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12/9/2010 c2 Brendan Rizzo
Okay, now things are getting interesting. The forces of heaven and hell have to work together to stop an even bigger evil? This is an original idea. And I like the pacing of it; things happen very quickly, yet at the same time it doesn't come off as rushed.
Okay, now things are getting interesting. The forces of heaven and hell have to work together to stop an even bigger evil? This is an original idea. And I like the pacing of it; things happen very quickly, yet at the same time it doesn't come off as rushed.
10/15/2010 c1
1Yuki-san loves KKM
You know, as I was reading this story, there were two things that amused me. First is the story itself, you succeeded in making this story entertaining, that's for sure. Not to mention that your writing style is quite well. Then I was amused that I was enjoying it, I'm a Catholic born in a country where almost everyone has a religion, Christian or not (studying in a Catholic school too).
But as much as I'm supposed to proclaim the Word of God to everyone and all that... the quote you placed at the beginning of the story made sense. I'm impressed that you're going to try to read the Bible. Not many people do, even those that do don't understand it (and yes, the quote was right, sometimes, I don't think even the priests and ministers do). Well good luck on reading it. May God's light shine upon you (whatever you make of that).
I do apologize if anything I said was in the least bit offending, I'm not used to speaking to anyone outside my religion so I don't know what I'm supposed to say. Oh and don't worry about offending anyone, you gave as a warning, we didn't listen. Well, as usual, please update soon.
1Yuki-san loves KKMYou know, as I was reading this story, there were two things that amused me. First is the story itself, you succeeded in making this story entertaining, that's for sure. Not to mention that your writing style is quite well. Then I was amused that I was enjoying it, I'm a Catholic born in a country where almost everyone has a religion, Christian or not (studying in a Catholic school too).
But as much as I'm supposed to proclaim the Word of God to everyone and all that... the quote you placed at the beginning of the story made sense. I'm impressed that you're going to try to read the Bible. Not many people do, even those that do don't understand it (and yes, the quote was right, sometimes, I don't think even the priests and ministers do). Well good luck on reading it. May God's light shine upon you (whatever you make of that).
I do apologize if anything I said was in the least bit offending, I'm not used to speaking to anyone outside my religion so I don't know what I'm supposed to say. Oh and don't worry about offending anyone, you gave as a warning, we didn't listen. Well, as usual, please update soon.
7/23/2010 c1 Brendan Rizzo
This is interesting. There aren't that many atheist portrayals of the Bible on this site (and I'm leaning towards agnosticism myself, so I'm not offended.) This does seem reminiscent of Shin Megami Tensei or Persona though. Well, I'm interested in seeing what you do with this.
This is interesting. There aren't that many atheist portrayals of the Bible on this site (and I'm leaning towards agnosticism myself, so I'm not offended.) This does seem reminiscent of Shin Megami Tensei or Persona though. Well, I'm interested in seeing what you do with this.
