for Estel's Childhood3/9/2004 c3 Maiden of Valinor
poor estel... his mom did the right thing, but somehow it makes you mad at her... what is it with stories about estel running away?
poor estel... his mom did the right thing, but somehow it makes you mad at her... what is it with stories about estel running away?
2/9/2004 c1 
2Jeff's favourite skittle
A good beginning to a great story.
The story was well written, and I can only wonder what is going to happen in future to the young Estel.
~Elessar~
2Jeff's favourite skittleA good beginning to a great story.
The story was well written, and I can only wonder what is going to happen in future to the young Estel.
~Elessar~
12/26/2003 c3 1Araphin
This is good, but if you're going to make everyone talk in Sinderan, please translate for us. Because I have no clue what they're trying to say half the time.
1AraphinThis is good, but if you're going to make everyone talk in Sinderan, please translate for us. Because I have no clue what they're trying to say half the time.
10/4/2003 c7 16glitteratiglue
Aw, such a sweet story! You have real talent for writing, the way you manage to convey the feelings of a frightened little boy along with all the complex vocabulary you use. Well done! :)
16glitteratiglueAw, such a sweet story! You have real talent for writing, the way you manage to convey the feelings of a frightened little boy along with all the complex vocabulary you use. Well done! :)
3/30/2003 c3 Melanie
I like the story. Little Aragorn is always good. But theres two ways you could make the story flow quite a bit better. I would say at least in my case it's hard to read a line in elvish then scroll to the bottom to find what it means. It might be better read and more people might keep reading instead of giving up if you put the translations next to the quote or just wrote it and signified it was elvish. Good story hope you don't mind the tip!
Mel
PS I have an account on here i'm zippyzooloo1803 I'm just not logged in right now so reply if you wish!
I like the story. Little Aragorn is always good. But theres two ways you could make the story flow quite a bit better. I would say at least in my case it's hard to read a line in elvish then scroll to the bottom to find what it means. It might be better read and more people might keep reading instead of giving up if you put the translations next to the quote or just wrote it and signified it was elvish. Good story hope you don't mind the tip!
Mel
PS I have an account on here i'm zippyzooloo1803 I'm just not logged in right now so reply if you wish!