for My Sweet Thing2/17/2012 c13 
8sparklevampFTW
This chapter made my throat tight and my eyes tear up. Or maybe that's just from all the dust in my room, lol! Great chap though. :) next chapter: EDWARRRDDD! 8D
8sparklevampFTWThis chapter made my throat tight and my eyes tear up. Or maybe that's just from all the dust in my room, lol! Great chap though. :) next chapter: EDWARRRDDD! 8D
2/11/2012 c12 butzi
I am glad that you're feeling better and totally thrilled about this update. Love this story.
I am glad that you're feeling better and totally thrilled about this update. Love this story.
2/9/2012 c11 debralzara
Hey, glad you are better. I have been anticipating your next chapter, though I never reviewed your other chaps. Sorry! I like your different take on the group, although I absolutely hate Rosalie. I guess with their life experiences though, it has shaped them into who they are. Help Jasper to change, help Rosalie to change, please! *grin* Love your story!
Hey, glad you are better. I have been anticipating your next chapter, though I never reviewed your other chaps. Sorry! I like your different take on the group, although I absolutely hate Rosalie. I guess with their life experiences though, it has shaped them into who they are. Help Jasper to change, help Rosalie to change, please! *grin* Love your story!
2/8/2012 c12 PCCTwiFF23
So proud of Alice and Bella for forging on with their friendship. Especially proud of Bella for recognizing the fact that her relationship/friendship with Alice could single-handedly be the most important friendship she'll ever have. Seriously, there's nothing like having that ONE friend who can see all of you and not judge you for any of it. So while Bella's taking all the justified hits her peers are giving her way, she's taking it. Taking it very well, "like a man", if you will. And I also didn't get to comment last chapter about Carlisle's decision to record their meetings. Smart of him to do just that-pertaining to his reputation and license but also for taking the high road and recognizing that he's just not the right one for Bella. He could have taken advantage of her but he's taking the moral route and moving on without acting on his desires.
So proud of Alice and Bella for forging on with their friendship. Especially proud of Bella for recognizing the fact that her relationship/friendship with Alice could single-handedly be the most important friendship she'll ever have. Seriously, there's nothing like having that ONE friend who can see all of you and not judge you for any of it. So while Bella's taking all the justified hits her peers are giving her way, she's taking it. Taking it very well, "like a man", if you will. And I also didn't get to comment last chapter about Carlisle's decision to record their meetings. Smart of him to do just that-pertaining to his reputation and license but also for taking the high road and recognizing that he's just not the right one for Bella. He could have taken advantage of her but he's taking the moral route and moving on without acting on his desires.
2/8/2012 c11 PCCTwiFF23
Wow, I've FINALLY made the time to read this fic as of this morning and have been reading it on and off all day. Being that I was at work for most of the day, I wanted to just rifle through it then go back and review. I have to say, this story has so many more twists and turns than I could have imagined! Ugh, Rosalie and Jasper are completely selfish pathetic fuck ups and glad that Bella has decided to turn her life around. And I was mostly surprised with the revelation that Carlisle has a genuine attraction to Bella! I just so didn't expect that. What a great twist! So, I'm about to start Chapter 12, then will have to (im)patiently wait for your next update. I don't know why I waited so long to start it!
Wow, I've FINALLY made the time to read this fic as of this morning and have been reading it on and off all day. Being that I was at work for most of the day, I wanted to just rifle through it then go back and review. I have to say, this story has so many more twists and turns than I could have imagined! Ugh, Rosalie and Jasper are completely selfish pathetic fuck ups and glad that Bella has decided to turn her life around. And I was mostly surprised with the revelation that Carlisle has a genuine attraction to Bella! I just so didn't expect that. What a great twist! So, I'm about to start Chapter 12, then will have to (im)patiently wait for your next update. I don't know why I waited so long to start it!
2/8/2012 c1 msjackson
ok im just one ch in and i love this already! edward is so different from canon or any other version i have read of him and i totally love it
ok im just one ch in and i love this already! edward is so different from canon or any other version i have read of him and i totally love it
2/8/2012 c12 2Musehere
YOU'RE BACK! OMG, I'm SOOOO glad you're back! This chapter was great. Oooh, your Jasper is so...sleezy. Man, I really really dislike him. That guy totally creeps me out. I sure hope he has some redeeming qualities hidden down inside somewhere, though it seems they would have to be very deeply buried. lol. Can't wait for the next one. Keep up with the great writing.
2MusehereYOU'RE BACK! OMG, I'm SOOOO glad you're back! This chapter was great. Oooh, your Jasper is so...sleezy. Man, I really really dislike him. That guy totally creeps me out. I sure hope he has some redeeming qualities hidden down inside somewhere, though it seems they would have to be very deeply buried. lol. Can't wait for the next one. Keep up with the great writing.
2/8/2012 c12 Mini-ish
I am glad that Alice is talking to Bella and that she want to be her friend. I hope Edward is next and there get together. That was really good and update soon! :) Welcome back and I am glad your feeling better.
I am glad that Alice is talking to Bella and that she want to be her friend. I hope Edward is next and there get together. That was really good and update soon! :) Welcome back and I am glad your feeling better.
2/8/2012 c12 2HopeStreet
I am relieved that Carlisle is determined to keep things professional between him and Bella. Bella needs all the help she can get. I am also relieved that Alice finally came to Bella. I was hoping that she was keeping away because she was processing. The tears at the end triggered my own.
I do hope that you continue to feel better and that your health improves.
2HopeStreetI am relieved that Carlisle is determined to keep things professional between him and Bella. Bella needs all the help she can get. I am also relieved that Alice finally came to Bella. I was hoping that she was keeping away because she was processing. The tears at the end triggered my own.
I do hope that you continue to feel better and that your health improves.
2/8/2012 c11 HopeStreet
Oh Bella... I'm really concerned for her now. She could be making other better choices in her quest for having someone to talk to and understand her. She hasn't given Edward or Alice a chance to be there for her in the way she needs.
Oh Bella... I'm really concerned for her now. She could be making other better choices in her quest for having someone to talk to and understand her. She hasn't given Edward or Alice a chance to be there for her in the way she needs.
2/8/2012 c10 HopeStreet
Wow, that was certainly interesting. I'm surprised that Bella would even consider anything with Carlisle for a second. They do share a similar life-changing situation and similar feelings as a result, but he' so much older. He's ultimately wrong for her for so many reasons.
Wow, that was certainly interesting. I'm surprised that Bella would even consider anything with Carlisle for a second. They do share a similar life-changing situation and similar feelings as a result, but he' so much older. He's ultimately wrong for her for so many reasons.
2/8/2012 c9 HopeStreet
Bella is such a self-doubting mess. I can completely understand it. Carlisle called her out in such a harsh way, but she did deserve a great deal of that. The gloating was wrong (it did seem like gloating). Carlisle suffers everyday for what he did and seeing that smile on Bella's face triggered his need to make Bella remember the gravity of what she did to keep her grounded in - for lack of a better word - in humanity.
Bella is such a self-doubting mess. I can completely understand it. Carlisle called her out in such a harsh way, but she did deserve a great deal of that. The gloating was wrong (it did seem like gloating). Carlisle suffers everyday for what he did and seeing that smile on Bella's face triggered his need to make Bella remember the gravity of what she did to keep her grounded in - for lack of a better word - in humanity.
2/8/2012 c12 ladytwi30
im glad your feeling better im on leave too for my health too and i had to fu on my favs. ok so bella is wkn on herself with dr.c glad he kept it profess and yay we got alice step 2 is a good place for bella.cant wait for more
im glad your feeling better im on leave too for my health too and i had to fu on my favs. ok so bella is wkn on herself with dr.c glad he kept it profess and yay we got alice step 2 is a good place for bella.cant wait for more