this point I feel like this discussion is artificially padding my review count, so I don't think I'll reply anymore. You can have the last word if you want, but I feel I said what I feel on the subject already.
11/24/2012 c4 kyookiequail
1) I only kept reading to see how ridiculous and unrealistic it would get.
2) That's precisely the problem. You fell of your chair at some point when you were writing this, hit your head, and decided it would be funny if you joked about rape, an that people would thinkit was funny.
3) Funny how whenever someone says something negative about your story, they are a 'troll'. No, dude. That's called someone-didn't-like-your story-so-they-decided-to-give-it-a-negative-review'. You're gonna get negative reviews, especially when you say something like you did that was offensive like that.
1) I only kept reading to see how ridiculous and unrealistic it would get.
2) That's precisely the problem. You fell of your chair at some point when you were writing this, hit your head, and decided it would be funny if you joked about rape, an that people would thinkit was funny.
3) Funny how whenever someone says something negative about your story, they are a 'troll'. No, dude. That's called someone-didn't-like-your story-so-they-decided-to-give-it-a-negative-review'. You're gonna get negative reviews, especially when you say something like you did that was offensive like that.