for Trading Places8/19/2010 c1 
1Broken Starwish
You shouldn't haveto dumb it down too much.It makes it seem like your dulling the quality.Other than that it's a good idea for a story.
1Broken StarwishYou shouldn't haveto dumb it down too much.It makes it seem like your dulling the quality.Other than that it's a good idea for a story.
7/25/2010 c1 7kamilolita
DAMN! Not only was this story so amazingly well written, but it was effing HOT! I REALLY like the way you characterized them in here and I don't feel that you were TOO too descriptive (although I wouldn't mind if you were, AHA!), but it made the story's plot even more enjoyable! You should reaaallly keep writing lemons (more Larxel ones pleaaaase? :"D). You're damn good at it! Naughty naughty! LOL! xD
7kamilolitaDAMN! Not only was this story so amazingly well written, but it was effing HOT! I REALLY like the way you characterized them in here and I don't feel that you were TOO too descriptive (although I wouldn't mind if you were, AHA!), but it made the story's plot even more enjoyable! You should reaaallly keep writing lemons (more Larxel ones pleaaaase? :"D). You're damn good at it! Naughty naughty! LOL! xD