for Tsukushi Makino in Disguise3/28 c6 anya ferrous
please continue or add more chapters...
please continue or add more chapters...
112/20/2012 c5 qiuktjk
now is the chapter5, so i make a summary here:
the beginning is fun and interesting.
but as the story go on, i must give you my opinion.
1)i thought tsukushi is a little bit almighty here.
a girl beat all the guys, expecially the great domyoji in his ready fighting situation?
and she is beautiful, rich,and has a charming character, in that case i believe on one will don't love her.
2)and tsukasa is too weak. he is the greatest fighter.
so i hope you to create more difficulty that our character can learn something from it.
and grow up to be more mature as the sotry go on.
maybe i am a bad reader,cuz i put my thought into your story and judge it from my own opinion. but i really wish this interesting story will turn out to be a more interested one even to be not only interested but a story make me cry make me crazy.
hope you write a great story. whatever you stick on your way and take my advice into consideration.
and every writer should be work should be admired.
i really admire your work.
i love hyd .so i really happy you create a story about them, and i can read it.
thank you.
now is the chapter5, so i make a summary here:
the beginning is fun and interesting.
but as the story go on, i must give you my opinion.
1)i thought tsukushi is a little bit almighty here.
a girl beat all the guys, expecially the great domyoji in his ready fighting situation?
and she is beautiful, rich,and has a charming character, in that case i believe on one will don't love her.
2)and tsukasa is too weak. he is the greatest fighter.
so i hope you to create more difficulty that our character can learn something from it.
and grow up to be more mature as the sotry go on.
maybe i am a bad reader,cuz i put my thought into your story and judge it from my own opinion. but i really wish this interesting story will turn out to be a more interested one even to be not only interested but a story make me cry make me crazy.
hope you write a great story. whatever you stick on your way and take my advice into consideration.
and every writer should be work should be admired.
i really admire your work.
i love hyd .so i really happy you create a story about them, and i can read it.
thank you.
12/20/2012 c2 qiuktjk
no...rui is the childhood friend ?
I want tsukasa to be the male lead, i want T&T
and why the description about tsukasa is less than rui? are you a friend of R&T?
the description about tsukasa:
he was muscular. He was very handsome
and the description about RUI:
Rui had dark shiny brown hair. It was a little messy but it still looked good. His eyes were a deep rich brown colour and they showed compassion for the boy lying down, bloody on the ground. He was tall, muscular and cover boy gorgeous.
Are you a fan of rui? ;( i love tsukasa..
no...rui is the childhood friend ?
I want tsukasa to be the male lead, i want T&T
and why the description about tsukasa is less than rui? are you a friend of R&T?
the description about tsukasa:
he was muscular. He was very handsome
and the description about RUI:
Rui had dark shiny brown hair. It was a little messy but it still looked good. His eyes were a deep rich brown colour and they showed compassion for the boy lying down, bloody on the ground. He was tall, muscular and cover boy gorgeous.
Are you a fan of rui? ;( i love tsukasa..
12/20/2012 c1 qiuktjk
very interesting beginning! fabulous beginning.i really love it.
it make me want to read more...
you created a new character of tsukushi's brother.
the interaction between shin and tsukushi is fun, and did make me laugh. hahaha
and i can said: this chapter isn't boring at all!
beg you to write more .!
i love plz make him to be the male lead.
very interesting beginning! fabulous beginning.i really love it.
it make me want to read more...
you created a new character of tsukushi's brother.
the interaction between shin and tsukushi is fun, and did make me laugh. hahaha
and i can said: this chapter isn't boring at all!
beg you to write more .!
i love plz make him to be the male lead.
12/20/2012 c6 qiuktjk
oh no！i am so disappointed that you stop updating.
will there still any chance that you will continue the undone job of this lovely fic?
i really really wish it would turns to be T&T in the end.
so, plz...update!
oh no！i am so disappointed that you stop updating.
will there still any chance that you will continue the undone job of this lovely fic?
i really really wish it would turns to be T&T in the end.
so, plz...update!
12/19/2012 c1 miki
pleasssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeee uppdaaaaaaaaaaaaaaateeeeeeee e
i love this story hoping 4 it 2 come out
pleasssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeee uppdaaaaaaaaaaaaaaateeeeeeee e
i love this story hoping 4 it 2 come out
11/27/2012 c6 Guest
please i want to finish to read this it's the best and it would be cool if both f4 of paris and japan would meet and compete for makino
i lovvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeee ur story
please i want to finish to read this it's the best and it would be cool if both f4 of paris and japan would meet and compete for makino
i lovvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeee ur story
11/27/2012 c3 Guest
please update pleasssssssssssssssseeeeeeee eeee
please update pleasssssssssssssssseeeeeeee eeee
7/15/2012 c6 Coco
Please continue the story because I really love it and would love to find out the ending when the twin girl reveals her true identity...please and thank you :-)...p.s. Its good so far.
Please continue the story because I really love it and would love to find out the ending when the twin girl reveals her true identity...please and thank you :-)...p.s. Its good so far.
7/8/2012 c6 xXAliceWhite3Xx
This is an amazing story! Please update soon!
This is an amazing story! Please update soon!