for Pokedex5/21 c459 ReyDelEmpire
I love this fanfic. You have an incredible imagination to make most of these up. Can't wait for your next update.
I love this fanfic. You have an incredible imagination to make most of these up. Can't wait for your next update.
5/20 c459 
5FanFactor1996
Nice Chapter about Snover. I like how you reference their ability from the games.
5FanFactor1996Nice Chapter about Snover. I like how you reference their ability from the games.
5/18 c380 MilleniaMaster
...Makes sense, actually. That could be a thing for a fan-fictions later, ha ha. This was very good. Latias is one of my favorite Pokemon.
Nice touch with the reference to movie #5. No need for a joke there; it's already done, ha ha.
...Makes sense, actually. That could be a thing for a fan-fictions later, ha ha. This was very good. Latias is one of my favorite Pokemon.
Nice touch with the reference to movie #5. No need for a joke there; it's already done, ha ha.
5/18 c458 5FanFactor1996
Nice Chapter about Mantyke. I think its interesting how a Remoraid has to be in the same party for it to evolve into Mantine, you gotta wonder how it evolves in the anime of Pokemon...I wonder if that question will ever be answered.
5FanFactor1996Nice Chapter about Mantyke. I think its interesting how a Remoraid has to be in the same party for it to evolve into Mantine, you gotta wonder how it evolves in the anime of Pokemon...I wonder if that question will ever be answered.
5/13 c448 Yugao702
Lucario is my favorite pokemon but some of these lines are just...insulting! I mean killing and selling Lucario I can...almost understand why since Pokemon are like rare animals and such but what really got me angry was the fact trainers tend to sell their corpses for scarp and replace them! To me its almost like asking to sell your own body for a couple of colorful papers! Where's the respect! the dignity for their partners! That's just wrong :(
Lucario is my favorite pokemon but some of these lines are just...insulting! I mean killing and selling Lucario I can...almost understand why since Pokemon are like rare animals and such but what really got me angry was the fact trainers tend to sell their corpses for scarp and replace them! To me its almost like asking to sell your own body for a couple of colorful papers! Where's the respect! the dignity for their partners! That's just wrong :(
5/12 c448 3Nauran
Lucario are the best at what they do. And what they do... isn't very nice.
I'm sorry, I just HAD to make that Wolverine reference after reading that their skeletal system is metallic!
Once again, a great concept for a great pokemon. You're doing amazing work here, bub.
3NauranLucario are the best at what they do. And what they do... isn't very nice.
I'm sorry, I just HAD to make that Wolverine reference after reading that their skeletal system is metallic!
Once again, a great concept for a great pokemon. You're doing amazing work here, bub.
5/12 c2 114BigSlayerGuyMan
Wait, extinct? What about that one episode in the anime where there was an entire freaking HERD of Bulbasaur?
114BigSlayerGuyManWait, extinct? What about that one episode in the anime where there was an entire freaking HERD of Bulbasaur?
5/10 c170 Tragon
This is the last one of today. I have decided that I am watching (or reading) the script of a show on National Geographic (I do not own). This sounds so factual, so real that if it happened in real life I would completely believe you. You should go offer your services to write scripts for these animal and science shows. Seriously.
My brain is fried. But I liked this chapter.
I need to become more imaginative with these reviews.
I liked this chapter.
This is the last one of today. I have decided that I am watching (or reading) the script of a show on National Geographic (I do not own). This sounds so factual, so real that if it happened in real life I would completely believe you. You should go offer your services to write scripts for these animal and science shows. Seriously.
My brain is fried. But I liked this chapter.
I need to become more imaginative with these reviews.
I liked this chapter.
5/10 c169 Tragon
What? Crobats are happy? Golbats are not?
You must have really been into personification at this stage of your life. Or really poetic because it seems that I always have a question in my reviews.
And my reviews, they are becoming more ridiculous. Where have I strayed from the path? When can I become the once useful and actual reviewer that I once was?
Using emotions was something that you haven't really touched upon in the previous chapters. Especially not on a Pokemon that is noted because it is contrasted so different emotionally (looking) than it's previous form. Not a bad start, I must say.
What? Crobats are happy? Golbats are not?
You must have really been into personification at this stage of your life. Or really poetic because it seems that I always have a question in my reviews.
And my reviews, they are becoming more ridiculous. Where have I strayed from the path? When can I become the once useful and actual reviewer that I once was?
Using emotions was something that you haven't really touched upon in the previous chapters. Especially not on a Pokemon that is noted because it is contrasted so different emotionally (looking) than it's previous form. Not a bad start, I must say.
5/10 c168 Tragon
Nearly every single chapter I want to praise you. I think I am getting seriously repetitive. Yet, I'm only on chapter 168... How am I supposed to continue to actually write a review worth reading?
I thought this chapter had a darker yet interesting theme. The hunter Ariados - the thread it shoots that makes it one of the most terrifying Pokemon to others. And because of its specialized, deadlier form of String Shoot it is able to be what many could call the ultimate hunter. It can shoot this thing from between a Pokeball. That's crazy.
Nearly every single chapter I want to praise you. I think I am getting seriously repetitive. Yet, I'm only on chapter 168... How am I supposed to continue to actually write a review worth reading?
I thought this chapter had a darker yet interesting theme. The hunter Ariados - the thread it shoots that makes it one of the most terrifying Pokemon to others. And because of its specialized, deadlier form of String Shoot it is able to be what many could call the ultimate hunter. It can shoot this thing from between a Pokeball. That's crazy.
5/10 c167 Tragon
This makes me think of Spinarak as humans because in the way they connect and how they "gossip" and extend beyond simple "practical" needs just like we have. We evolved and so have they. Yet the entire first paragraph except for the last one or two does not fit. What is with this Birdboy? What has befallen you (you don't have to answer, I know this is years ago)?
This makes me think of Spinarak as humans because in the way they connect and how they "gossip" and extend beyond simple "practical" needs just like we have. We evolved and so have they. Yet the entire first paragraph except for the last one or two does not fit. What is with this Birdboy? What has befallen you (you don't have to answer, I know this is years ago)?
5/10 c166 Tragon
I am running out of creative ways to start my reviews. I think I am going to try something. I have to start the next sentence with the last word of the previous sentence.
Ready?
Set?
Go!
Go - that's what Ledian do quite a lot, according to the Pokedex and this chapter. Chapter 166 started out quite interesting but after that it veered off the starlight idea. Idea starlight was something I would have liked to see expanded upon and so I was slightly disappointed by the last two paragraphs. Paragraph three's last sentence was not up to par as your usual last sentences are.
I am running out of creative ways to start my reviews. I think I am going to try something. I have to start the next sentence with the last word of the previous sentence.
Ready?
Set?
Go!
Go - that's what Ledian do quite a lot, according to the Pokedex and this chapter. Chapter 166 started out quite interesting but after that it veered off the starlight idea. Idea starlight was something I would have liked to see expanded upon and so I was slightly disappointed by the last two paragraphs. Paragraph three's last sentence was not up to par as your usual last sentences are.
5/10 c165 Tragon
Ledyba dice. Very clever I must say. Very clever indeed.
Are you going somewhere with Hoothoot being clocks and Ledyba dice? What's next?
The second paragraph was amazing, I must add. The game made so much sense and yet it was simple if one thinks about it. I loved that it seems so easy to play in real life. That's what so great about the execution of your ideas. They work. They're not fantasy; it's so real.
Ledyba dice. Very clever I must say. Very clever indeed.
Are you going somewhere with Hoothoot being clocks and Ledyba dice? What's next?
The second paragraph was amazing, I must add. The game made so much sense and yet it was simple if one thinks about it. I loved that it seems so easy to play in real life. That's what so great about the execution of your ideas. They work. They're not fantasy; it's so real.