for One Door Close, a Window Opens5/21 c1 Venus914
While i hate Bella, i hate the wolves more. They were the one instigating the fight. They are poor and ill-bred, mannerless, pathetic name-caller. I dont know why Bella has a hard time in Eclipse choosing. I certainly wont choose someone living in a shack...hoping for dole outs from the government, no matter how exciting their lives are being supernatural creatures. ) Im just here because i love slash and i think i've read most Twilight vampire slash and crossovers that deal with slash.
And im Team Edward though i dont like Robert Pattinson. )
While i hate Bella, i hate the wolves more. They were the one instigating the fight. They are poor and ill-bred, mannerless, pathetic name-caller. I dont know why Bella has a hard time in Eclipse choosing. I certainly wont choose someone living in a shack...hoping for dole outs from the government, no matter how exciting their lives are being supernatural creatures. ) Im just here because i love slash and i think i've read most Twilight vampire slash and crossovers that deal with slash.
And im Team Edward though i dont like Robert Pattinson. )
5/4 c2 xXSauceyAwesomnessXx
"No I don't, and I would appreciate it if you filled me in." He heard Paul purr, and his groin twitched again. He could hear the smile laced with Paul's words.
when jake said that and paul purred, was that like some sort of sexual innuendo? i just realized this. or is my mind just beingperverted again? lol, but i really love this story, you're a great writer
"No I don't, and I would appreciate it if you filled me in." He heard Paul purr, and his groin twitched again. He could hear the smile laced with Paul's words.
when jake said that and paul purred, was that like some sort of sexual innuendo? i just realized this. or is my mind just beingperverted again? lol, but i really love this story, you're a great writer
2/18 c9 IceVII
This was a great story, I liked it a lot, nd you were very descriptive kudos on that. Also the way youwere able to capture the feelings of Paul and Jacob was awesome, I hopee to see ore of your work around here
This was a great story, I liked it a lot, nd you were very descriptive kudos on that. Also the way youwere able to capture the feelings of Paul and Jacob was awesome, I hopee to see ore of your work around here
7/21/2012 c9 bbutterfly689
I luved this story. Didnt think I would like the pairing but u made it so sexy I was intrigued. I really liked the pairing and the fact that jakes in denial. Im glad Bella let him go ad well.
I luved this story. Didnt think I would like the pairing but u made it so sexy I was intrigued. I really liked the pairing and the fact that jakes in denial. Im glad Bella let him go ad well.
8/7/2011 c9 
3Lovergyul
I loved this! I loved that Jake showed Paul he was not weak at all. He sure put him in his place. I was so hoping for Jake to top him and he did. I think Jake should always top him. Jake is a pure alpha after all so he put his power and position to good use. That was so damn hot! Jake had him begging and just...WOW! Good job on the lemon. I've never read a lemon so detailed like this. Jake had Paul screaming and I loved every minute of it. Good job!
3LovergyulI loved this! I loved that Jake showed Paul he was not weak at all. He sure put him in his place. I was so hoping for Jake to top him and he did. I think Jake should always top him. Jake is a pure alpha after all so he put his power and position to good use. That was so damn hot! Jake had him begging and just...WOW! Good job on the lemon. I've never read a lemon so detailed like this. Jake had Paul screaming and I loved every minute of it. Good job!
5/29/2011 c7 luvinlapush
ok so i loved it jacob and paul are such a hot pair,for some reason my laptop wouldnt let me review on the last chapter i couldnt put it away i was just pulled in by your words so yeah i cant wait for more
ok so i loved it jacob and paul are such a hot pair,for some reason my laptop wouldnt let me review on the last chapter i couldnt put it away i was just pulled in by your words so yeah i cant wait for more
3/31/2011 c1 Account Unactive Sorry
I really tried to finish this but I couldn't. It's confusing and switches from third person to first and past tense to present tense. There are a lot of grammar mistakes. You should really edit before you post.
I really tried to finish this but I couldn't. It's confusing and switches from third person to first and past tense to present tense. There are a lot of grammar mistakes. You should really edit before you post.
2/24/2011 c1 25wolfpacksam'smate
OH PLEASE LET BELLA DROP DEAD! STUPID ** HURTING JACOB LIKE THAT! love the story :D
25wolfpacksam'smateOH PLEASE LET BELLA DROP DEAD! STUPID ** HURTING JACOB LIKE THAT! love the story :D
12/26/2010 c9 4mslunarissa
I hate you I love you I am so confused i just love this story i've read it like a lot of times but i still get happy at the end of it jacob was kinda anidiot in this when i first read it and then that thing with bella uuuggghhhh! i'm sorry i just don't like bella i don't hate her i just don't understand the big deal with her she's irritating as... nothing sorry i'm just ranting but i just... I LOVE YOUR STORY JUST LOVE IT!
4mslunarissaI hate you I love you I am so confused i just love this story i've read it like a lot of times but i still get happy at the end of it jacob was kinda anidiot in this when i first read it and then that thing with bella uuuggghhhh! i'm sorry i just don't like bella i don't hate her i just don't understand the big deal with her she's irritating as... nothing sorry i'm just ranting but i just... I LOVE YOUR STORY JUST LOVE IT!
9/22/2010 c8 2BoomDarh
I KNEW it was Bottom Jake! HA! I just KNEW IT! ...So, now what? *laughs* I don't know, but that still doesn't lessen the fact that, I WAS RIGHT! *victurous cackling* I know, I am crazy. But regardless if it comes as a shock or not, I like being right... :P lol.
Wow, so... I can't believe I got trough this, and without stopping! (couldn't make myself even if I tried) - Damn, are you crazy that was... quite the experience, me dear. Quite the experience. So.. Naturally I loved every bit of it. Your astounding vocabulary still, yeah, astound me. I'm stunned, marveled, completely and outrageously speechless on that matter. Hah, of course there was a lot of words I did NOT know (but thank god for dictionaries!) and many words that had me chuckle a bit. Not the words themself, but their usage. Not meant as a critique, just me being wierd and finding humor everywhere. Lol.
Paul was a beast! In every possible meaning! Just RAWR! The end really has me going, and I wish it wasn't so effin late. I'm dying to read the *gasp* final chapter.. and on the same time it makes me.. oddly sad. Damn, it's ending ;v; I know, life goes on. But meh... I love how they interact, it's so.. natural, and realistic. How couldn't I love that? I'm still fevently loving how this still manage to contain NO FLUFF! I have already, kind of, expressed my distate for that subject, but I'm serious. I love this as it is. And it's marvelous, nothing else to say!
Or yes; I want to express my undying gratitude! For you, and how you decided to go trough with this! I wasn't here from the start, but this story is still worth reading, regardless lol. Now for me all there's to say, is that I will read the.. sob.. last chapter. First thing tomorrow I think lol. Can't pressure my already faint nerves anymore, and sleep is... neccessary... Ah yeah!
If you havn't noticed, I'm gratly affected by this chapter particular, but puew, who can blame me? Hot stuff! Hot stuff, definitely!
Amazing :D
Take care now, you'll hear from me again, once I'm there, I never go away! *laughs* Hope that's okay lol.
With much love,
Boom#
2BoomDarhI KNEW it was Bottom Jake! HA! I just KNEW IT! ...So, now what? *laughs* I don't know, but that still doesn't lessen the fact that, I WAS RIGHT! *victurous cackling* I know, I am crazy. But regardless if it comes as a shock or not, I like being right... :P lol.
Wow, so... I can't believe I got trough this, and without stopping! (couldn't make myself even if I tried) - Damn, are you crazy that was... quite the experience, me dear. Quite the experience. So.. Naturally I loved every bit of it. Your astounding vocabulary still, yeah, astound me. I'm stunned, marveled, completely and outrageously speechless on that matter. Hah, of course there was a lot of words I did NOT know (but thank god for dictionaries!) and many words that had me chuckle a bit. Not the words themself, but their usage. Not meant as a critique, just me being wierd and finding humor everywhere. Lol.
Paul was a beast! In every possible meaning! Just RAWR! The end really has me going, and I wish it wasn't so effin late. I'm dying to read the *gasp* final chapter.. and on the same time it makes me.. oddly sad. Damn, it's ending ;v; I know, life goes on. But meh... I love how they interact, it's so.. natural, and realistic. How couldn't I love that? I'm still fevently loving how this still manage to contain NO FLUFF! I have already, kind of, expressed my distate for that subject, but I'm serious. I love this as it is. And it's marvelous, nothing else to say!
Or yes; I want to express my undying gratitude! For you, and how you decided to go trough with this! I wasn't here from the start, but this story is still worth reading, regardless lol. Now for me all there's to say, is that I will read the.. sob.. last chapter. First thing tomorrow I think lol. Can't pressure my already faint nerves anymore, and sleep is... neccessary... Ah yeah!
If you havn't noticed, I'm gratly affected by this chapter particular, but puew, who can blame me? Hot stuff! Hot stuff, definitely!
Amazing :D
Take care now, you'll hear from me again, once I'm there, I never go away! *laughs* Hope that's okay lol.
With much love,
Boom#
9/19/2010 c4 BoomDarh
Mm, so this was purely brilliant! The kiss just blew my mind! ! ! Your vocabolary is so outstanding, I swear I had to stop myself and re-read the words several times, just to imprint them for own usage, oh hell yeah!
I'm new to writing :D (understood that Im usually an artist, and being an author is so different) but I'm an enthuastic Pake lover! And despite me already knowing this will be a bottom Jake -lol- I am still reading it!
It's that amazing. And yeah, I would hate myself if I didn't let you know at some point, hah.
Like you, I'm all trough an angst lover! The whole confrontation scene, and how Paul so desperately fought to finally beat into jacobs head that he's so head over devoted to him! I swallowed it raw, it was just... I've no words!
It's just brilliant! Simply brilliant and so much more! So, thank you! Thank you so much for this! It's such a pleasure to read, and such a help! Haha, I'm not english, my mother langauge is Danish, and if you know how it sounds you'll know what I mean when I say; It's so different!
Anyway... It sounds like I'm trying to talk about myself here, yay =_= Mhm, not really so - but gahh, just; amazing story! ;D Now ya know you got one more enthuiastic reader *laughs*
Take care, and my regards :D
Boom#
Mm, so this was purely brilliant! The kiss just blew my mind! ! ! Your vocabolary is so outstanding, I swear I had to stop myself and re-read the words several times, just to imprint them for own usage, oh hell yeah!
I'm new to writing :D (understood that Im usually an artist, and being an author is so different) but I'm an enthuastic Pake lover! And despite me already knowing this will be a bottom Jake -lol- I am still reading it!
It's that amazing. And yeah, I would hate myself if I didn't let you know at some point, hah.
Like you, I'm all trough an angst lover! The whole confrontation scene, and how Paul so desperately fought to finally beat into jacobs head that he's so head over devoted to him! I swallowed it raw, it was just... I've no words!
It's just brilliant! Simply brilliant and so much more! So, thank you! Thank you so much for this! It's such a pleasure to read, and such a help! Haha, I'm not english, my mother langauge is Danish, and if you know how it sounds you'll know what I mean when I say; It's so different!
Anyway... It sounds like I'm trying to talk about myself here, yay =_= Mhm, not really so - but gahh, just; amazing story! ;D Now ya know you got one more enthuiastic reader *laughs*
Take care, and my regards :D
Boom#
9/1/2010 c2 15Sakura Lisel
Wait, but isn't bella supposed to find out about werewolf imprinting before the big battle with Victoria? So unless she acutally ALREADY knows about imprinting, why'd Jake tell her he imprinted on her like she should already know what that means to her? *lol* Or like it actually should STILL matter to her, when her mind is ALREADY made up over who she already wants? *lol*
15Sakura LiselWait, but isn't bella supposed to find out about werewolf imprinting before the big battle with Victoria? So unless she acutally ALREADY knows about imprinting, why'd Jake tell her he imprinted on her like she should already know what that means to her? *lol* Or like it actually should STILL matter to her, when her mind is ALREADY made up over who she already wants? *lol*