for Make Up Sex12/29/2010 c1 
10LolaRedMuse
oooohhh! i just remembered! i did read this back in the day when u 1st posted it. sorry but it was 1 of my few creeper episodes, yes, i do creep sometimes HSS, i do...Honestly, now i dont really recall why i crept, but i did.
All in all, the Mness about it was well written but i wasnt a particular fan of this whole fic because i think it lacked a bit as to its plot. Maybe it would have worked much better as a multi-chapt, not too long but at least 3 or 4 chapts long n if so, this 1 would have been the perfect iced on the cake. u could have elaborated a bit more on the reasons for the fight, the rocky road to reconciliation n finally arrived here, where u ended up anyway. THAT would have worked much better for my taste, to add a bit more of complexity to the story.
Although the emotional callian element that u know i love so much was still present here, wich saved the story, since it was quite well written n the "smutastic" was also well constructed, so i liked this fic, but i didnt really looove it. Besides the absence of very well defined killer lines, didnt help much either. i put it like this, because i actually saw attempts of lil killers in a few paragraphs, but im not quite sure about them, so i didnt call them.
well done though, but it could have been better n it actually got better later, as u already know :)
for the record i do understand why u preferred to keep it as 1 shot instead of going long n multi, being ur 1st smut fic n all that, but this is my delayed opinion on it n i hope u find it useful.
read u around :)
10LolaRedMuseoooohhh! i just remembered! i did read this back in the day when u 1st posted it. sorry but it was 1 of my few creeper episodes, yes, i do creep sometimes HSS, i do...Honestly, now i dont really recall why i crept, but i did.
All in all, the Mness about it was well written but i wasnt a particular fan of this whole fic because i think it lacked a bit as to its plot. Maybe it would have worked much better as a multi-chapt, not too long but at least 3 or 4 chapts long n if so, this 1 would have been the perfect iced on the cake. u could have elaborated a bit more on the reasons for the fight, the rocky road to reconciliation n finally arrived here, where u ended up anyway. THAT would have worked much better for my taste, to add a bit more of complexity to the story.
Although the emotional callian element that u know i love so much was still present here, wich saved the story, since it was quite well written n the "smutastic" was also well constructed, so i liked this fic, but i didnt really looove it. Besides the absence of very well defined killer lines, didnt help much either. i put it like this, because i actually saw attempts of lil killers in a few paragraphs, but im not quite sure about them, so i didnt call them.
well done though, but it could have been better n it actually got better later, as u already know :)
for the record i do understand why u preferred to keep it as 1 shot instead of going long n multi, being ur 1st smut fic n all that, but this is my delayed opinion on it n i hope u find it useful.
read u around :)
9/5/2010 c1 11Iane Casey
*straying into uncharted fanfiction territory, lol*
By GOD, your smut is hoTT! Smuttastic, indeed! *fans myself*
I'd totally LOVE to read a Huddy fic from you! I remember that oneshot you wrote before... ^_^
Anyway, this is the first non-House fic I've read here. Lol. Hmm, wait, second! The first was the first Callian[am I right?] fic you wrote here. :D
Awesome writing!
~JiLLy
P.S. No, I don't watch LTM... but I know Cal/Gill. ;)
11Iane Casey*straying into uncharted fanfiction territory, lol*
By GOD, your smut is hoTT! Smuttastic, indeed! *fans myself*
I'd totally LOVE to read a Huddy fic from you! I remember that oneshot you wrote before... ^_^
Anyway, this is the first non-House fic I've read here. Lol. Hmm, wait, second! The first was the first Callian[am I right?] fic you wrote here. :D
Awesome writing!
~JiLLy
P.S. No, I don't watch LTM... but I know Cal/Gill. ;)
8/4/2010 c1 LIGHTNSHADOWS
Great story. Was Smutacular & Smutsational.
Great story. Was Smutacular & Smutsational.
8/1/2010 c1 29binhereb4
Hi,
As Smut fics go...I would have to say ..pretty damn SMUTASTIC...
Err...Any chance...could you possibly errr..Do some more?
Like soon...REAL SOON...lol
29binhereb4Hi,
As Smut fics go...I would have to say ..pretty damn SMUTASTIC...
Err...Any chance...could you possibly errr..Do some more?
Like soon...REAL SOON...lol
7/22/2010 c1 105LightWoman
Oh, that was great - perfectly smutastic, and I love how you took us right into the middle of a Callian relationship but where they had just been going through a rough patch - as much as I love all the fics that show them getting together, sometimes it's nice to have a change. Loved it :-)
105LightWomanOh, that was great - perfectly smutastic, and I love how you took us right into the middle of a Callian relationship but where they had just been going through a rough patch - as much as I love all the fics that show them getting together, sometimes it's nice to have a change. Loved it :-)
7/20/2010 c1 16ChocoLover1331
IT WAS SMUTASTIC :D I loved it, absolutely did, make-up sex fits them well ;)
16ChocoLover1331IT WAS SMUTASTIC :D I loved it, absolutely did, make-up sex fits them well ;)
7/20/2010 c1 20hotforteacher
I thought, no doubt about it, that it was smutastic! I love how they had already got together and that they had a fight! I would have liked to know what the fight was about, but hey, thats probably just me! Loved it!
20hotforteacherI thought, no doubt about it, that it was smutastic! I love how they had already got together and that they had a fight! I would have liked to know what the fight was about, but hey, thats probably just me! Loved it!
7/20/2010 c1 Tomellie
Smutastic indeed! Honestly that was bloody brilliant. I don't think I can say anymore *runs off for a cold shower* lol ;)
Smutastic indeed! Honestly that was bloody brilliant. I don't think I can say anymore *runs off for a cold shower* lol ;)