for Beast Plus Vampire8/6/2010 c1 fanofmany
Yeah I was gonna ask if Zeon was Xion or something but I saw the ending credit so yeah good job. (wonder what he will be though)
Yeah I was gonna ask if Zeon was Xion or something but I saw the ending credit so yeah good job. (wonder what he will be though)
7/27/2010 c1 
4Alhazad2003
Okay, that was an interesting beginning. Spelling and grammar were top-notch, dialogue flowed very well, (except for a couple of parts), and it was easy to follow.
One question I have, will Tsukune be appearing in this? Because I know readers frown when he's replaced by someone the author thinks is "cooler," and whatnot. That would be my only complaint. Hope to see more of this, and have a wonderful day.
4Alhazad2003Okay, that was an interesting beginning. Spelling and grammar were top-notch, dialogue flowed very well, (except for a couple of parts), and it was easy to follow.
One question I have, will Tsukune be appearing in this? Because I know readers frown when he's replaced by someone the author thinks is "cooler," and whatnot. That would be my only complaint. Hope to see more of this, and have a wonderful day.