for Changes6/6/2012 c1 thelastunicorn
i love this story. it is really good. i can't wait for the sequel to come out soon.
i love this story. it is really good. i can't wait for the sequel to come out soon.
6/5/2012 c2 TROLL
Hicaroshi-Higurashi
Kiaday-Kaede
Shippoe-Shippo/Shippou
Miyoga-Myoga/Myouga
Mirochu-Miroku
Songo-Sango
Keyrara-Kirara
Kohga-Koga/Kouga (seriously? it's only the easiest name to spell in the whole damn series!)
Can't spell the names right, then DON'T WRITE ABOUT IT.
And Yasha is SUCH an original name for an InuYASHA OC. Give yourself a pat on the back, oh great writer.
...I've wasted 2 minutes of my life reading this. Thanks for nothing.
Hicaroshi-Higurashi
Kiaday-Kaede
Shippoe-Shippo/Shippou
Miyoga-Myoga/Myouga
Mirochu-Miroku
Songo-Sango
Keyrara-Kirara
Kohga-Koga/Kouga (seriously? it's only the easiest name to spell in the whole damn series!)
Can't spell the names right, then DON'T WRITE ABOUT IT.
And Yasha is SUCH an original name for an InuYASHA OC. Give yourself a pat on the back, oh great writer.
...I've wasted 2 minutes of my life reading this. Thanks for nothing.
1/29/2012 c7 thelastunicorn
i love this story. it is really good and very sad. i can;t wait for the seqal to come out soon
i love this story. it is really good and very sad. i can;t wait for the seqal to come out soon
2/25/2011 c1 guest
i thought kagome was 15 when she went in the well ?
i thought kagome was 15 when she went in the well ?
2/1/2011 c1 inuyasha101
you totally messed up their names its shippo miroku sango koga kaede and kirara also kagome's last name is higurashi
you totally messed up their names its shippo miroku sango koga kaede and kirara also kagome's last name is higurashi
1/20/2011 c1 Guest
Kaede*
Shippo*
Naraku*
Miroku*
Sango*
YOURE A HORRIBLE WRITER EVERYTHING IS OCC AND YOU WRITE LIKE A 12 YEAR OLD. I literally just wasted Five minutes of my life reading the first three chapters. screw you.
Kaede*
Shippo*
Naraku*
Miroku*
Sango*
YOURE A HORRIBLE WRITER EVERYTHING IS OCC AND YOU WRITE LIKE A 12 YEAR OLD. I literally just wasted Five minutes of my life reading the first three chapters. screw you.
8/6/2010 c2 
5monochromeXdreams
the names you used are wrong.
Sango
Shippo/Shippou
Miroku
Kaede
otherwise this was pretty good!
хороший работа
5monochromeXdreamsthe names you used are wrong.
Sango
Shippo/Shippou
Miroku
Kaede
otherwise this was pretty good!
хороший работа
7/30/2010 c5 4ForgivenessSprings
i realize this story was finished on the 20th but this is bugging me
the names are
InuYasha (e-new-ya-sha)
Kagome (Ka-go-may)
Shippo (Ship-po)
Miroku (Me-row-ku)
Sango (san-go)
Kirara (Key-ra-ra)
Kikyo (Key-key-o)
Kaede (Ki-aide-ay)
Kouga (co-ga)
4ForgivenessSpringsi realize this story was finished on the 20th but this is bugging me
the names are
InuYasha (e-new-ya-sha)
Kagome (Ka-go-may)
Shippo (Ship-po)
Miroku (Me-row-ku)
Sango (san-go)
Kirara (Key-ra-ra)
Kikyo (Key-key-o)
Kaede (Ki-aide-ay)
Kouga (co-ga)
7/22/2010 c1 5InuYasha-Breeze
Work on your spelling :/ you spelled a lot of there names wrong
for example : Kaede, shippo, Kirara, Miroku, Kouga, and Sango. lol
5InuYasha-BreezeWork on your spelling :/ you spelled a lot of there names wrong
for example : Kaede, shippo, Kirara, Miroku, Kouga, and Sango. lol
7/20/2010 c6 1starfire1994
1)please continue
i love it
2)the spellings of the characers names are:
Kagome Higurashi, Inuyasha, Sango, Miroku, Shippo, Kikyo, Myoga, Kaede, Sesshomaru, Naraku
later
starfire1994
1starfire19941)please continue
i love it
2)the spellings of the characers names are:
Kagome Higurashi, Inuyasha, Sango, Miroku, Shippo, Kikyo, Myoga, Kaede, Sesshomaru, Naraku
later
starfire1994
7/20/2010 c2 12Mangascribbler
You spelled Shippo, Sesshomaru, Miroku, Sango and Tesusiaga wrong! good story tho :D
12MangascribblerYou spelled Shippo, Sesshomaru, Miroku, Sango and Tesusiaga wrong! good story tho :D
7/12/2010 c1 4Rainbowed-Sunned-Spirit
I think that you're off to a great start, so far! I know that this is only the prologue, but it would be better if you made your future chapters a lot longer! I also noticed that you spelled some of the character's names wrong. Here are the following names that you've misspelled: Hicaroshi= Higurashi Kiaday= Kaede Shippoe= Shippo Miyoga= Myoga Mirochu= Miroku Songo= Sango Keyrara= Kirara Kohga= Koga Shicone= Shikon
I'm not saying any of those stuff to be mean, I'm just giving you some feedback for the future =)
Anyways, you really should continue the plot seems really interesting! I'll be looking forward to reading more! Please update soon! I can't wait for the romance still to come! Good luck!
4Rainbowed-Sunned-SpiritI think that you're off to a great start, so far! I know that this is only the prologue, but it would be better if you made your future chapters a lot longer! I also noticed that you spelled some of the character's names wrong. Here are the following names that you've misspelled: Hicaroshi= Higurashi Kiaday= Kaede Shippoe= Shippo Miyoga= Myoga Mirochu= Miroku Songo= Sango Keyrara= Kirara Kohga= Koga Shicone= Shikon
I'm not saying any of those stuff to be mean, I'm just giving you some feedback for the future =)
Anyways, you really should continue the plot seems really interesting! I'll be looking forward to reading more! Please update soon! I can't wait for the romance still to come! Good luck!