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6/30/2012 c3 4weeble.san
finally i am able review!XD!
first off great use of characters. it is really difficult to work with more than 2 characters sometimes, and inoticed that you are actually useing double the amount any other fic would have! that is quite a feat! you manage the use of dialog very well too, though you might try out new ways of transitioning from sceen to sceen, and expirement with different ways to switch from character to character. find out which way works best for you! the way it is written reminds me of how a role-play sheet is set up or how a screen play is constructed, this set up is fun, interesting and quite refreshing from what i normally see :)
second, i just have to say that this is a very unique cross-over i like it becase it is so un-expected that once you read it it kind of is expected at the same time lol!(if that makes any sence) most would never think to cross ouran and digimon together, but you did.(un-expected) and you made it work becase you found the similarities between tamaki and touma! (totally expected) teehee and so far i love it can't wait for your next update!
8/8/2011 c1 Guest
RAWR! I had a dream that this happened lol! Write or I'll become Haruhi's Dad!
3/2/2011 c1 kacie
i like it very much and i hope you continue PLZ ill be uber happy:D

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