for The Spirit Room10/3/2012 c7 
3Twisted Pinkie
I really want to read this story, and you want ideas. Maybe, you could do a Pocahonats type thing. With Fang as Pocahontas and Max as John Smith. Only adapted for this story. Best of luck in your writing!
3Twisted PinkieI really want to read this story, and you want ideas. Maybe, you could do a Pocahonats type thing. With Fang as Pocahontas and Max as John Smith. Only adapted for this story. Best of luck in your writing!
7/30/2012 c7 3EveryAvenue143
Ok so I know this was a long time ago since you last updated but can you please continue this story I want to know what happens! It's really good : )
3EveryAvenue143Ok so I know this was a long time ago since you last updated but can you please continue this story I want to know what happens! It's really good : )
10/29/2011 c7 Ryanyes I'm a girl
Please update!
Please update!
3/21/2011 c7 Cupcake305
Update! But don't feel rushed, 'cause I've written stories too and I didn't update for two months, and when I finally did post, I called myself a butt face and people said it was okay :) so take your time . But not toi much time.
Update! But don't feel rushed, 'cause I've written stories too and I didn't update for two months, and when I finally did post, I called myself a butt face and people said it was okay :) so take your time . But not toi much time.
2/8/2011 c7 Meme
Why won't you post :(. Posting is :)
Why won't you post :(. Posting is :)
1/14/2011 c7 43Nicolette May Summers
I have a few ideas (and thank you for the awesome update, by the way).
~Fang's mother comes in and asks Angel what's wrong. It slips out and she goes into the closet (Was it a closet?) that Max was in to get Angel's teddy bear that makes her feel better and she screams. Max's skin is familiar to her but not her clothes and the way she acts. She can tell she's an indian. She freaks out and tries to kill her with the pocket knife she was given in case of emergencies. But Fang jumps in front of her as shes about to stab her and ends up stabbing Fang's arm. Not fatal or major wound but it's still a painful wound. She hits the bone on the side of his arm because he held it up as she was about to strike. Max is amazed by this incredible act of kindness...yada yada ya...
~Max falls asleep in the closet and has a dream. In that dream she sees Fang teaching her English she learns English through that dream. Meanwhile, as whoever came down, which could've just been a soldier/person in the castle walking by, Fang, Angel and everyone picks Max up and sets her on Angel's bed. She sleeps for two whole days and wakes up able to speak in English which surprises them. Then she tells them about her long dream.
~(I forgot. Is this story no wings? If there ARE wings, then this option will work) Fang finds out Max has wings and they go flying (I don't know ... I'm really loosing my creative head juice...hehe)
~Fang's father comes in and cheers Angel up. He and everyone else leaves except Fang and Angel because Fang claims she's not over it yet and he wants to talk to her. After they leave, Max comes out and sings Angel one of her tribe's lullaby's.
~ THIS IDEA CAN BE USED AT THE END OF ALL OF THEM
Afterward, Fang finds a place in the attic of the castle for her to live for the time being and he teaches her Engish (or if you pick the one where she learns thru a dream, then he tells her stories and teaches her how to use proper English). Afterward, Fang gives her clothes to wear and she looks and talks like a prettier above normal/prettier above average girl in the kingdom. ALMOST like Princess Lissa. But she already acts better than her because Fang finds himself falling in love with Max. After giving her clothes, he teaches her how to act. After that, he has Angel (or Nudge if she's related to them. Can't quite remember. sorry! But whoever's age is closest to Max's) lie to their mom about meeting her and introduce her and ask if she can have a place to stay because her parents were killed hunting or something. And she stays there and Fang kisses her and they fall in love and yada yada ya.
How's that? PLESE PM me if you like ANY of these ideas! As soon as possible. Or after you read them. I squeezed out as much brain creativity juice as possible and worked hard! But now my creativity is dried out...but yeah! So ... PM me! And tell me when you're going to update! Thanks for the update!
43Nicolette May SummersI have a few ideas (and thank you for the awesome update, by the way).
~Fang's mother comes in and asks Angel what's wrong. It slips out and she goes into the closet (Was it a closet?) that Max was in to get Angel's teddy bear that makes her feel better and she screams. Max's skin is familiar to her but not her clothes and the way she acts. She can tell she's an indian. She freaks out and tries to kill her with the pocket knife she was given in case of emergencies. But Fang jumps in front of her as shes about to stab her and ends up stabbing Fang's arm. Not fatal or major wound but it's still a painful wound. She hits the bone on the side of his arm because he held it up as she was about to strike. Max is amazed by this incredible act of kindness...yada yada ya...
~Max falls asleep in the closet and has a dream. In that dream she sees Fang teaching her English she learns English through that dream. Meanwhile, as whoever came down, which could've just been a soldier/person in the castle walking by, Fang, Angel and everyone picks Max up and sets her on Angel's bed. She sleeps for two whole days and wakes up able to speak in English which surprises them. Then she tells them about her long dream.
~(I forgot. Is this story no wings? If there ARE wings, then this option will work) Fang finds out Max has wings and they go flying (I don't know ... I'm really loosing my creative head juice...hehe)
~Fang's father comes in and cheers Angel up. He and everyone else leaves except Fang and Angel because Fang claims she's not over it yet and he wants to talk to her. After they leave, Max comes out and sings Angel one of her tribe's lullaby's.
~ THIS IDEA CAN BE USED AT THE END OF ALL OF THEM
Afterward, Fang finds a place in the attic of the castle for her to live for the time being and he teaches her Engish (or if you pick the one where she learns thru a dream, then he tells her stories and teaches her how to use proper English). Afterward, Fang gives her clothes to wear and she looks and talks like a prettier above normal/prettier above average girl in the kingdom. ALMOST like Princess Lissa. But she already acts better than her because Fang finds himself falling in love with Max. After giving her clothes, he teaches her how to act. After that, he has Angel (or Nudge if she's related to them. Can't quite remember. sorry! But whoever's age is closest to Max's) lie to their mom about meeting her and introduce her and ask if she can have a place to stay because her parents were killed hunting or something. And she stays there and Fang kisses her and they fall in love and yada yada ya.
How's that? PLESE PM me if you like ANY of these ideas! As soon as possible. Or after you read them. I squeezed out as much brain creativity juice as possible and worked hard! But now my creativity is dried out...but yeah! So ... PM me! And tell me when you're going to update! Thanks for the update!
1/14/2011 c7 Amazingly Brillant
My ideas:
-Fang and Sam fight(misunderstanding so Max runs up and stops them)
-Ella and Iggy fall in love
-Fang's mother finds out about Max and slaps/hits her but Max doesn't hit back because she is afraid of hurting the mother(causing Fang to get mad)
-the Indian men cannot find Max so they sneak into the castle dressed in villagers clothes
-Max has a minor freak out when she sees Iggy and Fang and gets scared so Angel comforts her
My ideas:
-Fang and Sam fight(misunderstanding so Max runs up and stops them)
-Ella and Iggy fall in love
-Fang's mother finds out about Max and slaps/hits her but Max doesn't hit back because she is afraid of hurting the mother(causing Fang to get mad)
-the Indian men cannot find Max so they sneak into the castle dressed in villagers clothes
-Max has a minor freak out when she sees Iggy and Fang and gets scared so Angel comforts her