for My Sweet Thing10/22/2012 c14 TemperedPete
Wow, I have never read anything like this story in fanfiction. Great job with originality!
Wow, I have never read anything like this story in fanfiction. Great job with originality!
8/22/2012 c9 
7Katerina Petrova Salvatore
I wish you would update. I just found this story and would like to read more. It's as good as a book. Even better than Twilight, IMO.
7Katerina Petrova SalvatoreI wish you would update. I just found this story and would like to read more. It's as good as a book. Even better than Twilight, IMO.
6/5/2012 c14 frayedbristles
I absolutely love this story. Its a heartwarming and a throat-clogging tale. Your characters are all so very strong and secure in their images.. SM may own them but you have given them another universe where they flourish and grow. Growing beside them feels like an honor(for me). You have the ability to project images into the reader's brain (even the more gruesome ones..and their implications).. don't ever loose that.. its very precious.
I cannot wait for you next update.. but I'll try and be patient.
Thanks for putting your wonderful story on display like this.
I absolutely love this story. Its a heartwarming and a throat-clogging tale. Your characters are all so very strong and secure in their images.. SM may own them but you have given them another universe where they flourish and grow. Growing beside them feels like an honor(for me). You have the ability to project images into the reader's brain (even the more gruesome ones..and their implications).. don't ever loose that.. its very precious.
I cannot wait for you next update.. but I'll try and be patient.
Thanks for putting your wonderful story on display like this.
4/10/2012 c14 6Hongkongphooey
Saw this on Twitter and was intrigued. Loving this so far and looking forward to more.
HKP
6HongkongphooeySaw this on Twitter and was intrigued. Loving this so far and looking forward to more.
HKP
3/21/2012 c14 Mini-ish
I so glad that Bella is going with her feeling and talking to Edward. That was so sweet that Edward told Bella that there were come for her and I hope Rose, Carlisle and Bella does not get in trouble for what to help Rose. I hope Rose go back to school as a new person and become friend with Bella again. That was really good and I hope Bella and Edward (Bronze) kiss at the BBQ. Update soon! :)
I so glad that Bella is going with her feeling and talking to Edward. That was so sweet that Edward told Bella that there were come for her and I hope Rose, Carlisle and Bella does not get in trouble for what to help Rose. I hope Rose go back to school as a new person and become friend with Bella again. That was really good and I hope Bella and Edward (Bronze) kiss at the BBQ. Update soon! :)
3/18/2012 c14 8sparklevampFTW
I had been gone a week on a cruise, so I couldn't read this til today. :)
OHMYGOD. Doctor Who reference for the ficking win! I love you.
Get in loser, we're going shopping! BAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Of course Bronze has seen Mean Girls. Best movie ever!
Tank! :D If fanficnet would let me make a less than three heart, I would.
Gosh darnit, I want a Bronze so bad. He is the sweetest thing ever. All boys need to be like him.
Gaaah. This boy makes my insides squee.
Aw man, that was too cute to end there. You buttocks! Just kidding, you're awesome. And this chapter was really super great! :3
8sparklevampFTWI had been gone a week on a cruise, so I couldn't read this til today. :)
OHMYGOD. Doctor Who reference for the ficking win! I love you.
Get in loser, we're going shopping! BAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Of course Bronze has seen Mean Girls. Best movie ever!
Tank! :D If fanficnet would let me make a less than three heart, I would.
Gosh darnit, I want a Bronze so bad. He is the sweetest thing ever. All boys need to be like him.
Gaaah. This boy makes my insides squee.
Aw man, that was too cute to end there. You buttocks! Just kidding, you're awesome. And this chapter was really super great! :3
3/12/2012 c14 MDtwiwriter
Excellent chapter. I missed Bronze and his positive effects on Bella. Alice is smart and intuitive so I'm hoping that she is not fooled by Jasper.
Excellent chapter. I missed Bronze and his positive effects on Bella. Alice is smart and intuitive so I'm hoping that she is not fooled by Jasper.