for Legend of Zelda: Return to Darkness3/29 c7 
4Light-Sakura
You should apologized with fresh pie not soggy pie even though I love that scene! You took a long time update but a least you update and it was a great chapter too!
J'on is a amazing interrogator!
4Light-SakuraYou should apologized with fresh pie not soggy pie even though I love that scene! You took a long time update but a least you update and it was a great chapter too!
J'on is a amazing interrogator!
3/28 c7 orange
*slithers to story hungrily* Moooooooreeeeee
Lovely chappy, though a tad awkward because I thought Link was naked. Oh wellll.
UPDATEEEE
*slithers to story hungrily* Moooooooreeeeee
Lovely chappy, though a tad awkward because I thought Link was naked. Oh wellll.
UPDATEEEE
3/9 c6 8OrangeFanana
You... You should update. Like, now. I WANNA KNOw WHAT HAPPENS!
Soo, first off, I actually like the OC's to a story! That doesn't happen much. Bravo, bravo.
Second, does it make me a bad person that I reread the hurt and torture scenes a couple times? Hehe :)
8OrangeFananaYou... You should update. Like, now. I WANNA KNOw WHAT HAPPENS!
Soo, first off, I actually like the OC's to a story! That doesn't happen much. Bravo, bravo.
Second, does it make me a bad person that I reread the hurt and torture scenes a couple times? Hehe :)
10/4/2012 c6 4Light-Sakura
A journey of theirs seem not like a long journey a head if they get in to trouble so easily.
Great chapter! See you next one when you update!
4Light-SakuraA journey of theirs seem not like a long journey a head if they get in to trouble so easily.
Great chapter! See you next one when you update!
9/26/2012 c5 5Draconic
Okay, so far the setting does feel Zelda-ish, but not quite enough. Try to get to Hyrule ASAP.
5DraconicOkay, so far the setting does feel Zelda-ish, but not quite enough. Try to get to Hyrule ASAP.
7/11/2012 c5 4Light-Sakura
In the end Phane snapped and killed Bruiser which probably now thinking about is the only way to save this family and other people in the town. If he won without killing, Bruiser would probably take it out on the town. Still, Phane really needs to control is anger before something else happens that might regret.
Anyway, I'm looking forward to another great chapter!
4Light-SakuraIn the end Phane snapped and killed Bruiser which probably now thinking about is the only way to save this family and other people in the town. If he won without killing, Bruiser would probably take it out on the town. Still, Phane really needs to control is anger before something else happens that might regret.
Anyway, I'm looking forward to another great chapter!
7/4/2012 c4 Light-Sakura
It's a build up indeed! I want to read the next chapter already! So, update soon as you can because I'm looking forward to it.
The first part of the chapter wasn't bad or wonky. It was just setting up the stage for what to come it looks like to me. We readers also get a good idea what Justiciar Essen truly like from his view.
As you can like this chapter, so I'll see you next chapter!
It's a build up indeed! I want to read the next chapter already! So, update soon as you can because I'm looking forward to it.
The first part of the chapter wasn't bad or wonky. It was just setting up the stage for what to come it looks like to me. We readers also get a good idea what Justiciar Essen truly like from his view.
As you can like this chapter, so I'll see you next chapter!
5/29/2012 c3 Light-Sakura
Looks like Link and a specially Phane are in trouble.
Great chapter!
I like Phane and Link reaction to J'on. It was pretty funny and a normal response for their situation.
"I'm pretty sure you want to see his daughter, don't you?" Phane snidely commented." I actually like the fact that Link never caught on to his remark. It was funny!
You also made a mistake in the first paragraph "He was lying down on a bad" I'm think you meant bed.
Again, great chapter and looking forward to the next as well. This fanfiction is very interesting and very well written.
Looks like Link and a specially Phane are in trouble.
Great chapter!
I like Phane and Link reaction to J'on. It was pretty funny and a normal response for their situation.
"I'm pretty sure you want to see his daughter, don't you?" Phane snidely commented." I actually like the fact that Link never caught on to his remark. It was funny!
You also made a mistake in the first paragraph "He was lying down on a bad" I'm think you meant bed.
Again, great chapter and looking forward to the next as well. This fanfiction is very interesting and very well written.
5/28/2012 c2 Light-Sakura
I just found this today, so I never read your original. So, far I like it! It's interesting and I do hope you keep it up!
Looking forward to your next chapter!
I just found this today, so I never read your original. So, far I like it! It's interesting and I do hope you keep it up!
Looking forward to your next chapter!
7/29/2010 c1 dark knight986
Whoo! Just finished reading it, and it's very impressive. The story flowed much better, and I'll tell you what, I really like the characters a lot more this time around. Link is SO much better in this than your last version, and I like how you totally reinvented Phane. Anyways, the fight scenes are your trademark, and I don't think I can find anyone as good as you are at writing them, and it's about time you got to blow something up, lol. That justicar sounds like bad news, that's for sure. I wonder what's going to happen now with Link realizing that he has to save Phane? Damn cliffhangers, update this already...
And with that I'm done with reviewing this... time for some cold pizza and a beer.
Whoo! Just finished reading it, and it's very impressive. The story flowed much better, and I'll tell you what, I really like the characters a lot more this time around. Link is SO much better in this than your last version, and I like how you totally reinvented Phane. Anyways, the fight scenes are your trademark, and I don't think I can find anyone as good as you are at writing them, and it's about time you got to blow something up, lol. That justicar sounds like bad news, that's for sure. I wonder what's going to happen now with Link realizing that he has to save Phane? Damn cliffhangers, update this already...
And with that I'm done with reviewing this... time for some cold pizza and a beer.
7/28/2010 c1 Antelieris
I helped you break through your writer's block! Yay me!
I sure hope this is the final incarnation, because it's been restarted a lot. On the bright side, every time you post a chapter, it's visibly an improvement in quality over the previous chapter, and this one's no different. Starting with a strong chapter like this means there's much to look foward to.
On the other side of the coin, I noticed you misspelled "gilded" twice. You said "glided." Ain't I a jerk for pointing that out? (It's alright everyone, I mess with him like this often offline.)
Side note: If you blow up swiss cheese, you won't have any more holes, because the cheese is now nothing more than dust.
I helped you break through your writer's block! Yay me!
I sure hope this is the final incarnation, because it's been restarted a lot. On the bright side, every time you post a chapter, it's visibly an improvement in quality over the previous chapter, and this one's no different. Starting with a strong chapter like this means there's much to look foward to.
On the other side of the coin, I noticed you misspelled "gilded" twice. You said "glided." Ain't I a jerk for pointing that out? (It's alright everyone, I mess with him like this often offline.)
Side note: If you blow up swiss cheese, you won't have any more holes, because the cheese is now nothing more than dust.