for A Changing of the Future2/19/2012 c23 mmwaveprincess
Good story in the end. I did enjoy it though I think Newkirk turned out a little too powerful ib my opinion. Felt too much like an epic character of D&D...like above lv20 kind of thing...also I feel bad for young robert...only human in that bunch. Anyway thanks for writing this cuz it was a good story. Good night I gotta go sleep im so tired. Its twenty to one am cuz I stayed up to finish your story. Zzzzzz time for me
Good story in the end. I did enjoy it though I think Newkirk turned out a little too powerful ib my opinion. Felt too much like an epic character of D&D...like above lv20 kind of thing...also I feel bad for young robert...only human in that bunch. Anyway thanks for writing this cuz it was a good story. Good night I gotta go sleep im so tired. Its twenty to one am cuz I stayed up to finish your story. Zzzzzz time for me
2/18/2012 c10 mmwaveprincess
first off sorry for the non signed in review(again) but I'm not up to signing in right now. Still you can always pm since I really do have an account.
Anywho: awww that's so sweet of Tiger. BOY what a family that'll be. I mean think about: The Mother's a werewolf, the Dad's a Vampire(though he wasn't when the ahem deed happened), the female kid's gonna be a werewolf. But that means the son's the only non supernatrua person. The only human. I feel sorry for him already. Glad to see she loves him and I really think that's so sweet of you to give Hogan a chance to have kids even though he's dead now. So props on having it happen a few months ago when he was most assurdly human.
Second: I'd like to go kill those baddie vampires. Though being I'm only a human I'd more likely end up as their dinner. Hmm maybe I can go dig up Angel(y'know from Buffy The Vampire Slayer? And later his own show? Uhh played by what his face that David guy.) and sic him on these baddies. *still giggles*
Oh yeah no offense but if anyone is getting dragged into court...shouldn't you be for all the stuff you're putting the guys through? Oh wait I think you did go on trial. Hmmmm...Oh but um great job and as usual excuse my teenage slang. I do like this story I have to admit. It grows on you sort of.
One last thought: The last part of the chapter when I was reading the Tiger scene I had Adele's Someone Like You playing and I thought it made a halfway decent song for the mood. So gotta love Youtube...
first off sorry for the non signed in review(again) but I'm not up to signing in right now. Still you can always pm since I really do have an account.
Anywho: awww that's so sweet of Tiger. BOY what a family that'll be. I mean think about: The Mother's a werewolf, the Dad's a Vampire(though he wasn't when the ahem deed happened), the female kid's gonna be a werewolf. But that means the son's the only non supernatrua person. The only human. I feel sorry for him already. Glad to see she loves him and I really think that's so sweet of you to give Hogan a chance to have kids even though he's dead now. So props on having it happen a few months ago when he was most assurdly human.
Second: I'd like to go kill those baddie vampires. Though being I'm only a human I'd more likely end up as their dinner. Hmm maybe I can go dig up Angel(y'know from Buffy The Vampire Slayer? And later his own show? Uhh played by what his face that David guy.) and sic him on these baddies. *still giggles*
Oh yeah no offense but if anyone is getting dragged into court...shouldn't you be for all the stuff you're putting the guys through? Oh wait I think you did go on trial. Hmmmm...Oh but um great job and as usual excuse my teenage slang. I do like this story I have to admit. It grows on you sort of.
One last thought: The last part of the chapter when I was reading the Tiger scene I had Adele's Someone Like You playing and I thought it made a halfway decent song for the mood. So gotta love Youtube...
2/18/2012 c8 mmwaveprincess
Omg you killed Hochstetter! You B*****D! Sorry just couldn't resist the south park refrence there. I mean he deserved it...i think but still its shocking. I've never read anything with character death before so I'm uh not sure how to react. Well not counting 80's Arcade killing him off by looney tunes...Anyway sorry I'm kind of giggling really crazily right now because its either laugh like a looney or break down crying. Or just get scared. I'm not a fan of the major but still...did you really have to KILL him? And by vampire death by HOGAN of all people? Not even Hochstetter deserved THAT death. Personally I'd have him shot. Or hanged. No I change my mind. Shot. Yeah. Shot. I'm going to miss the Major now...sort of. *giggles manically* Uh oh my craziness is showing. I think Mueller needs to play...
Omg you killed Hochstetter! You B*****D! Sorry just couldn't resist the south park refrence there. I mean he deserved it...i think but still its shocking. I've never read anything with character death before so I'm uh not sure how to react. Well not counting 80's Arcade killing him off by looney tunes...Anyway sorry I'm kind of giggling really crazily right now because its either laugh like a looney or break down crying. Or just get scared. I'm not a fan of the major but still...did you really have to KILL him? And by vampire death by HOGAN of all people? Not even Hochstetter deserved THAT death. Personally I'd have him shot. Or hanged. No I change my mind. Shot. Yeah. Shot. I'm going to miss the Major now...sort of. *giggles manically* Uh oh my craziness is showing. I think Mueller needs to play...
2/17/2012 c7 
9mmwaveprincess
I'm determined to read your story but I'm finding it hard to just zoom through the way I do with other stories(no offense to other guys, cuz I am actually reading the stuff~). Maybe I'm still struggling with the whole supernatrual element or something but I find I need to process the information you give. Okay I don't know; I like supernatrual its just your story kinda scares me/creeps me out. That's good though so don't take this wrong! Really I'm not ragging on you or anything. I do like the story a lot. I'm just having to take it a bit at a time so I can really absorb it. It's a lot to handle. But you are a great writer and I will read your saga to the very last word. I'm sorry if I'm repeating anything. Bad habit I know, I blame it on my mom :D
Oh yeah thanks for that pm you sent! Anyway I'll read more tomorrow after I've absorbed this stuff.
9mmwaveprincessI'm determined to read your story but I'm finding it hard to just zoom through the way I do with other stories(no offense to other guys, cuz I am actually reading the stuff~). Maybe I'm still struggling with the whole supernatrual element or something but I find I need to process the information you give. Okay I don't know; I like supernatrual its just your story kinda scares me/creeps me out. That's good though so don't take this wrong! Really I'm not ragging on you or anything. I do like the story a lot. I'm just having to take it a bit at a time so I can really absorb it. It's a lot to handle. But you are a great writer and I will read your saga to the very last word. I'm sorry if I'm repeating anything. Bad habit I know, I blame it on my mom :D
Oh yeah thanks for that pm you sent! Anyway I'll read more tomorrow after I've absorbed this stuff.
4/14/2011 c23 9hogan macgyver
A great sequel! Kept the them in character very well and it was a great pick up. I couldn't put it down because all sorts of things just kept happening. Continuing on to the third :D
9hogan macgyverA great sequel! Kept the them in character very well and it was a great pick up. I couldn't put it down because all sorts of things just kept happening. Continuing on to the third :D
1/23/2011 c23 62Cruelest Sea
Hi! dangelos_song from LJ here.:D
Finally finished reading...great story! Very well written an you managed to keep the guys in character despite the very-AU nature of the story, something I could never do - excellent job!:)
62Cruelest SeaHi! dangelos_song from LJ here.:D
Finally finished reading...great story! Very well written an you managed to keep the guys in character despite the very-AU nature of the story, something I could never do - excellent job!:)
10/4/2010 c23 3BlueBassist
I loved your story! I hope you write more of these stories. Imagine if little Robert wanted to dress up as a vampire for one Halloween before he knew about Hogan! Or what if Hogan had to use his Supernatural abilities in the Stalag and all the prisoners found out? Or, or, or...There's so many possibilities! Please write some of them!
3BlueBassistI loved your story! I hope you write more of these stories. Imagine if little Robert wanted to dress up as a vampire for one Halloween before he knew about Hogan! Or what if Hogan had to use his Supernatural abilities in the Stalag and all the prisoners found out? Or, or, or...There's so many possibilities! Please write some of them!
10/4/2010 c23 33ColHogan
Loved the ending. Loved Wilhelmina's pet name. So eventually Tiger might consider becoming a vamp as well. I could see that happening since she knows she is getting older and Hogan will always be the same age. Also glad that Hogan's son knows what his father is and doesn't resent, fear or hate him for it. Same with Tiger's daughter. Sad to see this story end.
33ColHoganLoved the ending. Loved Wilhelmina's pet name. So eventually Tiger might consider becoming a vamp as well. I could see that happening since she knows she is getting older and Hogan will always be the same age. Also glad that Hogan's son knows what his father is and doesn't resent, fear or hate him for it. Same with Tiger's daughter. Sad to see this story end.
10/4/2010 c23 14Nitestalker
Bravo! What a wondwrful story and the ending... Surperb. The only part i didn't like is the fact the story is over. I hope you write more stories like this.
Thamks for writing and the adventure.
14NitestalkerBravo! What a wondwrful story and the ending... Surperb. The only part i didn't like is the fact the story is over. I hope you write more stories like this.
Thamks for writing and the adventure.
10/4/2010 c23 11Sierra Sutherwinds
You almost made me cry. This is the most beautiful finale I've ever read regarding post-war HH. Thank you for allow me to be part of it. I did have a blast collaborating with you. ;)
11Sierra SutherwindsYou almost made me cry. This is the most beautiful finale I've ever read regarding post-war HH. Thank you for allow me to be part of it. I did have a blast collaborating with you. ;)
10/3/2010 c22 14Nitestalker
i loved Tiger's surprise and Newkirk is doing better. I also likes how Klink told Hogan about the job. Thanks for the quick update.
14Nitestalkeri loved Tiger's surprise and Newkirk is doing better. I also likes how Klink told Hogan about the job. Thanks for the quick update.
10/3/2010 c22 33ColHogan
At least Hogan got to see his daughter after she was born and in six months will be a father again. So happy for him. Looks like Faust didn't take everything away from Hogan as originally thought. Can't wait to see the epilogue and meet Hogan's children.
33ColHoganAt least Hogan got to see his daughter after she was born and in six months will be a father again. So happy for him. Looks like Faust didn't take everything away from Hogan as originally thought. Can't wait to see the epilogue and meet Hogan's children.
10/3/2010 c22 11Sierra Sutherwinds
I love what you've done with this chapter! It's amazing how much you could build around the four lines I gave you. The drive on every character is impressive. And the connection with the final chapter is lovely! I can't wait to see what you come up next!
11Sierra SutherwindsI love what you've done with this chapter! It's amazing how much you could build around the four lines I gave you. The drive on every character is impressive. And the connection with the final chapter is lovely! I can't wait to see what you come up next!
10/2/2010 c21 14Nitestalker
yea! I'm glad Newkirk is alive! I would have been upset if he wasn't. Glad the badies are all gone. Thanks for the update
14Nitestalkeryea! I'm glad Newkirk is alive! I would have been upset if he wasn't. Glad the badies are all gone. Thanks for the update
10/2/2010 c21 33ColHogan
Yay! Hogan and company defeated the bad vamps. Poor Newkirk though. Hope he will recover from that injection meant for Hogan and go back to his normal self again. I loved the scene where Hogan slit his wrist so Newkirk could drink some of his blood and recover a bit. I shudder as to what that injection might have done to Hogan from Metzger's description. And I'm glad Tiger and the babies are all right. Can't wait to see what will happen with Newkirk in this condition now.
33ColHoganYay! Hogan and company defeated the bad vamps. Poor Newkirk though. Hope he will recover from that injection meant for Hogan and go back to his normal self again. I loved the scene where Hogan slit his wrist so Newkirk could drink some of his blood and recover a bit. I shudder as to what that injection might have done to Hogan from Metzger's description. And I'm glad Tiger and the babies are all right. Can't wait to see what will happen with Newkirk in this condition now.