for Exception7/29/2010 c1 
4H8rpatrol
I like it, keep writing, I wonder how Iggy's going to get himself out of this mess, kidnapping a girl you just met, probably isn't the best way to get to know them.
4H8rpatrolI like it, keep writing, I wonder how Iggy's going to get himself out of this mess, kidnapping a girl you just met, probably isn't the best way to get to know them.
7/24/2010 c1 utterrandomnez
I'm the first reviewer! ahhh!
That was ridiculous. I advise you write more. Pronto.
Love the concept of the story.
Some MINOR critisim: Watch out for long, wordy sentences, and awkwardly placed clauses within the sentences. They really don't appear too often and aren't all that noticeable, but by rephrasing and revising a few things here and there, you could make your writing that much better and more professional looking.
Also, mix and match sentence lengths! The words did flow, and the paragraph separations made sense, but everyone's writing can be improved.
Over all, pretty fantabulous. Keep going with this story.
I'm the first reviewer! ahhh!
That was ridiculous. I advise you write more. Pronto.
Love the concept of the story.
Some MINOR critisim: Watch out for long, wordy sentences, and awkwardly placed clauses within the sentences. They really don't appear too often and aren't all that noticeable, but by rephrasing and revising a few things here and there, you could make your writing that much better and more professional looking.
Also, mix and match sentence lengths! The words did flow, and the paragraph separations made sense, but everyone's writing can be improved.
Over all, pretty fantabulous. Keep going with this story.
7/24/2010 c1 Someone
Omfg' is there more? Wow I feel like such an epic idiot for thinking there was nothing good on fanfic. Like thank you for having the confedaince to write and put this up here. Your awesome. But seriuosly, is there more? I'm really new to fanfic and I don't know how to tell if there is, but I friggen beg you, please continue this story.
Omfg' is there more? Wow I feel like such an epic idiot for thinking there was nothing good on fanfic. Like thank you for having the confedaince to write and put this up here. Your awesome. But seriuosly, is there more? I'm really new to fanfic and I don't know how to tell if there is, but I friggen beg you, please continue this story.